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To all those that Dare (Marriage) -See note
Trome, I offer you my hand and heart
In other words, I give up and you do too
Finally, we nevertheless dared to anyway
To enter into a marriage union
We will arrange everything right away
I'm very exciting and very pretty
Not sure you can handle me yet
But now you are in my Captivity
And to what has been proposed, add
UNUSUAL PLACES and NEW POSITIONS
Look at My Diagnosis, you will see
Crazy, stubborn, insatiable, strange
Peculiar, deviant, depraved, sarcastic
Don't pretend you didn't know before
I look VERY STUNNING in this dress
You get access to my Femininity,
But I get to own Your... Masculine
You picked a photographer
But I like Black and white photography
And at the reception we will dance
Let's Tango! Trome
At the wedding A 'simple' kiss twice
To s(t)eal the deal, In the vows
I promise to be Obedient to you
With BOOTY LIKE A DRUG
We decided to cater Sex at Waffle House
You said it was cheaper at Midnight Girl
Honeymoon is in the WILDERNESS
And you said I have to PARK MY BIKE
I told you that I am the Ocean
So you will surely drown
In the Heavy drops of words
Mutation of hearts happens slowly
A Soul requires cutting
So we spent lots of time trying
And I told you to get My Tampon
You are Jealous of my power
A Cup of coffee does not save
You need to kill Weeds in the yard
You tell me to go cook dinner
and I say Listen to my silence
After many years have passed
We went to counseling, and you
said we made REAL PROGRESS
I said Listen to my silence (with Reading)
After the divorce was finalized
Many Thoughts in an abandoned house
It felt like Another reality long ago
But It was not a dream, a nightmare
Just a poetry whore in Dark Alleys now
Don't measure me by my thoughts :)
In other words, I give up and you do too
Finally, we nevertheless dared to anyway
To enter into a marriage union
We will arrange everything right away
I'm very exciting and very pretty
Not sure you can handle me yet
But now you are in my Captivity
And to what has been proposed, add
UNUSUAL PLACES and NEW POSITIONS
Look at My Diagnosis, you will see
Crazy, stubborn, insatiable, strange
Peculiar, deviant, depraved, sarcastic
Don't pretend you didn't know before
I look VERY STUNNING in this dress
You get access to my Femininity,
But I get to own Your... Masculine
You picked a photographer
But I like Black and white photography
And at the reception we will dance
Let's Tango! Trome
At the wedding A 'simple' kiss twice
To s(t)eal the deal, In the vows
I promise to be Obedient to you
With BOOTY LIKE A DRUG
We decided to cater Sex at Waffle House
You said it was cheaper at Midnight Girl
Honeymoon is in the WILDERNESS
And you said I have to PARK MY BIKE
I told you that I am the Ocean
So you will surely drown
In the Heavy drops of words
Mutation of hearts happens slowly
A Soul requires cutting
So we spent lots of time trying
And I told you to get My Tampon
You are Jealous of my power
A Cup of coffee does not save
You need to kill Weeds in the yard
You tell me to go cook dinner
and I say Listen to my silence
After many years have passed
We went to counseling, and you
said we made REAL PROGRESS
I said Listen to my silence (with Reading)
After the divorce was finalized
Many Thoughts in an abandoned house
It felt like Another reality long ago
But It was not a dream, a nightmare
Just a poetry whore in Dark Alleys now
Don't measure me by my thoughts :)
Written by
KristinaX
Published 3rd Mar 2021
| Edited 4th Mar 2021
Author's Note
The BOLD, and title, are all titles for various poems by myself and Trome (32 in total). Thank you! Trome for those poems where you included or wrote about me AGAIN. :) Fun reads. I hate being in debt so here is my latest offering. It's atrocious and I promise I am not like the bad things depicted at all. lol! I wanted to put something fun out there after my last one. If it gets some laughs then my work is done; not really... Still way behind but I tried damnit! AND WE ARE NOT GETTING A DIVORCE ;)
The ones in CAPS are Trome's (also Dark Alleys) except 'UNUSUAL PLACES and NEW POSITIONS'. Includes my last 27 (-3 +1) and Trome's last 12 (-5).
Exceeded the character limit so please look them up if you want to see the poems referenced. Inspired by Trome's MARRIAGE PROPOSAL comp.
The ones in CAPS are Trome's (also Dark Alleys) except 'UNUSUAL PLACES and NEW POSITIONS'. Includes my last 27 (-3 +1) and Trome's last 12 (-5).
Exceeded the character limit so please look them up if you want to see the poems referenced. Inspired by Trome's MARRIAGE PROPOSAL comp.
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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Re. To all those that Dare (Marriage) -See note
3rd Mar 2021 8:08pm
I love that I can see your previous poems in this. Damn Kristina, you write so well. I love this and I do look forward to your writing.
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Re: Re. To all those that Dare (Marriage) -See note
Thank you so much for the awesome compliments Lj. This was inspired by Trome's MARRIAGE PROPOSAL competition and being in debt as mentioned in the note. :p That means so much to me that you look forward to my writing. That definitely makes it worthwhile. 💒👰🏻🍾☠️
Re. To all those that Dare (Marriage) -See note
3rd Mar 2021 8:47pm
Great incorporating write ... it is so seamless ... great flow .... tells a story ... pulled me in ... kept me there ... good luck on the comp ...
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3rd Mar 2021 8:53pm
Thank you so much LDF for the feedback. I was worried about flow and such things. I never ever thought I would enter a competition, had never planned to but since it inspired this I went ahead and did anyway. ugh! I love that it pulled you in and kept you there. Hopefully it was funny too. lol 💒👰🏻🍾☠️
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3rd Mar 2021 9:16pm
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3rd Mar 2021 10:22pm
This might make a good poem for couples to read in premarital counseling...long before they take the blind leap into the dark where ideals, blindness, and ignorance won't build a stable and lasting bridge called "Happy forever after." As usual, a great write by YOU. Hugs and peace, oral
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Re: Re. To all those that Dare (Marriage) -See note
3rd Mar 2021 10:37pm
LOL! That's my goal to help the world create happy couples by showing how bad it can be. :p Required reading. Thank you so much for the great compliment. I am so happy you found this one worthy of premarital counseling. 💒👰🏻🍾☠️
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3rd Mar 2021 10:45pm
Much of premarital counseling is textbook jargon, "pie in the sky" based on the premise that "You fall in love" which is a negative start, instead of "Falling up the love." "10 Little Rules" for living happily ever after in a crazy failed commitment world. Again, a great poem! xoxo, hugs and peace, Oral
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Re. To all those that Dare (Marriage) -See note
Another classic from the Pulitzer prize Author for depraved family relations specializing in chronic bad behavior in marriage.
Damn that's a mouthful ...
No comment
Well you've done it again
Brought us to our knees in laughter
More he said
Hope you had a pre-nup
BIG LIKE
Damn that's a mouthful ...
No comment
Well you've done it again
Brought us to our knees in laughter
More he said
Hope you had a pre-nup
BIG LIKE
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Re: Re. To all those that Dare (Marriage) -See note
4th Mar 2021 00:15am
Depraved family relations specializing in chronic bad behavior. Yeah, I guess that does sound like me, um Thanks! I think. :p There are lots of things that are a mouthful and that's one of them. Others, well no comment. Bringing people to their knees or getting on my knees is a specialty. Anti-Khrist 2021. He did say that.... It's shiny and made of steel. (never mind forget that). L word the BIG LIKE! 💒👰🏻🍾☠️
Re. To all those that Dare (Marriage) -See note
4th Mar 2021 00:08am
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4th Mar 2021 00:11am
I will keep fighting the good fight and going after what I need. Or at least what I think I need. :p Thanks Francisco, I am really happy you liked it. 💒👰🏻🍾☠️
Re. To all those that Dare (Marriage) -See note
Wow! Kx, this is a very creative idea by using titles from previous poems to formulate this very entertaining submission.
A very clever write that was masterfully interwoven into a brilliant poem.
The ''originality'' of such a write makes me smile and once again you certainly deliver with this fun filled poetry.
It truly takes a very sharp wit and talent to pull so many titles together and produce sheer innovative brilliance.
Good Luck in the Comp!
Enjoyable Excellence!
A very clever write that was masterfully interwoven into a brilliant poem.
The ''originality'' of such a write makes me smile and once again you certainly deliver with this fun filled poetry.
It truly takes a very sharp wit and talent to pull so many titles together and produce sheer innovative brilliance.
Good Luck in the Comp!
Enjoyable Excellence!
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4th Mar 2021 2:06pm
As always, you bring your beautiful perspective to your awesome comment. It makes me feel really good, this one kind of hit me like a freight train like usual but I hoped it would get some creativity points. :p And I felt like it was pretty funny but I have never been married and divorced so maybe not. ugh! Anyway I had hoped it would be funny. I don't even remember how the idea came to mind, just started writing and that happened. lol Thank you so much for kind words and feedback. I really loved hearing you thought it was creative and innovative. Thank you so much. 💒👰🏻🍾☠️
Re. To all those that Dare (Marriage) -See note
4th Mar 2021 7:44am
Dear K and T,
WAIT!!!! WHAT??? I didn’t even know...how did you two love birds meet??? Congratulations on your nuptials!
WAIT!!!! WHAT???
What am I reading and re-reading??
Oh dear I am a dazy dum dum. I really thought you two got married and I, moi, me, did not have any inside scoop!
THEN...
The words of the poem sank in and I began to understand. Now that the shock of your elopement is over 😉 and I see your extremely clever use of poem titles to create this wonderfully clever poem...it all comes together. Awesomely creative. Hands down, after I stop throwing wedding rice. Very very clever. I’m enchanted by your use of the titles to write this in such a flowing manner. Something borrowed something blue. I know I’m still on that...letting go now.
Great write. H🌷
WAIT!!!! WHAT??? I didn’t even know...how did you two love birds meet??? Congratulations on your nuptials!
WAIT!!!! WHAT???
What am I reading and re-reading??
Oh dear I am a dazy dum dum. I really thought you two got married and I, moi, me, did not have any inside scoop!
THEN...
The words of the poem sank in and I began to understand. Now that the shock of your elopement is over 😉 and I see your extremely clever use of poem titles to create this wonderfully clever poem...it all comes together. Awesomely creative. Hands down, after I stop throwing wedding rice. Very very clever. I’m enchanted by your use of the titles to write this in such a flowing manner. Something borrowed something blue. I know I’m still on that...letting go now.
Great write. H🌷
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Re: Re. To all those that Dare (Marriage) -See note
We met in a dark alley Deep Underground I think. lol I might have to write out some nuptials. lol Then you can say this girl is batshit crazy. Just in case you don't already.
Ooooo re-reading - I like the sound of that. ;P What? Just some crazy Frankenstein's monster that poured out from the mad scientist part of my brain.
LOL! I run from the M word. :p But in this case... I just had to go there; it was inspired by the M PROPOSAL competition after all. lol
I do like shocking you. ;) I am so happy you found it creative and clever; I thought so but what do I know. Awesomely creative is even better. Now I feel like maybe I was right after all. Enchanted and flowing, you are the best - I love that... Thank you so much for yet another awesome comment as always. 💒👰🏻🍾☠️
Ooooo re-reading - I like the sound of that. ;P What? Just some crazy Frankenstein's monster that poured out from the mad scientist part of my brain.
LOL! I run from the M word. :p But in this case... I just had to go there; it was inspired by the M PROPOSAL competition after all. lol
I do like shocking you. ;) I am so happy you found it creative and clever; I thought so but what do I know. Awesomely creative is even better. Now I feel like maybe I was right after all. Enchanted and flowing, you are the best - I love that... Thank you so much for yet another awesome comment as always. 💒👰🏻🍾☠️
Re. To all those that Dare (Marriage) -See note
Dear Kristina, this is a clever piece. I too love how the titles of both your poems are woven into the text. It is a fun read. I am glad that writing it lifted your spirits as much as it did mine. Bravissima ❣️❣️
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4th Mar 2021 11:05pm
Well I am beyond happy if it lifted your spirits GW. I know you lift so many spirits around here including mine. Clever, creative, and fun is what I was going for. :p Thank you so much for the comment and feedback. 💒👰🏻🍾☠️
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5th Mar 2021 00:38am
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7th Mar 2021 7:48am
Wonderful work Kristina, weaving your titles into the piece and sounding so effortlessly.
Always great to see how two poets connect at such an elevated level of artistic passion and spiritual light.
Best of luck in the comp.
Always great to see how two poets connect at such an elevated level of artistic passion and spiritual light.
Best of luck in the comp.
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Re: Re. To all those that Dare (Marriage) -See note
7th Mar 2021 2:08pm
I love that you think it sounds effortlessly. :) It was fun to write, the title thing just sort of happened when I started writing and then I just kept putting more and more in as I went along. I only made 2 small edits and a title correction so the writing did not take any effort but that's usually how it goes with my writing. It's something different so I like that. 'elevated level of artistic passion and spiritual light' I love that so much. So beautifully said. :) 💒👰🏻🍾☠️
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8th Mar 2021 4:03am
As others have posted, incredibly clever and unique. Amazing skill to weave your titles (of two poets) into a captivating read of love and love lost. You’ve conquered another style of writing. Witty and clever, had me smiling throughout.
Um, do I get back my wedding present? Be careful what you write…..! – “So, you are single now?!” The suitors are overjoyed! LOL! You haven’t updated your profile (second thoughts?). : )
Um, do I get back my wedding present? Be careful what you write…..! – “So, you are single now?!” The suitors are overjoyed! LOL! You haven’t updated your profile (second thoughts?). : )
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8th Mar 2021 12:57pm
Clever and unique; that's me. ;) And I love captivating too. Thank you so much for the wonderful feedback and compliment DaVinci. Conquered, I love that word too and I really hoped to get some smiles out of this one, so consider that a win. :)
Depends on the present, which one was yours? Am I ever careful what I write? Well, yes sometimes... haha, no comment... (third and fourth thoughts too) 💒👰🏻🍾☠️
Depends on the present, which one was yours? Am I ever careful what I write? Well, yes sometimes... haha, no comment... (third and fourth thoughts too) 💒👰🏻🍾☠️
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20th Mar 2021 1:46pm
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20th Mar 2021 7:43pm
Thank you so much Buddydog! I hope you enjoyed this one, it was fun to write. :) 💒👰🏻🍾☠️
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Re: Re. To all those that Dare (Marriage) -See note
28th Sep 2022 2:06pm
Haha, I have to admit it was a hell of a lot of titles and from two specific people so I was pretty happy it worked. I wrote it really fast and without effort interestingly enough. I did not even start with the idea of doing that it just happened. But that's how I write, it just hits me. Comes from God knows where. But I think it worked which was weird honestly... Anyway I hope it was more than a bit humorous though. lol It was meant to be.