DECOMPOSITION

Lovely, Kumar!

Danke, Jaragorn!

That opening line just grabs you from the get go (hence why I’m here when I saw it in latest poems!)

This is beautiful in its analysis of what love is. Yes there is beauty in the wonder of it all, but there’s also beauty in falling apart, and this piece explores that well.

I thought this was a wonderful example of brevity. Thank you for sharing.

-M

You are most welcome. This was one of those that just poured out quickly, with very little editing.

I like this.

Thank you!

You always blow me away Kumar
Yes yes yes!
Ty for letting me wear this smile I now have ear to ear.
🌹
xo

Always is a powerful word. Thank you for such a blessing.

This is gorgeous. Your use of words like “terrifying” and “decompose” is a fantastic juxtaposition to the entire theme of love. You were my favorite minimalist writer when I came to DU and you continue to be. Always a pleasure to read you.

Ah E, you honor me with such words. Some love is a dark prism- great for poems, questionable for sanity.

Love this.
Again... amazing work Kumar.

Thank you c_f. We live poetry. I just feel blessed that sometimes I can catch a little of it this way.

Wow.
I don't want to ruin it by commenting too much. Just gonna sit & enjoy this. ❤

Thanks k!