Two Graves Senryu

Creative Senryu!!!
Luna you crushed it with this imaginative write.
Your climactic last line drives the final nail into the coffin of this excellent poem.
Brilliant!!!

Thank you for your kind words, as always!

Confucious say well done, Luna.

Thank you, JB!

I love me some terrific senryú!
Wonderfully penned, Luna
The visual is perfectly done 👌🏻
Ty for sharing
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Thank you so very much, Blue 💜!

Dear L,

Yep!

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PS if I could say anything better than what’s stated above I would but they already took the good words. 😉

Thank you so much, Honoria 💜

I like this a lot.

Thank you, Remy!

Beautiful to read with a true message.  This is amazing.

Thank you so much for the RL and for the kind words!

This is great. Love the cover art.

Thank you, Adagio!

I'm intrigued, and scared.
Great work Luna!

Thank you Wally!

Bloody damn good

Thank you so much!

Absolutely perfect. The visual and words are very powerful. Good luck in the Competition. This is definitely a winner!

Thank you so much 💜

Cyclical. Good take on a classic