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Two Graves Senryu
Published 2nd Mar 2021
Author's Note
Written for Adiago’s Haiku comp and the Haiku group’s March theme: hostility.
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2nd Mar 2021 5:57am
Creative Senryu!!!
Luna you crushed it with this imaginative write.
Your climactic last line drives the final nail into the coffin of this excellent poem.
Brilliant!!!
Luna you crushed it with this imaginative write.
Your climactic last line drives the final nail into the coffin of this excellent poem.
Brilliant!!!
2nd Mar 2021 1:04pm
Anonymous
2nd Mar 2021 11:00am
Confucious say well done, Luna.
2nd Mar 2021 1:04pm
2nd Mar 2021 1:21pm
I love me some terrific senryú!
Wonderfully penned, Luna
The visual is perfectly done 👌🏻
Ty for sharing
🌹
Wonderfully penned, Luna
The visual is perfectly done 👌🏻
Ty for sharing
🌹
4th Apr 2021 10:04pm
2nd Mar 2021 5:38pm
Dear L,
Yep!
H🌷
PS if I could say anything better than what’s stated above I would but they already took the good words. 😉
Yep!
H🌷
PS if I could say anything better than what’s stated above I would but they already took the good words. 😉
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17th Mar 2021 3:38pm
Absolutely perfect. The visual and words are very powerful. Good luck in the Competition. This is definitely a winner!
17th Mar 2021 10:49pm
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