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IS IT POSSIBLE TO BE REAL  

I PROMISE TO YOU...that I found in you someone that one person who is willing and able to be real with me. I PROMISE TO YOU...to respect that you are a woman someone precious as gold, someone to cherish and appreciate with deepness of emotions and feelings wrapped up in rare and real love. For if not for the kind of women's that you're where would I be as a man who was raise by a strong woman. I PROMISE TO YOU...to listen before I speak to get a clearer understanding of what, you are trying to communicate to me as a man, so as to have and to get me to understand your hurt and pain and suffering when you feel afraid and scare and alone. I PROMISE TO YOU...to love you as a woman who has seen the good and bad and ugly side of love, due to words spoken by another man that held no true, commitment and consistency and communications with no honor and devotion and understanding with respect. I PROMISE TO YOU...to be faithful and loyal to you as your man constantly, showing my real appreciation for the woman that you are to me. For it was your attitude towards me that made me see things, differently through open eyes not the eyes of my past hurt and pain touching and pulling at the very core of my heart and soul making me believe. That there isn't no more women's like you within this crazy mix up world. I PROMISE TO YOU...IT'S JUST ME AND YOU AGAINST THE WORLD AS STEEL AND STONE, LIKE A HAMMER IS TO A NAIL BUILDING OWN HOUSE INTO A HOME OF LOVE AND HONOR, AND DEVOTION AND UNDERSTANDING WITH RARE AND REAL LOVE AND RESPECT.
Stoney223
Written by Stoney223
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LET'S ASK THYSELF COULD YOU KEEP THIS KIND OF PROMISE IF IT MEANT LIVING AND WORKING AND GROWING TOGETHER AS ONE WOMAN AND ONE MAN TRUSTING ONLY THYSELF ALONG WITH THE PROCESS OF THE HEART AND SOUL...
LET'S ASK THYSELF COULD YOU KEEP THIS KIND OF PROMISE IF IT MEANT LIVING AND WORKING AND GROWING TOGETHER AS ONE WOMAN AND ONE MAN TRUSTING ONLY THYSELF ALONG WITH THE PROCESS OF THE HEART AND SOUL AND SUBCONSCIOUSNESS OF YOUR MIND...STONEY BAY
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