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Gallo's
I feel
a tightening
in my throat
as I take
those thirteen steps
and I watch
the sunset
wondering if
I shall
see it rise
a tightening
in my throat
as I take
those thirteen steps
and I watch
the sunset
wondering if
I shall
see it rise
Published 1st Mar 2021
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1st Mar 2021 10:49pm
Wasn't there an ancient legend about those who survive a hanging are allowed to live? That is what this reminded me of, Terry. Very powerful punch.
2nd Mar 2021 6:52pm
