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Commanded

Slide in
Dive in
Deeper, till Iím drowning
Holding you tight while youíre riding
Got me so high like Iím flying
Pussy so good itís got me crying
Caressing head and shaft with every stroke
One hand pulls hair as the other chokes throat
Nice and slow, then hard and fast
Barely holding my ground while youíre throwing that ass
You put me on my knees and make me feed
I get lost in greed as I taste every need
With glaze and cream
Satisfying every wet dream
3Xs youíve reached your limit
But you wonít stop until I give it
I breathe in deep and hold you close
As I make that face you love the most
Iíve lost all control
As the moment takes hold
I canít hold it no more, Iíve got to let go!
I release and moan
You keep sucking till itís gone
Twitching from your persistence
I can give no further resistance
Youíve been a goddess and IÖ only man
Thereís no disappointment when youíre in command
FreeLove87
Written by FreeLove87 (SamuraiEde)
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