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Commanded

Slide in
Dive in
Deeper, till I’m drowning
Holding you tight while you’re riding
Got me so high like I’m flying
Pussy so good it’s got me crying
Caressing head and shaft with every stroke
One hand pulls hair as the other chokes throat
Nice and slow, then hard and fast
Barely holding my ground while you’re throwing that ass
You put me on my knees and make me feed
I get lost in greed as I taste every need
With glaze and cream
Satisfying every wet dream
3Xs you’ve reached your limit
But you won’t stop until I give it
I breathe in deep and hold you close
As I make that face you love the most
I’ve lost all control
As the moment takes hold
I can’t hold it no more, I’ve got to let go!
I release and moan
You keep sucking till it’s gone
Twitching from your persistence
I can give no further resistance
You’ve been a goddess and I… only man
There’s no disappointment when you’re in command
Written by FreeLove87 (SamuraiEde)
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