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Thoughts of having no purpose
In the midst of the darkness, I looked up at the ceiling while I was laying in my bed. It almost felt like it grew further and further away, until I was nothing more than a small spec in the universe. Maybe that's all I am. Just a tiny grain of sand on the beach of life. If I disapear it won't make a difference.
Published 1st Mar 2021
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I think we've all felt something simular before.
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1st Mar 2021 5:30pm
Yes, we all at times feel insignificant.
But like the sand on the beach, we may transform but we don't disappear. You could end up on a beach elsewhere or be transformed into a champagne glass. Good or bad you will be part of the whole. : )
But like the sand on the beach, we may transform but we don't disappear. You could end up on a beach elsewhere or be transformed into a champagne glass. Good or bad you will be part of the whole. : )
1st Mar 2021 7:21pm
Love the empty desperation feel
Almost feels peaceful in a twisted way
BIG LIKE
Almost feels peaceful in a twisted way
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1st Mar 2021 7:59pm
it's that shared experience of feeling so small and insignificant that's binding, in our humanity.
A difficult emotion, yes... but you convey it with heartfelt precision....
Ty for sharing, Meganne
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A difficult emotion, yes... but you convey it with heartfelt precision....
Ty for sharing, Meganne
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1st Mar 2021 10:35pm
Dear M,
It’s waking up each morning and asking “am I done yet?” I really liked the use of your grain of sand metaphor. Feeling that small, sadly I know that feeling and it’s ironic how feeling that small carries an emotion that is giant sized. As per, your voice is so straight forward and so relatable.
H🌷
It’s waking up each morning and asking “am I done yet?” I really liked the use of your grain of sand metaphor. Feeling that small, sadly I know that feeling and it’s ironic how feeling that small carries an emotion that is giant sized. As per, your voice is so straight forward and so relatable.
H🌷
