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True Colours.
there's honesty in
the shades, hues, depths or brightness
those are real tells
Written by
Bluevelvete
Published 1st Mar 2021
Author's Note
©Blu2021
pic: "True colors" via Pinterest
pic: "True colors" via Pinterest
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Re. True Colours.
1st Mar 2021 5:19am
I’ve been told I look good in the shade. : )
Ah yes, the details speak as if they are under Oath.
Ah yes, the details speak as if they are under Oath.
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Re: Re. True Colours.
1st Mar 2021 5:44am
lol... I bet you do look gorgeous in the shade, Leo ;)
Yes, it's the that exactly, my friend... the details.
I am thankful you stopped by, as I do enjoy your visits, so... xoxo
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xo
Yes, it's the that exactly, my friend... the details.
I am thankful you stopped by, as I do enjoy your visits, so... xoxo
🌹
xo
Re. True Colours.
1st Mar 2021 5:24am
The pieces was there, but with that pic the tightness was locked in. That pic gives us so many ideas and they're all as naughty and manipulative as this piece states. Total tightness
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Re: Re. True Colours.
1st Mar 2021 5:45am
Is there anything better than Total tightness??
🤷🏻♀️
Nope.
Ty, my lovely friend
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xo
🤷🏻♀️
Nope.
Ty, my lovely friend
🌹
xo
Re. True Colours.
1st Mar 2021 5:26am
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1st Mar 2021 5:45am
Re. True Colours.
1st Mar 2021 5:31am
I love the message. Though the words are weighted with beauty the picture is perfect.
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Re: Re. True Colours.
1st Mar 2021 5:47am
Hi there Lj :)
Thank you so much for reading and your thoughtful comments. I'm glad you enjoyed it and the picture was a must! I found it and it screamed my name... I appreciate you.
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xo
B
Thank you so much for reading and your thoughtful comments. I'm glad you enjoyed it and the picture was a must! I found it and it screamed my name... I appreciate you.
🌹
xo
B
Anonymous
- Edited 9th Apr 2022 5:45am
1st Mar 2021 5:46am
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Re: Re. True Colours.
1st Mar 2021 5:49am
Hey there, James
Ty so much for reading and your thoughts... short and sweet is kinda my favorite...
I love seeing you, and you're always welcome here
🌹
xo
Ty so much for reading and your thoughts... short and sweet is kinda my favorite...
I love seeing you, and you're always welcome here
🌹
xo
Re. True Colours.
1st Mar 2021 6:42am
People show their true colors, when their life is on the line. Keep on writing.
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Re: Re. True Colours.
1st Mar 2021 6:46am
You got that right, Francisco.
I believe it's also when they think no one is looking, too. That always when you can see the truth.
I thank you for reading and your thoughtful remarks!
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I believe it's also when they think no one is looking, too. That always when you can see the truth.
I thank you for reading and your thoughtful remarks!
🌹
Re. True Colours.
1st Mar 2021 6:46am
Susan you are Amazing!
Your ability to impact so profoundly in poetry in a mere 17 syllables is mind boggling.
Superstar!!!
Your ability to impact so profoundly in poetry in a mere 17 syllables is mind boggling.
Superstar!!!
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Re: Re. True Colours.
Awww, Ron... Ty so much for saying so.. that really truly means the world. I love these senryú and I have been trying to improve my writing skills within their structure, for months now... so I'm taking your comments and holding them dear.
Lol..... really!!
I appreciate the list add and all that Ron, kindness
🌹 💜 🌹
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Much love,
xo
Susan
Lol..... really!!
I appreciate the list add and all that Ron, kindness
🌹 💜 🌹
🌈
Much love,
xo
Susan
Anonymous
- Edited 18th Nov 2021 8:45pm
1st Mar 2021 6:58am
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Re: Re. True Colours.
Ty so much for reading, RiAN
It's sometimes a hard lesson learned as well. The hiding of one's true nature, in portrayal of something completely different to the world at large, it's still surprising to me THAT is a preferred modus operandi for anyone, really. I agree with you, it's the light that's so satisfyingly sanitizing. They say sunshine is the best disinfectant!! 👍🏻 ☀
I'm appreciative of your thoughtful comments and love your visits so much!
Much love,
🌹 💜 🌹
xoxo
It's sometimes a hard lesson learned as well. The hiding of one's true nature, in portrayal of something completely different to the world at large, it's still surprising to me THAT is a preferred modus operandi for anyone, really. I agree with you, it's the light that's so satisfyingly sanitizing. They say sunshine is the best disinfectant!! 👍🏻 ☀
I'm appreciative of your thoughtful comments and love your visits so much!
Much love,
🌹 💜 🌹
xoxo
Re. True Colours.
1st Mar 2021 7:42am
Re: Re. True Colours.
Oooo.. good catch!
Yeah, that's completely true, it's slightly subjective, JM. I am of the mind that it's about reflecting a truth of character. That someone's 'real' tells are structured within their nature and they reflect their truth outward because there's no choice... it's who and what they are, it's innate. Otherwise it's completely disingenuine...and manipulative.
Ty for reading and leaving your thoughts ;)
I'm so appreciative!
You're always welcome here.
Much love and respect,
🌹
xo
Yeah, that's completely true, it's slightly subjective, JM. I am of the mind that it's about reflecting a truth of character. That someone's 'real' tells are structured within their nature and they reflect their truth outward because there's no choice... it's who and what they are, it's innate. Otherwise it's completely disingenuine...and manipulative.
Ty for reading and leaving your thoughts ;)
I'm so appreciative!
You're always welcome here.
Much love and respect,
🌹
xo
Re. True Colours.
1st Mar 2021 8:25am
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1st Mar 2021 9:41am
Re. True Colours.
1st Mar 2021 8:54am
People tend to show their true colours when things are at their darkest, weird the darker it gets the more visible their colours are
Love and light
Ron xx
Love and light
Ron xx
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Re: Re. True Colours.
Thank you for reading and your generous list add, my friend! I agree... I also believe the darker and harder it gets, the more real and honest those colors become... it's telling of character, imo
How you portray yourself outward to others vs the actual colours....
Much love and respect,
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xo
How you portray yourself outward to others vs the actual colours....
Much love and respect,
🌹
xo
Anonymous
- Edited 23rd May 2024 11:45am
1st Mar 2021 10:39am
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Re: Re. True Colours.
1st Mar 2021 3:20pm
Good afternoon Ethan :)
I too, believe that the deepest character of a person is truly visible when there are circumstances out of their control. You can always see flashes of honesty that flare bright, too... giving you an idea .. imo.. Sometimes for the good, sometimes for the bad. It's when the ability to be one thing to some but then in reality, be diametrically the opposite, THAT'S what's so brutal...
I choose the real tell, too. If anything, I'm too much of "I wear my heart on my sleeve" kinda gal ... lol
Thanks for the thoughtfulness and lovely kindness.
Your presence is always welcomed!
Much love,
🌹
-🐝
Xo
I too, believe that the deepest character of a person is truly visible when there are circumstances out of their control. You can always see flashes of honesty that flare bright, too... giving you an idea .. imo.. Sometimes for the good, sometimes for the bad. It's when the ability to be one thing to some but then in reality, be diametrically the opposite, THAT'S what's so brutal...
I choose the real tell, too. If anything, I'm too much of "I wear my heart on my sleeve" kinda gal ... lol
Thanks for the thoughtfulness and lovely kindness.
Your presence is always welcomed!
Much love,
🌹
-🐝
Xo
Re. True Colours.
1st Mar 2021 6:56pm
Dear BV,
How beautifully balanced.
I couldn’t help but wonder throughout the write about the hypocritical metaphor. I kept thinking of my own true colors and how I display them. I noticed I have a particular set of hues for customer service reps, especially those not particularly service oriented or helpful...I have a set of hues for those I don’t particularly trust...another set for those I can trust and finally a set for “just get me through this and out of here” situations. There might be a fading set reserved just for me but I have trouble seeing those. I like this poem because it’s so packed with meaning by its striking contrast in its brevity. Stunning piece. H🌷
How beautifully balanced.
I couldn’t help but wonder throughout the write about the hypocritical metaphor. I kept thinking of my own true colors and how I display them. I noticed I have a particular set of hues for customer service reps, especially those not particularly service oriented or helpful...I have a set of hues for those I don’t particularly trust...another set for those I can trust and finally a set for “just get me through this and out of here” situations. There might be a fading set reserved just for me but I have trouble seeing those. I like this poem because it’s so packed with meaning by its striking contrast in its brevity. Stunning piece. H🌷
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Re: Re. True Colours.
1st Mar 2021 9:34pm
My lovely Honoria
Good afternoon! 🍹
Let me just say that I adore your H, introspection. You being as amazing as you are, YOU have me viewing my piece from a different perspective, via our "layers" of true colors that we flash depending upon particular circumstances. We as human beings are more complex than my mind's eye gave us credit for.. lol... duh, right?! Of course we are!!
I'm still such a trusting rube, even after 48 years of walking on this planet, my instincts (even with my past and it's deep scarring) are to believe that even with the layers, there's still that intrinsic nature of we are who we are, at our very core. Some of us seem to hide their innate goodness beneath their layers and some hide the fact that they're not good at all. I guess it's just the nature of human beings, maybe? Yet my sensitivity will always leave me having a problem wrapping my heart and mind around those humans who are that despicable dichotomy of the latter, I have had enough of those peeps to last me a lifetime... NEXT, Please!!.. hahaha... You're always so sweet and a freaking breath of fresh air. I thoroughly enjoy your visits, and you leave me thinking... which I completely appreciate.
Ty for that and for you.
Much love and respect,
🌹
xo
Susan
Good afternoon! 🍹
Let me just say that I adore your H, introspection. You being as amazing as you are, YOU have me viewing my piece from a different perspective, via our "layers" of true colors that we flash depending upon particular circumstances. We as human beings are more complex than my mind's eye gave us credit for.. lol... duh, right?! Of course we are!!
I'm still such a trusting rube, even after 48 years of walking on this planet, my instincts (even with my past and it's deep scarring) are to believe that even with the layers, there's still that intrinsic nature of we are who we are, at our very core. Some of us seem to hide their innate goodness beneath their layers and some hide the fact that they're not good at all. I guess it's just the nature of human beings, maybe? Yet my sensitivity will always leave me having a problem wrapping my heart and mind around those humans who are that despicable dichotomy of the latter, I have had enough of those peeps to last me a lifetime... NEXT, Please!!.. hahaha... You're always so sweet and a freaking breath of fresh air. I thoroughly enjoy your visits, and you leave me thinking... which I completely appreciate.
Ty for that and for you.
Much love and respect,
🌹
xo
Susan
Anonymous
- Edited 28th Apr 2021 11:45am
1st Mar 2021 8:00pm
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Re: Re. True Colours.
1st Mar 2021 9:16pm
That's my FAVORITE kind of response... You just made my day, there... lol. Knowing but not really knowing why? Can't quite put your finger on it...??
It's a bit ambitious...
I think that's aok... in fact, to feel several different feelings is more of a compliment, imo.
Thank you for reading, the list add and all your kindness shown, this afternoon.
I hope you stick around awhile and I look forward to seeing you and your generous nature, your own writing, soon!!
Much love and respect,
🌹
xo
B
It's a bit ambitious...
I think that's aok... in fact, to feel several different feelings is more of a compliment, imo.
Thank you for reading, the list add and all your kindness shown, this afternoon.
I hope you stick around awhile and I look forward to seeing you and your generous nature, your own writing, soon!!
Much love and respect,
🌹
xo
B
Re. True Colours.
1st Mar 2021 10:17pm
Excellent minimalist write ... the perfect amount of words ... for the perfect poem .. that speaks more than a tome ...
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Re: Re. True Colours.
1st Mar 2021 11:27pm
Thank you for reading and the generous list add, LilD. It's these senryú that have burrowed into me.... so I really am appreciative of your thoughtful comments 🙏
🌹
xo
🌹
xo
Re. True Colours.
2nd Mar 2021 1:39am
Re: Re. True Colours.
2nd Mar 2021 1:32pm
Ty so much for reading and your lovely comments, my friend... I enjoy having a visit :)
🌹
xo
🌹
xo
Re. True Colours.
2nd Mar 2021 9:11pm
a million shades of gray or a million hues of color is the world and all of us ... Nice ... Bless and love ... .
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Re: Re. True Colours.
2nd Mar 2021 9:36pm
My dearest FeNyX,
You're absolutely spot on, there. Yet we all have control on just how our colors are perceived...or in some cases, hidden. I love love love having you visit 🙏
Ty, my lovely friend
🌹
xo
You're absolutely spot on, there. Yet we all have control on just how our colors are perceived...or in some cases, hidden. I love love love having you visit 🙏
Ty, my lovely friend
🌹
xo
Re. True Colours.
3rd Mar 2021 00:47am
Hues and shades sometimes tell more than brutal ''straight'' colors. They offer more possibilities, give you more to think about..
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Re: Re. True Colours.
3rd Mar 2021 1:58am
Hi Robert :)
We're all full of complicated colors, me thinks.
It's the ones that portray themselves outwardly one way or in one color but are really just full of another color altogether, that I don't have time for. Be real and honest, imo. I enjoy authenticity, not manipulation or drama..... Who does?!?!
Only my thoughts and silly 2cents.
I agree with you as well though, hues and shades are a bit more thought provoking, indeed ;)
🌹
Love your visits, my friend
xo
We're all full of complicated colors, me thinks.
It's the ones that portray themselves outwardly one way or in one color but are really just full of another color altogether, that I don't have time for. Be real and honest, imo. I enjoy authenticity, not manipulation or drama..... Who does?!?!
Only my thoughts and silly 2cents.
I agree with you as well though, hues and shades are a bit more thought provoking, indeed ;)
🌹
Love your visits, my friend
xo
Re. True Colours.
3rd Mar 2021 3:02am
hmmmm....this has me thinking in lots of different directions. yes, there is honesty in seeing all the different variations of color. but also..lots can be hidden within that variation. things that aren't brought to our attention until we shine light on them.
i'll have to think on this a bit more.
i'll have to think on this a bit more.
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Re: Re. True Colours.
3rd Mar 2021 3:09am
I love that comment, just so very much...!!
Ty for reading, 🌼
Nothing better than having to ponder a bit ;)
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xo
Ty for reading, 🌼
Nothing better than having to ponder a bit ;)
🌹
xo
Re. True Colours.
6th Mar 2021 5:02am
I liked that, as if the truth lies beneath the facade. Great picture to accompany the piece.
Well done.
Well done.
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Re: Re. True Colours.
6th Mar 2021 5:09am
Ohhh EXACTLY!
Ty for getting it :)
I appreciate you reading and
taking the time to comment, Wally.
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Ty for getting it :)
I appreciate you reading and
taking the time to comment, Wally.
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