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Hunger Moon Breathing
upon late Winter’s horizon
blushes the Hunger Moon;
she rests among sleeping skeletons,
inhaling all that remains
of her Sun’s faded, drowsy glow
~just so she may whisper truly
to his fevered brow ~
exhaling her glittered starlight
on long, cool breaths
blushes the Hunger Moon;
she rests among sleeping skeletons,
inhaling all that remains
of her Sun’s faded, drowsy glow
~just so she may whisper truly
to his fevered brow ~
exhaling her glittered starlight
on long, cool breaths
Published 28th Feb 2021
| Edited 1st Mar 2021
Author's Note
Inspired by this piece of graphic art I made in a Corel class that I found while arranging old art folders on my laptop. Tonight, I watched the Full Hunger Moonrise and it was beautiful. This felt fitting for a lot of reasons.
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28th Feb 2021 6:32am
Luna, this celestial poem is fascinating.
Your solar and lunar metaphoric transition displays masterful creativity....
''inhaling all that remains of her sun’s faded, drowsy glow''
Your luminous poetry is a shining inspiration!
''her glittered starlight
on long, cool breaths''
Breathtaking Poetry!!!
Your solar and lunar metaphoric transition displays masterful creativity....
''inhaling all that remains of her sun’s faded, drowsy glow''
Your luminous poetry is a shining inspiration!
''her glittered starlight
on long, cool breaths''
Breathtaking Poetry!!!
28th Feb 2021 4:45pm
Anonymous
28th Feb 2021 1:38pm
Yours is the caliber of writing that I marvel at with such wonder, beauty and inspiration. This poem is just so perfectly crafted from the first word to the last. Truly gorgeous and such a pleasure to read.
Ty for sharing, Luna
🎑
xoxo
🌹
Ty for sharing, Luna
🎑
xoxo
🌹
28th Feb 2021 4:47pm
Well, I just so happen to think the very same of your writing. Thank you so much, Blue!
1st Mar 2021 00:42am
I see the tree hugging the moon, pleading for it to stay. Fantastic art and beautiful poem.
1st Mar 2021 4:26am
1st Mar 2021 6:20pm
Dear L,
There’s poetry and then there’s POETRY! This write is the inspiration for the all caps moniker. I saw the moon. I just said “how gorgeous is that moon?!” You saw the moon and created art. I bow down as I humble back away...
Beautiful write as per my friend.
H🌷
There’s poetry and then there’s POETRY! This write is the inspiration for the all caps moniker. I saw the moon. I just said “how gorgeous is that moon?!” You saw the moon and created art. I bow down as I humble back away...
Beautiful write as per my friend.
H🌷
1st Mar 2021 10:44pm
It was a breathtaking moon, wasn’t it? Thank you so very much for the RL and for your kindness, as per 💜💜💜
4th Mar 2021 5:31pm
It's pretty beautiful and haunting expression of the moon. It's very intriguing and the visual compliments it perfectly.
Great work Luna.
Great work Luna.
17th Mar 2021 10:48pm
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