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Dark Moon
Radiant
Translucent
Evvervesent
Waterfall of cohesion
Tramples the senses
Leaves me breathless
Stalking a dark moon
Translucent
Evvervesent
Waterfall of cohesion
Tramples the senses
Leaves me breathless
Stalking a dark moon
Author's Note
Sensual, Sensory, Succulent
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Re: Re. Dark Moon
24th Feb 2021 8:47am
Re. Dark Moon
Anonymous
24th Feb 2021 9:07am
I like the moon & like this poem too! cowboy!
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Re: Re. Dark Moon
24th Feb 2021 12:30pm
Re. Dark Moon
24th Feb 2021 12:31pm
good morning dearest Poet this is gorgeous
seems we are on similar wavelengths today
you of the moon me the sun...
beautiful write ❤
seems we are on similar wavelengths today
you of the moon me the sun...
beautiful write ❤
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Re: Re. Dark Moon
24th Feb 2021 12:35pm
Good Morning Brenda
I appreciate the read and RL add
Most of all, your comment !!
Stay tuned
More to come
Xx
I appreciate the read and RL add
Most of all, your comment !!
Stay tuned
More to come
Xx
Re: Re. Dark Moon
24th Feb 2021 12:35pm
Re. Dark Moon
24th Feb 2021 8:56pm
Re: Re. Dark Moon
24th Feb 2021 9:28pm
Re: Re. Dark Moon
24th Feb 2021 9:33pm
I had to get that one out. I remembered how you briefly told me about your BIG LIKE thing in my comment forum. I thought it would be funny.
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Re. Dark Moon
24th Feb 2021 9:43pm
Here is my BIG LIKE poem from a few days ago explaining all my thoughts on the RL. When I saw your comments Speakeasy last night I jumped all over it.
Hopefully for the last time.....
BIG LIKE
As most of you poets know
If I like your poem
At the end
I'll write
Like
It's a little icing on the cake
Kind of my signature approval
Not quite like the dreaded RL
Which is now overused and worthless
As I see it anyway
Thinking about it recently
I've decided to split the difference
Now if I really like something
You're going to get a BIG LIKE
In all CAPS for emphasis
The beauty of the BIG LIKE
It's non-traceable
Has no avatar
It's sweet like pie
You'll feel special
I'm always in trouble
Or making it
I have to be different
A creator
It's broken and I'm fixing it
Written by PoetSpeak
Published 21st Feb 2021
Poems by Author
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#gratitude
Hopefully for the last time.....
BIG LIKE
As most of you poets know
If I like your poem
At the end
I'll write
Like
It's a little icing on the cake
Kind of my signature approval
Not quite like the dreaded RL
Which is now overused and worthless
As I see it anyway
Thinking about it recently
I've decided to split the difference
Now if I really like something
You're going to get a BIG LIKE
In all CAPS for emphasis
The beauty of the BIG LIKE
It's non-traceable
Has no avatar
It's sweet like pie
You'll feel special
I'm always in trouble
Or making it
I have to be different
A creator
It's broken and I'm fixing it
Written by PoetSpeak
Published 21st Feb 2021
Poems by Author
Edit Edit Multimedia Bump
#gratitude
Re. Dark Moon
Anonymous
24th Feb 2021 10:45pm
oooooh yeah!
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Re. Dark Moon
2nd Mar 2021 4:58pm
There is a certain mystery and allure to a dark moon and you really brought this out.
Nicely done sir.
Nicely done sir.
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Re: Re. Dark Moon
2nd Mar 2021 5:15pm