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Lazy River -
lazy river
running through
fertile grounds,
tasting the dust
and carrying
moments of truth
to their birth,
to their death,
feel that
glorious life
like blood trembling
from each
passing wound,
running down hill.
running through
fertile grounds,
tasting the dust
and carrying
moments of truth
to their birth,
to their death,
feel that
glorious life
like blood trembling
from each
passing wound,
running down hill.
Published 24th Feb 2021
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24th Feb 2021 5:05am
Dear BP,
Wonderful and beautiful metaphors throughout plus great formatting to resemble a flowing river!! How clever and thoughtful all rolled into one great write.
H🌷
Wonderful and beautiful metaphors throughout plus great formatting to resemble a flowing river!! How clever and thoughtful all rolled into one great write.
H🌷
24th Feb 2021 8:20am
Thank you Honoria, I'm glad you read and commented while dipping your toes into the waters of possibilities.
24th Feb 2021 9:18am
Tasting the dust and carrying moments of truth
This river's flow reminds me of this man's journey thru life
I always like good rhythms that lend themselves to introspection
Thank You
This river's flow reminds me of this man's journey thru life
I always like good rhythms that lend themselves to introspection
Thank You
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