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Ashes of A Soul
Gaze
upon
an absent
haze-faced angel
searching safe embrace.
Guardian’s blind eye
brings forth disgrace.
Sinless soul
set to
blaze.
upon
an absent
haze-faced angel
searching safe embrace.
Guardian’s blind eye
brings forth disgrace.
Sinless soul
set to
blaze.
Published 23rd Feb 2021
| Edited 24th Feb 2021
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24th Feb 2021 00:00am
24th Feb 2021 2:41pm
Wow ... this does everything a short poem must do ... great flow ... jagged line breaks ... a sprinkle of rhyme ... just right ... with such a powerful message ... splendid write ...
24th Feb 2021 9:25pm
I love your short poem. Very few words. The thing about short poems that keep them together is the glue of descriptive words which just gives them a folding hug and wraps them tightly together. -SOTJ-
