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Thoughts in an abandoned house

How much sadness in these forgotten ones
Our abandoned buildings and houses!
The windows are broken, the doors are clogged
Sad shadow of wilting ...

In old and abandoned
our houses
someone else's smell,
unusual and strange
To infinity
space scope,
crumpled lines
And the
strangeness of desires
obsession and oppression,
crushing the debris
glass and showers,
crunchy underfoot,
tearing themselves
the cobweb snares
Wonders: faces,
mourners over us,
someone's saints
on a plywood base,
looks averted
Blurry highlights
former shades,
colors and patterns,
as if again
dancing around ...
Dust!
Only dust
and broken glass
All the rest
almost ephemeral
Fiction and reality
messed up
Faded
time drags on
Oh how overwhelming
our relationship!
And how disproportionate
our future
lost in the past
distant, perhaps
forever forgotten
How close we are
in spirit and flesh
hammered by us
rotten boards
on the wild hunt ...
KristinaX
Written by KristinaX
Published
Author's Note
Thank you Poetspeak for allowing me to use one of your incredible original paintings to compliment and enhance this. Many more paintings along with some really great writing can be found by following...
Thank you Poetspeak for allowing me to use one of your incredible original paintings to compliment and enhance this. Many more paintings along with some really great writing can be found by following the link. :)
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poets/PoetSpeak/
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