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Gogyoshi Poem, Nr.14 Evening Togetherness
We were lost in different novels
experiencing parallel universes
when I asked Jeeves to make us a pot of tea;
got up and made it myself and all
in the same room under the same moon.
experiencing parallel universes
when I asked Jeeves to make us a pot of tea;
got up and made it myself and all
in the same room under the same moon.
Written by
Josh
(Joshua Bond)
Published 22nd Feb 2021
| Edited 11th Mar 2024
Author's Note
Gogyoshi Poem Nr.13 can be found here:
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/410856-gogyoshi-poem-nr-13-back-up/
Gogyoshi Poem Nr.15 can be found here:
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/422436-gogyoshi-poem-nr-15-tech-disbelief/
(photo credit: Savannah Theis, [family collection])
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/410856-gogyoshi-poem-nr-13-back-up/
Gogyoshi Poem Nr.15 can be found here:
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/422436-gogyoshi-poem-nr-15-tech-disbelief/
(photo credit: Savannah Theis, [family collection])
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Re. Gogyoshi Poem, Nr.14 Evening Togetherness
22nd Feb 2021 10:38pm
Re: Re. Gogyoshi Poem, Nr.14 Evening Togetherness
1st Mar 2021 10:32pm
Re. Gogyoshi Poem, Nr.14 Evening Togetherness
22nd Feb 2021 11:09pm
They're indeed a great company when we're with them but in another parallel universe Josh. Just don't ask them to do anything ☺️
Loved the moment you brought to us here.
Loved the moment you brought to us here.
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Re: Re. Gogyoshi Poem, Nr.14 Evening Togetherness
1st Mar 2021 10:34pm
Thank you CF. Occasionally I threaten the cat by saying we'll get a dog to put her in her place -- and she just looks at me -- then I drop the idea :))
Re. Gogyoshi Poem, Nr.14 Evening Togetherness
23rd Feb 2021 1:02am
Re: Re. Gogyoshi Poem, Nr.14 Evening Togetherness
1st Mar 2021 10:35pm
I guess the hat might have / should have been a deerstalker for Jeeves' approval :))
Re. Gogyoshi Poem, Nr.14 Evening Togetherness
Dear J,
I really enjoyed the peek into this charming snippet of a contented home life. And dont worry! Jeeves turned me down flat at my attempt to lure him away and make tea for me. Dang it!
Sweet write. H🌷
I really enjoyed the peek into this charming snippet of a contented home life. And dont worry! Jeeves turned me down flat at my attempt to lure him away and make tea for me. Dang it!
Sweet write. H🌷
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Re: Re. Gogyoshi Poem, Nr.14 Evening Togetherness
1st Mar 2021 10:38pm
Ah well, Jeeves the world over have their standards you know. One miaow or raised eyebrow and you know that's it.
Re. Gogyoshi Poem, Nr.14 Evening Togetherness
24th Feb 2021 5:11pm
There is something ethereal about this one, Josh. It contains an Eastern influence much like Basho's did, of a simple observation expressed simply, and yet, profoundly.
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Re: Re. Gogyoshi Poem, Nr.14 Evening Togetherness
1st Mar 2021 10:39pm
Thank you for the complement. I guess it was somehow as you describe it - an insightful perception :))
Re. Gogyoshi Poem, Nr.14 Evening Togetherness
24th Feb 2021 10:20pm
Animals make the best friends...but Ill make my own coffee Josh. LOL
🙏 Harry
🙏 Harry
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Re: Re. Gogyoshi Poem, Nr.14 Evening Togetherness
1st Mar 2021 10:40pm
Thank you Harry. I'll remember that about coffee - it's all about boundary management. :)) ☕
Re. Gogyoshi Poem, Nr.14 Evening Togetherness
Anonymous
25th Feb 2021 00:39am
The cats never do anything I ask them to. You'd think I'd have a chance with 30 of them in the house, but ... no. Nice rug pull from under our feet.
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Re: Re. Gogyoshi Poem, Nr.14 Evening Togetherness
1st Mar 2021 10:42pm
Thank you JB. I've had cats most of my life, hoping something about having a superior air might rub off on me - it hasn't worked.
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Anonymous
2nd Mar 2021 00:00am
It's usually just hair that rubs off.
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Re: Re. Gogyoshi Poem, Nr.14 Evening Togetherness
1st Mar 2021 10:47pm
Thank you Ethan. Yeah well cats, I mean, I've always had cats and have thought of getting a dog for 40 years to balance the house dynamics but somehow I think it might all go pear-shaped. :(( RL appreciated 🙏
Re. Gogyoshi Poem, Nr.14 Evening Togetherness
2nd Mar 2021 1:27am
Not sure why I'm picturing your cat with a bowtie.
Humorous and interesting Josh. It's a nice little peek into an evening in your house.
Humorous and interesting Josh. It's a nice little peek into an evening in your house.
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2nd Mar 2021 9:32am
Re. Gogyoshi Poem, Nr.14 Evening Togetherness
6th Mar 2021 6:43pm
Woah super cool and light! Fantastic snapshot of a moment in words. I talk to cats too sometimes and they give me sniffs and rubs instead. Kudos for this muse.
Plz do read and comment my newest poem too.
Plz do read and comment my newest poem too.
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Re: Re. Gogyoshi Poem, Nr.14 Evening Togetherness
6th Mar 2021 9:34pm
Thank you for visiting & commenting, Zaynab. Cats are cool in their interactions with humans.