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The Baby's Sock
the floods came
water overflowing riverbanks
debris floated down
a child's sock
floated lonesome by
jogging her memories
the sacrifices she made
the child she lost
the man who left
T'was all over now
her life almost over
only taunting memories remained
Published 20th Feb 2021
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Narrative Poem/Word play
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20th Feb 2021 6:04pm
Ohh this packs a punch deeply... it reminds me of tsunami images in Thailand from 2004...
Wow Grace.... you elicit it perfectly, in such succinct brevity.
I can feel the ache.
Ty for sharing with us 🙏
xo
-B
Wow Grace.... you elicit it perfectly, in such succinct brevity.
I can feel the ache.
Ty for sharing with us 🙏
xo
-B
20th Feb 2021 11:42pm
So long ago. Thanks for always being with me, Blue. Yes and remember Typhoon Haiyan in the Phillipines...so near home.🌹
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