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billingsgate
fuck you
and your fucking shit stain’d fingernails
for what you did
corpulent cunt
i’ve seen you kiss your mother on her mouth
you piss breath’d land whale i shiver to see you
blubbering
there are not the fucking words for you
you cretinous
child
and your fucking shit stain’d fingernails
for what you did
corpulent cunt
i’ve seen you kiss your mother on her mouth
you piss breath’d land whale i shiver to see you
blubbering
there are not the fucking words for you
you cretinous
child
Written by
anna_grin
(ANNAN)
Published 19th Feb 2021
| Edited 20th Feb 2021
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Re. billingsgate
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I think the only way you could turn this into a poem of some sort is to change the descriptions of said cretin at the end. good vent tho
I think the only way you could turn this into a poem of some sort is to change the descriptions of said cretin at the end. good vent tho
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19th Feb 2021 6:52pm
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19th Feb 2021 6:56pm
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20th Feb 2021 9:37am
WTF?
Are you saying that this can only be a poem if the last word of the sentence rhymes with the previous sentence?
Try reading a lot more of the posted poems and where does the description as a child become a multiple?
I can honestly admit to being averse to rhyming as a poetic form as most rhyming is little more than the drivel produced by greetings card companies.
Few authors can create good rhyming poetry but the authors here at least write with passion even if not with rhyme.
Richard
Are you saying that this can only be a poem if the last word of the sentence rhymes with the previous sentence?
Try reading a lot more of the posted poems and where does the description as a child become a multiple?
I can honestly admit to being averse to rhyming as a poetic form as most rhyming is little more than the drivel produced by greetings card companies.
Few authors can create good rhyming poetry but the authors here at least write with passion even if not with rhyme.
Richard
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20th Feb 2021 9:51am
Re. billingsgate
19th Feb 2021 7:28pm
rock n roll - wouldn't want to be on the other end of that set of arrows. good luck if you decide to enter it.
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Re. billingsgate
19th Feb 2021 11:52pm
The emotion is great in this poem (and billingsgate is such a great word).
What I am not clear about is what the trigger was for this raw outburst. I think context would really help.
What I am not clear about is what the trigger was for this raw outburst. I think context would really help.
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20th Feb 2021 2:15am
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20th Feb 2021 2:24am
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20th Feb 2021 2:26am
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20th Feb 2021 2:29am
Well I didn't see the previous version but this one's very to the point. Was there even more bile then?
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Re. billingsgate
20th Feb 2021 9:14am
I read this because I was reminded of a visit to Billingsgate market when I was about 12 or 13.
I read it because of that.
I don't know what it pertains to but a fantastic piece of work.
Richard
I read it because of that.
I don't know what it pertains to but a fantastic piece of work.
Richard
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Re: Re. billingsgate
20th Feb 2021 9:23am
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25th Feb 2021 3:16am
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