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My Soft Locks
Come bring me your aching heart
Where souls blended so beautifully like a Picasso's work of art
Grasp your hand in mine
Soaring as we once defined the creation of time
Kismet Karma now stands so still
Three wishes in life to covet thy will
Hushed breaths are now at rest
Stalwart passion drifts, yet
Desires and rapture to the loins, to make one's handsome virility swoon and softly melt,
At best, mmm... tenderly felt
My honeyed scent you shall always inhale
Your last wish ordained as you toss that silver coin in that wishing well
Where souls blended so beautifully like a Picasso's work of art
Grasp your hand in mine
Soaring as we once defined the creation of time
Kismet Karma now stands so still
Three wishes in life to covet thy will
Hushed breaths are now at rest
Stalwart passion drifts, yet
Desires and rapture to the loins, to make one's handsome virility swoon and softly melt,
At best, mmm... tenderly felt
My honeyed scent you shall always inhale
Your last wish ordained as you toss that silver coin in that wishing well
Author's Note
I wrote this on Tuesday evening as I was getting my hair cut… it’s like a piece of me went with my natural locks, if I was in Haiti, this never would be permitted, we view, well my family does, hair as strength, devotion, and honor unto our Creator. I mailed what little strands and some locks I could accumulate from off the floor of my stylist's basement salon, and sent them certified by mail to my grann… Oo... I would not want to be a Ladybug on the wall once she gets it.., it was too heavy on my neck when I worked-out. I am in trouble that I know.. oh well that's life, right
Be advised this is a gif and the sun suppose to be streaming...
SKC
Be advised this is a gif and the sun suppose to be streaming...
SKC
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Re. My Soft Locks
18th Feb 2021 10:58pm
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19th Feb 2021 2:36am
Well isn't this a pleasant surprise to have my handsome Big Apple come all they way to the Upper East Side and grace my canvas with such a manly approval for me to relish in and blush in reverence. I am wishing you a warm and caressing evening in our city that never sleeps, and may you have a rooting tooting TGIF.. cheers my poet...🍷 ... no worries, it's on the house, and please be safe out there as well
Re: Re. My Soft Locks
19th Feb 2021 2:41am
Re: Re. My Soft Locks
19th Feb 2021 3:18am
You are not that far from than, how interesting my poet.. When I relocated from Philly for my job position, New York boroughs are by numbers you can be in Bronx and the in Times square, depending on the traffic and honking horns in no time... we must do lunch one day, seriously my treat.. enjoy
Re. My Soft Locks
19th Feb 2021 3:49am
Would you wear a wig for me my Erotic Queen of Love? Great poem. Keep on writing.
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19th Feb 2021 6:12pm
Please tell me you are joking, a wig, I am still feeling somewhat melancholy for cutting my hair after twenty-eight years, and I do not think a wig will make me feel any less better, not when I have a head full of natural hair.... Thanks you for reading my handsome poet and enjoy your TGIF for all its worth, and may you have a beautiful upcoming weekend
Re: Re. My Soft Locks
20th Feb 2021 3:08am
Yes I will have great weekend with you on my mind my Erotic Queen of Love.
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Re: Re. My Soft Locks
20th Feb 2021 3:28am
Well thank you very much my handsome poet as I extend to you a great conclusion to the evening and have restful weekend in the making
Re. My Soft Locks
21st Feb 2021 6:17am
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24th Feb 2021 1:59am
What a beautiful recommendation and how fitting my poet, thank you.. however, my grann.. bless her soul lit my ear up in her native dialect, which is hard to understand at times.. But I understood it quite well enough to know.. I was not forgiven for such a carless act accordantly to her shrewd words.. She will come around.. she always does, and she will be in the USA on my graduation.. hopefully my hair will grow back.. at least some of it.. thank you for allowing me to borrow your eyes... now hair layers her back and silver. Have a great evening and a beautiful Wednesday (Hump Day)
Re. My Soft Locks
21st Feb 2021 2:22pm
You are as brave as you are talented. There I some things I'd have never owned up to with my grandmother, even at half a century of age. Her displeasure carries just that much power. I applaud your practicality.
Even with shortened tresses, and though no longer in Haiti, your erotic spells still have their full power
Even with shortened tresses, and though no longer in Haiti, your erotic spells still have their full power
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24th Feb 2021 2:03am
I think I just fell in love with you my poet.. your sweet sentiment is like silk to my ears and tenderly felt to my heart... wow... I am wishing you a very engaging evening and wishing you receive all the spiritual blessings Heaven can bestow on you you when you are least expecting it.. I am bidding you a great evening, and a super duper Wednesday (Hump Day)🌹