Heavy drops of words (with reading)

Great write awesome read
Love it
Love the reading poetry, it brings them to life
Love and light
Ron xx

So happy you like these Ron. It's feedback and encouragement like that which keeps them coming on occasion. You give me confidence! Really happy you liked the write and got something extra out of the reading. :) ☔💖

Kristina, it’s really beautiful and deserves to be read.
Apologies for not getting around to reading you sooner, I’m delighted I did today

Hi Gin! Thank you so much for the really wonderful compliment! That makes me so happy. Nothing to apologize for, I have not read you yet and I feel bad about that but I will definitely check out what you have going on very soon. :) I am pretty much always challenged on reading time but I try. And hope to contribute something with writing at the very least. I really love that you read and liked this one. ☔💖

Such pain and poignancy, Kristina...a beautiful reading.

🙏 Harry

Thank you so much Harry. I am always happy to see you and for your wonderful comments. And I am really glad you enjoyed this reading. :) ☔💖

The rain is a beautiful thing that share with your mate.  Keep on writing.

I agree Francisco, the rain is beautiful and clean and fresh; it should be enjoyed whether it be alone or with someone special. :) Thank you for the comment. ☔💖

Dear K,

In answer to your last stanza I say do both. Sit alone under the stars and enjoy the magnificent beauty of those galaxies. Then go home put your sweatpants on, make a delicious cup of hot chocolate, climb into bed and wait for those miracles, great and small, to come your way.
Heavy drops of words, a phrase of great analogy. Words can be ungodly heavy and hurtful. Yet without them we can’t tell you how wonderful a poem this is, or how talented we think you are. Ugh, what a conundrum. Today, I chose words that only say how, yet again, your insightful poem and its powerful message has altered my universe. H🌷

That is great advice Honoria. Not really a sweat pants girl though; I like the cold to much. lol hot chocolate (dark) and miracles let's definitely do that. :) I am happy you like the analogy and they definitely can be hurtful and heavy in so many ways. Sometimes someone may not even fully understand how much they are affecting someone with their words and actions. Even to the point of making them give up something they enjoy. You are super sweet Honoria. I love that you think I am talented. I love that you were so moved by this! Thank you so much. ☔💖

From the background sound, picture, the great voice tone in reading, to the words, this is an excellent poem. Look forward to your future poems. Hugs and peace, oral

Thank you so much Oral, I am really happy you thought it all came together well. :) I appreciate your sweet feedback and support a lot! Extra hugs... ☔💖

You are more than welcome...deserving. Keep them coming. You have set a high standard for yourself, which is great. Hugs and peace, oral

Palpable emotional vulnerability and candor. I love your vocal rendering. 💖🙏

Thank you so much Daniel, it is really great to hear from you and I hope you are recovering well. I never expect a comment but I always love and appreciate them so much. Thank you for continuing to give me feedback especially on these audio ones. ☔💖

I've always loved the sound of rain, but never thought of raindrops as words.
Loved hearing you recite this, it's a beautiful accompaniment the written verse.

I am here to make you think of things in a different way, Wally. ;) Well that and all kinds of other stuff. Thank you for the wonderful compliment on the reading. :) ☔💖 and I love the sound of rain too.

You are a very talented writer. Felt and envisioned each line and word.
P.S NEVER DOUBT YOU TALENT! It truly radiates throughout this entire piece!

<3 TL (Meganne)

Thank you so much Meganne! I have actually been feeling really down because of some things and your comment is so sweet it made me smile. xoxo ☔💖

I enjoy  listening to your voice...

Thank you so much BC for the wonderful compliment!!!. I like listening to your voice also. :) I hope to listen to more soon. ☔💖

With what has happened in the past six months, this composition resonates. Reminds me that the world we can’t see can be damaged just as severely as that we see. I think of all the people who are dealing with violence that destroys positivity and hope.

Thank you so much for the comment Jazz. Yes, I agree this past year has certainly been something else... That is so true, there is a very fragile balance indeed. Violence certainly does that, it's sad that humanity can never get past it. ☔💖

This feels refreshing.  It's silly how we read our own work and don't think much of it, someone else comes along and see something in it.  Pretty awesome stuff.

Edit:  I read this and felt inspired.

https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/411556-forecast/

At least the rain is refreshing. :) That's so true, we are our own worst critics. But sometimes others can see things more easily than us. Thank you so much for the wonderful compliment. ☔💖

I am really happy you felt inspired and something else came out of this. That is one of the best feelings, to inspire someone. I look forward to reading it. xo <3

Okay I just scrolled a mile to get to this point but it was worth the journey. I love this piece BD. And, of course, I love your voice. Words are powerful things and I  found it poignant the different places where heavy words can destroy, homes, playgrounds, even whole communities. I was struck by this passage,
"Ephemerality does not honor agonies"
Words can be spoken so easily and cavalierly as an ephemeral thing that will soon be forgotten but they have lasting concrete impact I am still both encouraged and disturbed by words spoken to me as a child.  Bravissima Kristina❣️❣️

Haha, scrolled a mile; you are funny... Thank you so much for the beautiful compliment on the reading. You always help me. Words are definitely powerful and if you feel mine were powerful in conveying that message then I like that. :) Words can be spoken very easily and they definitely have impact. When they are truly meant to cause harm and hurt that is some of the worst. Sadly so often that is the case. And I think we are all encouraged and disturbed by words from childhood in one way or another. Anyway, thank you for the comment; I always love reading them. ☔💖

Always my distinct pleasure to read your words.🌹

How did I miss this one ?

Waiting for a miracle

Moody Like

It is easy to miss but I am glad you found it.

still waiting? ;p

what mood are you in now?

I'm in a Kx state of mind

Is that a good thing?????

Miss your writing !

I'm in a Poetspeak frame of mind.
Need I explain ?

Oh yes you should explain... ;) Sorry for not writing... it's been....