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Spark
For a moment, it seemed like you could fathom,
possessing endless sensual energy.
The same cognitive, empathetic, intellectual ability
To see (beyond the superficial).
Deeply hidden,
My primal being,
fast asleep.
For a second it seemed like you could comprehend.
I was so hypnotized, captivated,
alive, by your approach.
I could feel me,
breaking free...
Such a wonderful blissful feeling,
my inner hurricane emerging
Really thought you could comprehend
My deep primal- sexual- sensual being,
sparked to life ...
I needed to feel, to feel you,
My mental XTC.
Unfortunately, I'm still asleep.
Misjudged your endurance, determination, strength,
like a burnt out candle, it ended.
Sadly, you were just another disappointment.
Still deeply hidden,
My primal being,
sleeping.
possessing endless sensual energy.
The same cognitive, empathetic, intellectual ability
To see (beyond the superficial).
Deeply hidden,
My primal being,
fast asleep.
For a second it seemed like you could comprehend.
I was so hypnotized, captivated,
alive, by your approach.
I could feel me,
breaking free...
Such a wonderful blissful feeling,
my inner hurricane emerging
Really thought you could comprehend
My deep primal- sexual- sensual being,
sparked to life ...
I needed to feel, to feel you,
My mental XTC.
Unfortunately, I'm still asleep.
Misjudged your endurance, determination, strength,
like a burnt out candle, it ended.
Sadly, you were just another disappointment.
Still deeply hidden,
My primal being,
sleeping.
Published 17th Feb 2021
Author's Note
Do you recognize that feeling that someone knows how to fascinate you to such an extent, that you have the feeling that you are coming to life. But after a while, it turns out that the other is not who you hoped to be. Just not powerful enough, to keep fascinating you. That's what this poem is about.
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Anonymous
10th Aug 2021 10:56am
That pain of incorrect calculations... Uggh... so Indomitable hope, presses on.... lol... I'm hopes that truth from others shines like a beacon and not corroded or corrupted I'm definitely not misconstrued...
Really astutely penned ink.
Ty for sharing
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Really astutely penned ink.
Ty for sharing
🌹
16th Aug 2021 6:49pm
