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The Feeling Of Love
Oh my baby
I could never tell you exactly how
I really feel about you...why hell
I can't even explain it to you but
you know it don't you honey baby
when I hold you I am sure you
can feel my Love
you have to be seeing it too
you know it is there don't you baby
I could never tell you exactly how
I really feel about you...why hell
I can't even explain it to you but
you know it don't you honey baby
when I hold you I am sure you
can feel my Love
you have to be seeing it too
you know it is there don't you baby
Published 17th Feb 2021
Author's Note
a love poem
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1st Aug 2021 10:46pm
This is interesting, because it could just as easily apply to parental love as to romantic love. I enjoyed your line breaks, some of which were unusual and have challenged me to push myself in this area. Punctuation would enhance for me, although I realise the style is stream-of-consciousness.
