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2/15/21

Rivers of silver
And shadow
Flow down
To the floor
And take root

INDIGENOUS HAIR
SatInUGal
Written by SatInUGal (Kumar)
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Re. 2/15/21
17th Feb 2021 9:33am
Love the profundity woven into this one; it’s absolutely gorgeous, and somewhat, sacred.
shadow_starzzz
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(Kumar)
17th Feb 2021 4:23pm
Thank you. That is how I felt writing it.
SatInUGal
Re. 2/15/21
17th Feb 2021 11:41pm
Masterful job, as usual, in writing tight woven images. Thanks. Peace, oral
TheOralizer
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Re: Re. 2/15/21
(Kumar)
18th Feb 2021 2:58am
"Tight woven" is a powerful phrase I will happily receive for this piece in particular. Thank you.
SatInUGal

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