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Gogyoshi Poem, Nr.13 Back-Up
so I said to Big Brother
Dont bother watching me,
Im practising mindfulness.
Big Brother replied Ill keep watching
just in case you lapse.
Dont bother watching me,
Im practising mindfulness.
Big Brother replied Ill keep watching
just in case you lapse.
Written by
Josh
(Joshua Bond)
Published 15th Feb 2021
| Edited 11th Mar 2024
Author's Note
Gogyoshi Poem Nr.12 can be found here:
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/410407-gogyoshi-poem-nr-12-planet-of-the/
Gogyoshi Poem Nr.14 can be found here:
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/411514-gogyoshi-poem-nr-14-evening-togetherness/
(photo & painting credit: Joshua Bond)
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/410407-gogyoshi-poem-nr-12-planet-of-the/
Gogyoshi Poem Nr.14 can be found here:
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/411514-gogyoshi-poem-nr-14-evening-togetherness/
(photo & painting credit: Joshua Bond)
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Re. Gogyoshi Poem, Nr.13 Back-Up
15th Feb 2021 9:30pm
Dear J,
Now that is funny! Very funny. Oh the wisdom behind that is vast. Well done, well said. H🌷
Now that is funny! Very funny. Oh the wisdom behind that is vast. Well done, well said. H🌷
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Re: Re. Gogyoshi Poem, Nr.13 Back-Up
Thank you H, (and I'm over-honoured with another RL).
I knew one day I'd find a warped thought to place mindfulness into a poem.
I knew one day I'd find a warped thought to place mindfulness into a poem.
Re. Gogyoshi Poem, Nr.13 Back-Up
15th Feb 2021 10:05pm
Re: Re. Gogyoshi Poem, Nr.13 Back-Up
21st Feb 2021 5:58pm
Thank you Razzer, and for the RL. I was brought up on Orwell's 1984 and Huxley's Brave New World as a teenager and they keep on making their presence felt.
Re. Gogyoshi Poem, Nr.13 Back-Up
15th Feb 2021 10:38pm
Re: Re. Gogyoshi Poem, Nr.13 Back-Up
21st Feb 2021 6:02pm
I'm afraid we ain't seen nothing yet when it comes to technology intervening in disagreeable ways in our lives. But, we live in interesting times. The only way forward is inner.
Re: Re. Gogyoshi Poem, Nr.13 Back-Up
21st Feb 2021 10:51pm
Stupid fucking humans! Stole that from Jim Jarmusch LOL.
You are spot on Josh.
🙏 Harry
You are spot on Josh.
🙏 Harry
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Re: Re. Gogyoshi Poem, Nr.13 Back-Up
21st Feb 2021 11:07pm
I had to look up who Jim Jarmusch was. Not at all familiar to me. I rarely watch films but have you got any specific starter recommendation to watch?
Re: Re. Gogyoshi Poem, Nr.13 Back-Up
21st Feb 2021 11:16pm
They are all great Josh. His latest is awesome...deeply philosophical, "The Dead Don't Die"...about zombies, but it's much deeper than that. His classics are, "Dead Man" from 1995, with Johnny Depp...and "Ghost Dog" starring Forrest Whitaker...the same actor uses the line, "Stupid fucking white men" in both films.
Stay well my friend.
Harry
Stay well my friend.
Harry
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Re: Re. Gogyoshi Poem, Nr.13 Back-Up
21st Feb 2021 11:46pm
Thanks for that Harry. The world is way too "stupid fucking white men" oriented, I guess because the West is shaped by Greek ideas, English has become a dominant language, and America (through the dollar, big (internet) tech, and military might), kind of rules the world. There is so much other-ways-of-thinking if one goes East (like you've done) and by exploring other cultures, particularly in their perceptions of Mother Earth.
Re: Re. Gogyoshi Poem, Nr.13 Back-Up
21st Feb 2021 11:53pm
I agree with Montaigne...and Nietzsche...different perspectives builds a bigger picture. Thanks Josh.
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Re. Gogyoshi Poem, Nr.13 Back-Up
15th Feb 2021 10:42pm
I bet Josh if George Orwell is reading this he'll be ROFLing and nodding at the same time.
Jokes apart love the profundity.
Jokes apart love the profundity.
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21st Feb 2021 6:03pm
Re. Gogyoshi Poem, Nr.13 Back-Up
18th Feb 2021 2:34pm
I think In the long run, the realization of having wasted time watching others live their lives will come too late.
Great write Josh
Great write Josh
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Re: Re. Gogyoshi Poem, Nr.13 Back-Up
21st Feb 2021 6:06pm
Good point. It's one reason why we haven't had a television in our household for 20+ years. And the children-now-adults don't have one either. Of course the internet's come in the meantime but hey, there's still the 'off' button. :))