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IT'S JUST A COLD DAY
Waking up to a day that's no different
Feels like just a simple Sunday
February is just so irrelevant
No words to inspire to express or say
"Only rain, ice, snow I hope cause no accident"
That I do pray"...
While the world seems to not care for today
The reason for what it is
Love that's showed by cupid's
All indoors all prefer to stay
Might be something we won't miss
For this weather breaks the mood in bits
Try 14 degrees will feel more like 4 easily...
Houston prepare it's arriving to wholly FREEZE!!
I have someone
but even so I still feel like the number one
I'm just on the other side of the android alone
With him there's not much talking on the phone
Waiting on him as I finish my all on the run
The entire day we barely talk or text
Before I know it the day is now all done
It's mimi time, time to rest.
"Only moths around me, damn pest"
It's just a cold day
I'm not trying to celebrate
I will not spill out the depressing names holiday
So keep that red away
You know exactly what I mean
Someone please change the day to green
It's just a cold day
Shivers my body complete
Blankets and covers warmth... I don't feel it
Arising to feel chilly from my head to my feet
Cause nothing else fills my way
But hey...
"St Patrick is soon coming!!!", " HOORAY!!!"...
Feels like just a simple Sunday
February is just so irrelevant
No words to inspire to express or say
"Only rain, ice, snow I hope cause no accident"
That I do pray"...
While the world seems to not care for today
The reason for what it is
Love that's showed by cupid's
All indoors all prefer to stay
Might be something we won't miss
For this weather breaks the mood in bits
Try 14 degrees will feel more like 4 easily...
Houston prepare it's arriving to wholly FREEZE!!
I have someone
but even so I still feel like the number one
I'm just on the other side of the android alone
With him there's not much talking on the phone
Waiting on him as I finish my all on the run
The entire day we barely talk or text
Before I know it the day is now all done
It's mimi time, time to rest.
"Only moths around me, damn pest"
It's just a cold day
I'm not trying to celebrate
I will not spill out the depressing names holiday
So keep that red away
You know exactly what I mean
Someone please change the day to green
It's just a cold day
Shivers my body complete
Blankets and covers warmth... I don't feel it
Arising to feel chilly from my head to my feet
Cause nothing else fills my way
But hey...
"St Patrick is soon coming!!!", " HOORAY!!!"...
Published 15th Feb 2021
Author's Note
A POEM ABOUT VALENTINES DAY AND ITS DEPRESSING SIDE AND THE WEATHER WITH IT.
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15th Feb 2021 4:08am
15th Feb 2021 4:16am
My rare holiday is no work tomorrow cause workplace will be closed due to weather lol but not really hun.
15th Feb 2021 7:36am
But as long you have your mate with the cold might be filled with love. Keep on writing.
15th Feb 2021 8:46am
Yes true but only love is my lil munchkin and that's more then anything else. Thanks and I will continue on. 🤗
15th Feb 2021 6:21pm
Great parallels to the cold and deary weather and Valentines Day's lonely hearts
...your clever poetic correlations add an emotional perspective for a depressing holiday for us who are all alone on a day which is meant to celebrate love.
This poignant poem is wily write.
Crafty Writer!
...your clever poetic correlations add an emotional perspective for a depressing holiday for us who are all alone on a day which is meant to celebrate love.
This poignant poem is wily write.
Crafty Writer!
15th Feb 2021 8:07pm
We thank you yes this is pure all happening how I saw and felt it. More gloomy than happy. That pic is the real temps for my hometown so it's now snowy which I preferred over ice but still icy too. Still reflecting valentines but with a pinch of sadness too. Glad you liked thank you 🙂
