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how unsure the path
the ethics of man
will
fail because it is the
ethics
of man with
no
devine presence
so,
walk in, and among
this
world, but keep your
mind,
heart and spirit
in
the heaven
that
calls to
you
Published 14th Feb 2021
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14th Feb 2021 4:47pm
14th Feb 2021 4:50pm
Getting better every day but the road to full recovery will take time. many thanks, Robert. PS my High School's ''mascot'' was a Viking....So Vikings rule (though the NFL Vikings never make it to the top....)
14th Feb 2021 5:27pm
14th Feb 2021 9:49pm
Dear BK,
Right?!
I love your write and its power to embrace all. Find your heaven and respect it. Lovely simply lovely. H🌷
Right?!
I love your write and its power to embrace all. Find your heaven and respect it. Lovely simply lovely. H🌷
14th Feb 2021 11:42pm
To be in this world but not of this world. The most difficult task there can be is to maintain a moral and spiritual path.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
14th Feb 2021 10:20pm
14th Feb 2021 11:44pm
Thank you, Lozzamus. Very much appreciated coming from a someone with so much talent in writing.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
18th Feb 2021 00:40am
That first stanza is just honest and true. Man is flawed and so their ethics will fall without really having a sense of a higher purpose. We have to find and work toward something bigger than ourselves.
18th Feb 2021 1:30am
If left to our own devices we have naught destruction to look forward towards.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
