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etching.
the anticipation
an exquisite suffering
strong and sure
with a scintilla
of surging tenderness
plush softness
that burns so heated
lips to lips
slowly warm
a taste of ambrosia
as tongues unite
caressing deep
a combined essence
marking one another
in their shared
most precious
etching
in that timeless feeling
... of a perfect kiss
Published 14th Feb 2021
Author's Note
Happy Valentine's Day.
©Blu2021
today's #Nopoo
©Blu2021
today's #Nopoo
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14th Feb 2021 4:46pm
14th Feb 2021 4:47pm
14th Feb 2021 5:09pm
Where do I cue for one of them kisses
Awesome
Love and light
Happy Valentines day my friend
Ron xx
Awesome
Love and light
Happy Valentines day my friend
Ron xx
14th Feb 2021 5:46pm
lol...
Returned wishes, luv
🌹
Have a lovely day and I'm sending out a kiss through the ether
💋
xo
Returned wishes, luv
🌹
Have a lovely day and I'm sending out a kiss through the ether
💋
xo
14th Feb 2021 5:40pm
''Happy Valentines Day"!
...your beautiful romantic poem is the perfect Valentine Day submission.
Susan your vivid poetic words is a dreamy, affectionate, and passionate write that portrays the perfect first last kiss.
Enchanting Poetry!!!
...your beautiful romantic poem is the perfect Valentine Day submission.
Susan your vivid poetic words is a dreamy, affectionate, and passionate write that portrays the perfect first last kiss.
Enchanting Poetry!!!
I welcome the opportunity to be your Valentine's day enchantress!!!..😉 Your comments are lovely and I hope you have a gorgeous day today full of hope, passion and promise. I appreciate all your thoughtfulness, always....
Much love,
Happy Valentine's Day,
🌹 💜 🌹 💜 🌹 💜 🌹
xoxo
Susan
Much love,
Happy Valentine's Day,
🌹 💜 🌹 💜 🌹 💜 🌹
xoxo
Susan
14th Feb 2021 5:41pm
A perfect poem by a perfect poet. Kisses on your lips, 'cause it's Valentine's Day. Peace, oral
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15th Feb 2021 2:42am
True dat. Hope you enjoy your valentine's day chocolates. Keep on writing.
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18th Feb 2021 00:37am
You know your weaving of this poem was very spellbinding but ending it like that was just wonderful.
Great work Blue.
Great work Blue.
18th Feb 2021 00:41am
Ty so much for reading and your comments Walter. A last minute Valentine's Day spill that kind of wrote itself... I appreciate you taking the time to stop by :)
🌹
xo
B
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xo
B
16th Mar 2021 10:07am
... like they say, better late than never ;)
Nothing like a perfect kiss!!... I thank you so much for reading and leaving your thoughtful comments, DC. Happy late Valentine's day.... hahaha (when this was posted!) You're nice to go back and read it... really, much thx.
Btw, your own piece you posted tonight... Damn powerful and masterfully penned, my friend... and trust me, your strong feelings displayed within that poem - are ones that many, many of us here on DU have felt in similar or can relate to... I guarantee. You're not alone... is my point.
Thank you for sharing that spill. It might not have been easy and I can appreciate that... (hugs)
Much love your way, my friend 🙏
I truly love seeing you and having you visit, DC
Ty Ty...
🌹
xo
-B
Nothing like a perfect kiss!!... I thank you so much for reading and leaving your thoughtful comments, DC. Happy late Valentine's day.... hahaha (when this was posted!) You're nice to go back and read it... really, much thx.
Btw, your own piece you posted tonight... Damn powerful and masterfully penned, my friend... and trust me, your strong feelings displayed within that poem - are ones that many, many of us here on DU have felt in similar or can relate to... I guarantee. You're not alone... is my point.
Thank you for sharing that spill. It might not have been easy and I can appreciate that... (hugs)
Much love your way, my friend 🙏
I truly love seeing you and having you visit, DC
Ty Ty...
🌹
xo
-B
16th Mar 2021 10:52am
Hehe. Well, feelings wrote and released. Though a poem about the wonderful feeling of a kiss is something I can always get down with 😁
16th Mar 2021 10:53am
