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hey
i washed the musk of you off this morning
after two days: my touch was firm but gentle
i can feel you thinking about me today
but i have things to do and so do you
we may keep each other waiting but
so far it's always been worth it. yes
it's been worth everything
after two days: my touch was firm but gentle
i can feel you thinking about me today
but i have things to do and so do you
we may keep each other waiting but
so far it's always been worth it. yes
it's been worth everything
Published 14th Feb 2021
| Edited 15th Feb 2021
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14th Feb 2021 3:56pm
hey! Enjoyed this! Down to earth reality in taking things slowly. Reminds me of the saying, 'Good things come to those who wait'!
14th Feb 2021 3:58pm
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14th Feb 2021 4:18pm
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14th Feb 2021 4:21pm
14th Feb 2021 4:28pm
Ever heard “Hey” by Pixies?
Ladies and Gentlemen I think this may well be the poetic version. Reminded me of it so much.
Thank you for sharing.
-M
Ladies and Gentlemen I think this may well be the poetic version. Reminded me of it so much.
Thank you for sharing.
-M
14th Feb 2021 4:30pm
15th Feb 2021 00:53am
this is beautiful.
deep in its reality, exquisite in its acquired taste (that one's become addicted to's) like feeling. It delivers amazingly well the sentiment and quite a lot of feelings and stories to mind. I found it quite English in its colour texture, taste and impact. For I know this .
Job. Anna
deep in its reality, exquisite in its acquired taste (that one's become addicted to's) like feeling. It delivers amazingly well the sentiment and quite a lot of feelings and stories to mind. I found it quite English in its colour texture, taste and impact. For I know this .
Job. Anna
18th Feb 2021 5:07am
15th Feb 2021 5:36am
15th Feb 2021 7:13am
