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I am the Ocean
I am the Sea ... Even deeper ... Ocean!
In eternal movement, in search of answers,
I fly in a wave, cutting off the edge of the sky,
And taking with me the flashes of dawns!
And at night, having calmed down
in the darkness, I kiss the stars in my palms,
taking the Universe to myself,
Shaking gently in the gentle surf ...
And somewhere in the depths, in my silence
The last day and sadness will drown,
And the freshness of the morning will
bring the beginning, And a new building wave!
In eternal movement, in search of answers,
I fly in a wave, cutting off the edge of the sky,
And taking with me the flashes of dawns!
And at night, having calmed down
in the darkness, I kiss the stars in my palms,
taking the Universe to myself,
Shaking gently in the gentle surf ...
And somewhere in the depths, in my silence
The last day and sadness will drown,
And the freshness of the morning will
bring the beginning, And a new building wave!
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Re. I am the Ocean
13th Feb 2021 4:59pm
Re: Re. I am the Ocean
13th Feb 2021 7:55pm
Wow; such an absolutely wonderful compliment, that means a lot to me. Thank you so much... Discovery and Hope - you get it. ;) 🌊🚣♀️🌃💖
Re. I am the Ocean
13th Feb 2021 5:21pm
World class absolutely smashed this out of the park
Fantastic read, beautiful flow, just like a Ocean wave
Love and light
Ron cc
Fantastic read, beautiful flow, just like a Ocean wave
Love and light
Ron cc
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Re: Re. I am the Ocean
13th Feb 2021 7:58pm
Deer caught in the headlights again; another amazing comment. :) I cannot express how much comments like these mean to me and I love that description so much. 🌊🚣♀️🌃💖
Re. I am the Ocean
13th Feb 2021 6:21pm
Re: Re. I am the Ocean
13th Feb 2021 7:58pm
Thank you so much Numer, I really appreciate the compliment so much and I am so happy to get your comments. I hope my writing will continue to be worthy of them. 🌊🚣♀️🌃💖
Re. I am the Ocean
13th Feb 2021 6:35pm
I live by the ocean...love it's pulsing rhythms, tidal surges and am now so pleased to hear its voice coming through you...can there be a more sublimely sensual experience than sunset or sunrise by its waters...you conjured some very beautiful visions with this Kristina...
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Re: Re. I am the Ocean
13th Feb 2021 8:00pm
The mountains and the ocean are the most beautiful. :) It must be amazing to live by the ocean and wow that is such a gorgeous thing to say '...hear its voice coming through you'. I adore that. You have me badly wanting to go to the coast for the sunset, sunrise, crashing of the waves, the cold water, and the negative ions. 🌊🚣♀️🌃💖
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Re: Re. I am the Ocean
13th Feb 2021 8:02pm
Thank you so much for the beautiful comment Danny!, I am always in deep water in one way or another so I love that I found something spectacular there to share with you. ;) 🌊🚣♀️🌃💖
Re. I am the Ocean
13th Feb 2021 8:15pm
Dear K,
I feel as though I’ve just been given the best scalp massage! This poem had the most soothing effect for me. “ I kiss the stars in my palms,” such a pretty offering. What I adored most was the feeling of hope behind this piece. I always think no matter how ugly the current day might be playing out the morrow will be better. Somehow or other it will be better and to have that enlightenment is a treasure. “ And the freshness of the morning will
bring the beginning,” couldn't have said it better myself. Lovely and much appreciated read today. H🌷
I feel as though I’ve just been given the best scalp massage! This poem had the most soothing effect for me. “ I kiss the stars in my palms,” such a pretty offering. What I adored most was the feeling of hope behind this piece. I always think no matter how ugly the current day might be playing out the morrow will be better. Somehow or other it will be better and to have that enlightenment is a treasure. “ And the freshness of the morning will
bring the beginning,” couldn't have said it better myself. Lovely and much appreciated read today. H🌷
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13th Feb 2021 9:42pm
Oh yes! I give the best scalp massages. :p I love that this had a soothing a effect, you deserve it and so much more. Sometimes its hard to fight through all of the challenges but we do it anyway and when we get that freshness of the morning or wading in the ocean we truly appreciate it. I am happy you found a bit of solace in this; now I am really glad I decided to post it - wrote it a while back. :) 🌊🚣♀️🌃💖
Re. I am the Ocean
14th Feb 2021 1:01am
I read the lyrics of two songs, The Beatles, "Julia", and John Denver's "Calypso" and find them similar to your eloquence. Bravo!
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Re: Re. I am the Ocean
14th Feb 2021 1:59am
Thank you so much for another wonderful comment and compliment Jazz. I am so happy you found it eloquent and I will definitely be listening to those songs very soon. :) 🌊🚣♀️🌃💖
Re. I am the Ocean
14th Feb 2021 2:13am
Re: Re. I am the Ocean
14th Feb 2021 2:16am
Thank you so much for the comment Billy, I like that you are letting your softer side show. ;) 🌊🚣♀️🌃💖
Re. I am the Ocean
14th Feb 2021 2:17am
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14th Feb 2021 2:18am
Re. I am the Ocean
14th Feb 2021 2:26am
KristinaX this is a masterful inspirational write.
Your reflective oceanic metaphoric poetry cleanses the soul with hope and self-worth.
These beautiful celestial poetic words are like an ocean of self love
spilling over into the most beautiful expressive write!
A spiritual immersion of uplifting poetry.
Exquisite!!!
Your reflective oceanic metaphoric poetry cleanses the soul with hope and self-worth.
These beautiful celestial poetic words are like an ocean of self love
spilling over into the most beautiful expressive write!
A spiritual immersion of uplifting poetry.
Exquisite!!!
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Re: Re. I am the Ocean
14th Feb 2021 2:41am
I am so happy you could take a dip in my waters. lol Yeah, I know where your head is right now so I definitely need to cleanse your soul a bit, but that's only in order to get it even dirtier next time. Self love is not as dirty but it works too. Never mind, I guess it's where my head is but I blame your metaphors. Uplifting - I give up!... Thank you so much for the raunchy comment. 🌊🚣♀️🌃💖
Re. I am the Ocean
14th Feb 2021 4:23am
Be the heart of the ocean diamond which is worn around your neck. Keep on writing.
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Re: Re. I am the Ocean
15th Feb 2021 1:47pm
That is really beautiful and poetic Francisco, you should make a poem out of that :) Thank you so much for your continuing encouragement.🌊🚣♀️🌃💖
Re. I am the Ocean
14th Feb 2021 6:42am
Dearest, Kristina, a beautifully written, serene poem. There's magic in this passage,
"I kiss the stars in my palms,
taking the Universe to myself,"
A love the message of hope and renewal in the last line. Brava, BD🐻💋🐻💋🐻
"I kiss the stars in my palms,
taking the Universe to myself,"
A love the message of hope and renewal in the last line. Brava, BD🐻💋🐻💋🐻
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Re: Re. I am the Ocean
15th Feb 2021 1:48pm
Thank you so much GW, I can do serene sometimes. :p I always love your choice of passages... Hope is vital to our existence and with it comes renewal each time we take that next step. I hope your next steps take you somewhere amazing bringing excitement and wonderful things. 🌊🚣♀️🌃💖
Re. I am the Ocean
14th Feb 2021 6:33pm
Re: Re. I am the Ocean
15th Feb 2021 1:56pm
Hey Steve... I love all the Wow's you can throw my way. ;) Thank you so much for the wonderful comment and stopping in to read my writing. 🌊🚣♀️🌃💖
Re. I am the Ocean
15th Feb 2021 2:24pm
Amazing use and blending of metaphors. You gave a new view of the ocean, that's what great writing does. Thanks. Hugs and peace
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Re: Re. I am the Ocean
15th Feb 2021 6:28pm
I so love that you appreciate the metaphors but I absolutely adore giving you a new view of the ocean... Your compliment just feels to good for me but I love it so much. Thank you... Hugs, kisses, and peace always... 🌊🚣♀️🌃💖
Re. I am the Ocean
15th Feb 2021 6:08pm
And your dance with the moon, leaves you heaving and ebbing!
Enjoyed your using the ocean metaphor to describe a cycle of your “turbulent” day and ultimate rebooting.
Enjoyed your using the ocean metaphor to describe a cycle of your “turbulent” day and ultimate rebooting.
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Re: Re. I am the Ocean
15th Feb 2021 6:24pm
Oh how I love dancing with the moon, the night is where I belong... caressed by the darkness slightly covered in the shards of moonlight. Heaving and ebbing is a reason to live.
Oh the turbulent challenges of the day lead to the passionate rendering of the night. Turbulence only leads to a greater climax... Rebooting to handle more the next time around always... 🌊🚣♀️🌃💖
Oh the turbulent challenges of the day lead to the passionate rendering of the night. Turbulence only leads to a greater climax... Rebooting to handle more the next time around always... 🌊🚣♀️🌃💖
Re. I am the Ocean
15th Feb 2021 10:45pm
A more spiritual and beauitiful poem will be forever hard to find after reading this profound and poignant poem Kristina.
🙏 Harry
🙏 Harry
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Re: Re. I am the Ocean
16th Feb 2021 00:11am
Wow, I am speechless... I need pre-warning before reading a comment like that Harry and I am getting tired of staring at a blinking cursor... Thank you so much for that absolutely incredible compliment you really did take my breath away. I cannot express how happy that made me. 🌊🚣♀️🌃💖
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16th Feb 2021 1:24am
Re. I am the Ocean
17th Feb 2021 1:40pm
“taking the Universe to myself, “
Loved everything about this one, it’s so vast and profound it really is breathtaking.
Beautiful and wonderful write.
Loved everything about this one, it’s so vast and profound it really is breathtaking.
Beautiful and wonderful write.
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Re: Re. I am the Ocean
17th Feb 2021 4:51pm
Wow, I am so incredibly happy with the feedback on this one. I had no idea it would be so well liked. But vast, profound, and breathtaking; that's so incredible and certainly I never ever expected feedback like that. Thank you so much for continuing to read and give me your thoughts. This is what encourages me to continue here when I think about stopping. 🌊🚣♀️🌃💖
Re. I am the Ocean
18th Feb 2021 8:40pm
"I kiss the stars in my palms" ... pure poetic gold ... truly ... "sadness will drown" ... another ... the closing is simply perfect ... one of your very very best dear poetess ...
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Re: Re. I am the Ocean
8th Mar 2021 1:10pm
Hi LDF, I have no idea how I missed this amazing and beautiful comment. But I found it now. :) 'pure poetic gold' - Deer in the headlights. 'one of you very very best' - You killed the Deer. :) Seriously though, your comment has made me so happy and I appreciate it so much! 🌊🚣♀️🌃💖
Re. I am the Ocean
15th Sep 2022 2:47am
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15th Sep 2022 2:51am
Wow, it was a surprise for me too. lol This takes me back, actually there are so many... looking back... damn... :p Well glad to surprise and that you found something inspirational in a different way from much of my writing. ;) I suppose this one might have surprised a lot of people from the sounds of it. But then again I am full of surprises right? ;)