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Senryu
Solar Flair
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Solar Flair
daytime starry sky
father sun outshines the stars
but they are still there
Written by
Kinkpoet
Published
13th Feb 2021
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#senryu
#spiritual
#stars
#sun
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Re. Solar Flair
Solomon_Song
13th Feb 2021 6:23pm
Could not help reading the first half at least to the tune of Don Maclean's Dark and Starry Night (in this case yours is about daytime sky),
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Re: Re. Solar Flair
Kinkpoet
14th Feb 2021 7:17pm
I'm flattered by the connection to one of my favorite songs. Thank you.
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Re. Solar Flair
Phantom2426
(Francisco J Vera)
14th Feb 2021 4:26am
The stars are there when you need them. Keep on writing.
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Re: Re. Solar Flair
Kinkpoet
14th Feb 2021 7:18pm
True.
Thank you.
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