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yes, I can see the forest for the trees. ~ (a haiku)
canopied so lush
ageless tendrils whisper
sustaining us all
Written by
Bluevelvete
Published 13th Feb 2021
Author's Note
February Haiku Theme: Forest
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Re. yes, I can see the forest for the trees. ~ (a haiku)
13th Feb 2021 2:45am
Re: Re. yes, I can see the forest for the trees. ~ (a haiku)
13th Feb 2021 2:48am
Re. yes, I can see the forest for the trees. ~ (a haiku)
13th Feb 2021 3:28am
Lovely picture and image of the forest, wish you and me were in the forest. Keep on writing.
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Re: Re. yes, I can see the forest for the trees. ~ (a haiku)
13th Feb 2021 3:49am
Re. yes, I can see the forest for the trees. ~ (a haiku)
Re: Re. yes, I can see the forest for the trees. ~ (a haiku)
13th Feb 2021 3:45am
It's a shame they're disappearing as fast as they are.... deforestation is terrible!
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Re. yes, I can see the forest for the trees. ~ (a haiku)
13th Feb 2021 5:20am
Dear Blue, this captures so well the beauty of a forest. Brava, Goddess S❣❣
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Re: Re. yes, I can see the forest for the trees. ~ (a haiku)
13th Feb 2021 6:29pm
Ty very much, B
I'm so glad you think so and I'm appreciative of your visit. Your thoughts are so valuable to me, especially in that of haiku feedback ;)
I love both senryś and haiku so much and I strive to become better at them all the time. AP is a masterful writer of them and I've learned a lot from him but I know that I have a way to go! You're a terrific help, Ty Ty! 🙏
Much love,
🌹
xo
B
I'm so glad you think so and I'm appreciative of your visit. Your thoughts are so valuable to me, especially in that of haiku feedback ;)
I love both senryś and haiku so much and I strive to become better at them all the time. AP is a masterful writer of them and I've learned a lot from him but I know that I have a way to go! You're a terrific help, Ty Ty! 🙏
Much love,
🌹
xo
B
Re. yes, I can see the forest for the trees. ~ (a haiku)
13th Feb 2021 7:36am
Re: Re. yes, I can see the forest for the trees. ~ (a haiku)
13th Feb 2021 6:40pm
Aww, that's extremely kind🙏
Ty so for reading and your generous list add.
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xo
Ty so for reading and your generous list add.
🌹
xo
Re: Re. yes, I can see the forest for the trees. ~ (a haiku)
13th Feb 2021 6:56pm
I've never thought of writing a Haiku until I read this one. So I wrote one. Then like 3 more since then. Thank you for inspiring me to try.
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Re: Re. yes, I can see the forest for the trees. ~ (a haiku)
Ohh what an amazing compliment Ty .... Be careful you'll become addicted!! 😂.. I'm so happy you found them as interesting as I do. Check out
The haiku pond it's an awesome resource
🙏
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/groups/haiku-pond/discussion/
xoxo
B
The haiku pond it's an awesome resource
🙏
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/groups/haiku-pond/discussion/
xoxo
B
Re. yes, I can see the forest for the trees. ~ (a haiku)
13th Feb 2021 8:16am
Re: Re. yes, I can see the forest for the trees. ~ (a haiku)
13th Feb 2021 6:43pm
Ty My lovely Knight!
Me too 💜
I appreciate you reading and the list add
xoxo
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Me too 💜
I appreciate you reading and the list add
xoxo
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Re. yes, I can see the forest for the trees. ~ (a haiku)
13th Feb 2021 8:42am
Trees draped in blue skies.
leaves glistening like velvet
dew quenching earth's thirst
......Absolutely Beautiful Poetry Blue!!!
leaves glistening like velvet
dew quenching earth's thirst
......Absolutely Beautiful Poetry Blue!!!
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Re: Re. yes, I can see the forest for the trees. ~ (a haiku)
13th Feb 2021 6:41pm
You're a lovely voice upon my page with your comments that make me blush.... ;)
Ty so much for reading and the list add
I love seeing you, Ron
🌲💜🌲
xo
Ty so much for reading and the list add
I love seeing you, Ron
🌲💜🌲
xo
Re. yes, I can see the forest for the trees. ~ (a haiku)
13th Feb 2021 2:04pm
Re: Re. yes, I can see the forest for the trees. ~ (a haiku)
13th Feb 2021 6:45pm
Aww..Ty Grace
I used this as my "Nopoo yesterday in honor of Soul's love of nature... I figured he might have liked it?
I'm really glad you did!
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xo
I used this as my "Nopoo yesterday in honor of Soul's love of nature... I figured he might have liked it?
I'm really glad you did!
🌹
xo
Re: Re. yes, I can see the forest for the trees. ~ (a haiku)
16th Feb 2021 2:26pm
Oh yes, I saw that. Soul loves everything about nature. He used to walk in the woods ..he video'd his walks sometimes, narrating what he sees...saw...and it was funny too. He'd mumble about needing a pedicure manicure cos he was all sweaty...😁
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Re: Re. yes, I can see the forest for the trees. ~ (a haiku)
16th Feb 2021 2:26pm
Oh yes, I saw that. Soul loves everything about nature. He used to walk in the woods ..he video'd his walks sometimes, narrating what he sees...saw...and it was funny too. He'd mumble about needing a pedicure manicure cos he was all sweaty...😁
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Re. yes, I can see the forest for the trees. ~ (a haiku)
13th Feb 2021 6:07pm
A Park Ranger told me the "trees were the forest." What does he know? Ha ha, :) :) Great Haiku. Hugs, kisses, and peace, oral
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Re: Re. yes, I can see the forest for the trees. ~ (a haiku)
13th Feb 2021 6:45pm
He's probably pretty wise... 😂
Ty so much for reading Oral
Love seeing you 🦋
xoxo
B
Ty so much for reading Oral
Love seeing you 🦋
xoxo
B
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Re: Re. yes, I can see the forest for the trees. ~ (a haiku)
13th Feb 2021 6:37pm
Wow, that's a comment to really appreciate and cherish. Thank you for saying so, Tim. I'm grateful for the generous list add as well ;)
I'm all smiles that you enjoyed it.
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xo
-B
I'm all smiles that you enjoyed it.
🌹
xo
-B
Re. yes, I can see the forest for the trees. ~ (a haiku)
13th Feb 2021 7:27pm
Re: Re. yes, I can see the forest for the trees. ~ (a haiku)
13th Feb 2021 7:35pm
Re. yes, I can see the forest for the trees. ~ (a haiku)
13th Feb 2021 11:25pm
Dear BV,
Aaaaaaahhhhh...!!! Well isnt this divine. canopied so lush what a pretty combination of words.
I think this piece is so lovely and a great tribute to nature. I always appreciate kind reminders and odes to beauty that can be almost too beautiful to describe and yet you seem to have no trouble doing either. H🌷
Aaaaaaahhhhh...!!! Well isnt this divine. canopied so lush what a pretty combination of words.
I think this piece is so lovely and a great tribute to nature. I always appreciate kind reminders and odes to beauty that can be almost too beautiful to describe and yet you seem to have no trouble doing either. H🌷
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Re: Re. yes, I can see the forest for the trees. ~ (a haiku)
17th Feb 2021 2:04am
Lovely Honoria,
I'm sorry I keep missing your beautiful comments, you're like the best late night elf, who sneaks upon my page leaving gloriously written trinkets and for whatever reason, I'm missing them... apologies... it's not intentional!
I love the forest, and woods.... I grew up in them and then moved to a state as flat as my humor... Har Har... where a swamp was considered "forest".. uh,no. I don't think so... lol
My love for it never died and I still enjoy hiking in different states that really do offer an honest to goodness forest!... It's a favorite activity.
I'm so thankful for your read and beautiful sentiments left. They mean a lot to me :)
It's truly smile making, that you enjoyed it....
Much love,
🌹 💜 🌹
xoxo
B
Yiu
I'm sorry I keep missing your beautiful comments, you're like the best late night elf, who sneaks upon my page leaving gloriously written trinkets and for whatever reason, I'm missing them... apologies... it's not intentional!
I love the forest, and woods.... I grew up in them and then moved to a state as flat as my humor... Har Har... where a swamp was considered "forest".. uh,no. I don't think so... lol
My love for it never died and I still enjoy hiking in different states that really do offer an honest to goodness forest!... It's a favorite activity.
I'm so thankful for your read and beautiful sentiments left. They mean a lot to me :)
It's truly smile making, that you enjoyed it....
Much love,
🌹 💜 🌹
xoxo
B
Yiu
Re. yes, I can see the forest for the trees. ~ (a haiku)
17th Feb 2021 1:13am
Re: Re. yes, I can see the forest for the trees. ~ (a haiku)
17th Feb 2021 1:18am
Ty so much for reading, Walter
I'm working on my senryś and haiku, in hopes that I can improve... I'm so glad you enjoyed it ;)
🌹
xo
I'm working on my senryś and haiku, in hopes that I can improve... I'm so glad you enjoyed it ;)
🌹
xo
Re. yes, I can see the forest for the trees. ~ (a haiku)
12th Mar 2021 3:36am
Re: Re. yes, I can see the forest for the trees. ~ (a haiku)
12th Mar 2021 3:40am
Thank you for reading, Robert.
I really appreciate you taking the time, tonight.
This haiku is a favorite... I enjoy the forest beauty but you're correct, those forests are an extremely important factor in the world's oxygen production, indeed. It's something that should be cherished indeed.
Much love and respect,
🌹🌲🌹
xo
Susan
I really appreciate you taking the time, tonight.
This haiku is a favorite... I enjoy the forest beauty but you're correct, those forests are an extremely important factor in the world's oxygen production, indeed. It's something that should be cherished indeed.
Much love and respect,
🌹🌲🌹
xo
Susan