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an unspoken rose
He's sternly
waiting
she's already
disobeyed
due to
her late arrival
Slightly
shaking
and noticeably
rattled
Heightening
awareness
of added
punishment
when breaking the rules
leaves her heart racing
An air
of his slight annoyance
and domineering control
mixes with
submissive greed
and a pinch of fear
B l o s s o m i n g
gorgeously
into ardent
acquiescence
from
corporal commands
she
begs.
pleads.
squirms.
HE.
IS.
FUCKING.
RELENTLESS.
UNYIELDING.
.
.
.
.
.
a
knowing
smile.
(safely
hides
away)
behind
the
taughtness
of her ball gag
Published 12th Feb 2021
| Edited 23rd Jun 2022
Author's Note
©Blu2021
a slightly modified version of my Erotic Underground post from a few weeks ago.
artwork, via Pinterest.
a slightly modified version of my Erotic Underground post from a few weeks ago.
artwork, via Pinterest.
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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12th Feb 2021 5:22pm
Oh a kinky Rose 🌹 lol shocking but still I'm sure your Gardner is pleased
Love and light
Ron xx
Love and light
Ron xx
12th Feb 2021 7:25pm
Just a little light naughtiness.... lol
😉
Ty for reading and your thoughtful RL add
it's much appreciated
🌹
xo
😉
Ty for reading and your thoughtful RL add
it's much appreciated
🌹
xo
12th Feb 2021 7:16pm
Dear Blue, I enjoy the described emotions in this piece. I can see the appeal of relinquishing control after a hard day of feeling you need to be in charge as illustrated in my favorite passage,
"B l o o m s
into his obeyed commands"
Brava Lady Blue❣❣
"B l o o m s
into his obeyed commands"
Brava Lady Blue❣❣
12th Feb 2021 7:29pm
Ty, BB!🐻 💋 🐻
It's just a bit of fun naughtiness.. plus I love the drawing when I found it.... A nice fantasy piece for me. I'm tickled you enjoyed my mind's way to slightly decompress ;)
Much love and delight at seeing you!
🌹
xo
B
It's just a bit of fun naughtiness.. plus I love the drawing when I found it.... A nice fantasy piece for me. I'm tickled you enjoyed my mind's way to slightly decompress ;)
Much love and delight at seeing you!
🌹
xo
B
Sounds like she got what she came for. I feel a certain trust & confidence the lovers have in one another. I like the artwork too & the way the words are laid, lol.
12th Feb 2021 8:17pm
Ohh Hello Billy! ;)
It's lovely seeing you tonight and I'm glad to read your comments. I appreciate the insightful reply and I'm thrilled you enjoyed it. It's the artwork that inspired me, too. Well, and my love of all things that are submissive... 😉
Ty for reading, luv
🌹
xo
B
It's lovely seeing you tonight and I'm glad to read your comments. I appreciate the insightful reply and I'm thrilled you enjoyed it. It's the artwork that inspired me, too. Well, and my love of all things that are submissive... 😉
Ty for reading, luv
🌹
xo
B
12th Feb 2021 8:09pm
12th Feb 2021 8:20pm
... because she new THAT action had particular consequences...
;)
😈
Ty my friend
🌹
xo
;)
😈
Ty my friend
🌹
xo
12th Feb 2021 8:19pm
12th Feb 2021 8:38pm
Ty for reading and your comments, dear FeNyX
I'm so appreciative of you!
🌹
xo
I'm so appreciative of you!
🌹
xo
13th Feb 2021 3:24am
13th Feb 2021 3:49am
13th Feb 2021 6:21am
This is a perfect explanation of a subs love for her master. Into the mind of the sub and knowing the master's ultimate pleasure is being given an excuse for hard fucking that makes her feel fulfilled and filled.
Possibly the most open piece you have written
Genuine respect.
Richard
Possibly the most open piece you have written
Genuine respect.
Richard
13th Feb 2021 8:27am
True Romantic Erotic Artistry Blue....
Your poem title and illustration are the perfect foreplay to your masterful erotic poetry.
Some of the most beautiful and romantic things in life are best kept secret ( my way of metaphorically looking at your rose ball gag). There truly is so much rare romance in this sensual verse with the exchange of power that you vividly express with this arousing write....Blue your erotic poetry is a beautiful Valentine treat!!!
Your poem title and illustration are the perfect foreplay to your masterful erotic poetry.
Some of the most beautiful and romantic things in life are best kept secret ( my way of metaphorically looking at your rose ball gag). There truly is so much rare romance in this sensual verse with the exchange of power that you vividly express with this arousing write....Blue your erotic poetry is a beautiful Valentine treat!!!
16th Feb 2021 5:50pm
Nice opposites, perhaps. The rose (with thorns) as a gag and also a rose as a sign of love. Love of pain? A gag while she is also getting spanked (or is that part of MY fantasy as you are being ''drilled''?
16th Feb 2021 5:57pm
lol..
To each his (or her) own!
It's within your own preferences, what you might see or desire in your takeaway from reading.....
Which I really like, btw... Ty so much for taking the time to read and sharing your insights, Robert.
I thoroughly enjoyed it and always welcome your visit ;)
🌹
xo
B
To each his (or her) own!
It's within your own preferences, what you might see or desire in your takeaway from reading.....
Which I really like, btw... Ty so much for taking the time to read and sharing your insights, Robert.
I thoroughly enjoyed it and always welcome your visit ;)
🌹
xo
B
16th Feb 2021 11:39pm
Couldn't help but think a bit of saliva might be dripping down her sides as she smile.
Naughty stuff Blue, well done!
Naughty stuff Blue, well done!
14th Sep 2022 4:24am
Consistency is his demand
As she quivers like a dove
Whose olive branch is a promise
to do better next time
But she knows full well
What he has in store for her
So without even a fig leaf
To hide her naked truth
She goes sunnyside up
To pay the devil she knows
His due
With her egg white derriere
Soft as the feathers
of her epidermal wings
You write the scene with the expertise of a queen bowing to her king. Outstanding my darling.
Love you my doll,
John
As she quivers like a dove
Whose olive branch is a promise
to do better next time
But she knows full well
What he has in store for her
So without even a fig leaf
To hide her naked truth
She goes sunnyside up
To pay the devil she knows
His due
With her egg white derriere
Soft as the feathers
of her epidermal wings
You write the scene with the expertise of a queen bowing to her king. Outstanding my darling.
Love you my doll,
John
14th Sep 2022 5:22am
Was she insolent in her tardiness purposely and simply because she needed so badly to feel all that she knew he needed to give?? Oh how she smiled so wide and wonderfully so behind her bindings... The perfect match— everything her heart and body desired; he satiating her submissive propensity with his kingly dominant dominion. Two souls connecting in every way their dreams were able to imagined... and then some.
I'm all aglow basking within your poetic prowess and taken away on the wings of want and need that your pen skillfully scribes.
Thank you for seeing what you do... it's stunning.
Love you, too my darling,
🌹 💙
-S
I'm all aglow basking within your poetic prowess and taken away on the wings of want and need that your pen skillfully scribes.
Thank you for seeing what you do... it's stunning.
Love you, too my darling,
🌹 💙
-S
31st Jan 2024 3:29pm
Phenomenal!! One of the strongest writers I have come across on this site.
31st Jan 2024 4:55pm
💪🏻
hahaha.... You really do find the hidden gems..... thanks for uncovering this one, it's a personal favorite.... and totally autobiographical.... Mwahahahaha.
I am humbly grateful for your eyes upon my ink.
🌹B
hahaha.... You really do find the hidden gems..... thanks for uncovering this one, it's a personal favorite.... and totally autobiographical.... Mwahahahaha.
I am humbly grateful for your eyes upon my ink.
🌹B
