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IT WAS IMPOSSIBLE

I tried,
I really did,
but I failed.
I tried not
to think of you
for a day,
but I failed.
I tried not
to think of you
for an hour,
but I failed.
I tried not
to think of you
for a minute,
but I failed.
I tried not
to think of you
for a second,
but I failed.
WHY?
Because you are
ALWAYS
on my mind.
Guess what?
I am so glad and
hope YOU are too.

Written by TheOralizer

Published 12th Feb 2021

#admiration #emotions #happiness #inspirational #love

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Re. IT WAS IMPOSSIBLE

Anonymous

12th Feb 2021 3:35pm

You're a certifiable romantic, Oral! ... it's just so beautiful and sentimental, but not sappy ~ not even remotely! It's such a simple sentiment, yet I swoon at the piece as a whole. The delivery and format hits me in all my girly feels. I cannot avoid my immediate "Awwww" and that's not an easy get. Not by me- by anyone. I try to elicit that emotion from readers all the time and fail.... so, to me it's really an accomplishment. I truly loved it, so much! Thank you for sharing this, it's totally going in my RL to read over again.
Much love, hugs and kisses,
🌹
xoxoxoxo
-S