Midnight girl

Very sexy and sort of sad. Beautiful visuals
Great read, awesome write
Must say her outfit sounds hot as f#ck
Love and light  
Ron xx

Ah yes!, very sexy and sort of sad... A bit of exciting imagery in the darkness of night. I love the night... Pretty sure I am a vampire given my love of the darkness. If the outfit fits, wear it. lol Thank you so much for the compliment Ron.

Sex and a little darkness
Kristina Xx

Great and engaging write, meets the A+ level. Thanks for sharing. Hugs and peace, oral

I always hope to aspire to your A+ level Oral. Thank you so much for the wonderful comment and feedback like yours is why I keep posting. Double hugs. xoxo 🌃🎆☔

how delicious...the prey is on the prowl...

thank you for the tantalizing treat :).

Perfect, "the prey is on the prowl" - you definitely get it! Sometimes you cannot determine which is the prey and  the predator. I love delicious and tantalizing and I am so happy to see you poetrician... 🦅🕸️

Nice sensual write ... stirring ... such tingles ... bravo dear poetess ...

If I can get stirring and tingles from you LDF then I feel I have accomplished something! I hope to give you more in the future. I can do girl on girl in the right circumstances... :p  🎆🦅🕸️

If you are stunned then I am happy Danny. ;) I do adore your comments and there was definitely pleasure and passion throughout but I really love emotionally connected. The back alleys of Edinburgh and the underground tunnels, cold and dark places to lose myself in someone else! Lovely... 🌃☔🕸️🕷️

It's an ongoing process; keep trying until both of us are exhausted and then try some more... ;) 🔥🌹🔥🌹

Dearest Kristina, you write intriguing poems. I read this as kind of a double life scenario. This passage struck me most,
"And in the dark with a longed smile
She leaves to look for pain"
The lines describe well how, what I imagine, BDSM urges feel. I don't need to go out looking for pain. I inflict enough on myself. Bravissima Goddess BD❣❣

I love intriguing, of course there is always at least a little strange Kristina speak mixed in.

A very good correlation you made there. Not unusual for a little BDSM to sneak in there too. :p I suppose I could have said pleasure but where is the fun in that. lol 👠🌃👠

Stop inflicting pain on yourself unless you enjoy it. I am sure there are others to handle that task... :) 🔪🔪🩹🩹

I chuckled at the last line of the second paragraph in your comment. I will try to not beat myself up  so much and no I don't enjoy self-abuse. As far as someone else to reign pain on me, I am taking applications, please attach a resume/CV.and demonstratives 🤠🐻💋🐻💋🐻

You had me at stiletto x

lol Oh yes! Stilettoes always do the trick don't they? So happy I had you for a minute with this one Tim. 👠🌃👠

Another amazing classic

I love the way your
Words flow

LIKE floating in the deep sea
GETTING super wet

Extra cyber hugs

Well I feel really good if you say it's a classic Trome.

My words flow all over the place so I am glad you are able to understand me so well! lol ;) 🦅🕸️

Oh, I love that... The floating and the getting super wet!
Extra extra hugs back.. 👠🌃👠

love the image....

Thanks BC, I owed you some imagery so now we are even until next time. lol 👠🌃👠

"The audience would have been stunned..
Summed up already!..
Thanks X it is such an intriguing poem..

You are very welcome Numer... I love to stun the audience, otherwise why have one. lol ;) That is the second intriguing I received on this one; I like that! 👠🌃👠

Damn hot sexy poem.  The freaks come at night. I mean that in a good way.  Keep on writing

I know exactly what you mean, I love the night! (and I am a freak) lol Always happy to bring you some freaky sexiness. :)  👠🌃👠

Kristina .......






Another delicious spill

That was quite the pause Wh1skey... had me wondering  what cums next... delicious is great. ;) And YES! I noticed  that your comment was EXACTLY at midnight and that is awesome! 👠🌃👠

K-XXX, This explicit, descriptive, and arousing write is the pinnacle of erotica.
Your vivid erotic poetry is such an experience I swear I feel I owe your protagonist $$$$ for a job well done, lol
.... ''They are drunk to the bottom ...
She is filled with him'' ...  INTOXICATING Poetry!!!!

Oh yes! I love mounting the pinnacle... Vivid erotica and whoring; yeah, where is my money? lol Yeah I am sure you know what she is filled with... cannot waste the anti-depressent (ref: older Waterfall post).👠🌃👠

She leaves to look for...cash by the sound of it, lol. Is this the sequel to the one you wrote about coffee?

Yeah, that's definitely one interpretation. lol
I had not really thought about it that way but now that you mention it, I see how it could fit the bill (pun intended) as a sequel or a prequel...good thinking - I like the connection aspect! 👠🌃👠

We've had friends that some would had looked upon and thought abuse or definitely misuse. The had prints, the hickeys, the teeth marks, the rug burns, and the list continues only to say they returned over and over. There were and still is nights that we are at home, even in bed and we company appear. We receive phone calls that ends with them coming over. They may wear long sleeve blouses for a few days after a nightly visit with us, but for this period the demons have been quieted. The darkness have been pushed back into the recesses of their minds. They don't look upon us as marriage material or lets move in together material and that also serves both of our purpose. We are simply tools being used by each other to fix that thing, to scratch that itch. Tight piece Boo  

I always appreciate and love getting a tight from you I_IS_ME... There is a lot to this comment and you could definitely apply it to some BDSM writes. Needs definitely come in many forms and many cannot be understood by everyone. Whether it be bondage, rough sex, sex in public, other fetishes and such... And that certainly can come down to being tools or a deeper connection and exploration. I like the description of pushing back the darkness and quieting demons, totally get that. Thank you so much for the comment and feedback! 👠🌃👠⛓️🩸

I sense Midnight girl wears many hats
could be a nurse, a teacher, or clothes maker
and addictions may be present beyond appearances
who knows where intrigue may take her!

Oh yes! You definitely see below the surface and get it! You can see a passionate woman rather than just passion or sex. And those addictions go far beyond appearances. And that intrigue will keep her always searching and exploring to experience life to it's fullest. This is so intuitive and I am so impressed by it. Thank you so much. 👠🌃👠

Loved the voyeuristic approach to this piece, giving us a peek into both the scenery and expectation and then the eventual fulfillment.
Excellent naughty verse.

Really happy I could take you on this voyeuristic stroll through my mind. ;) I love that it was a complete experience; I  always hope to provide that. Thank you so much for the compliment! I love the naughty verses. 🎆🦅🕸️

I envisioned this in Pirates Alley in New Orleans on a foggy night. Loved the libertine spirit here of freedom to experience sensual abandon. You write this better than the best I've known. An erotic scene to remember.

John

Oh yes! Nothing like this would ever happen New Orleans. lol Just the name Pirates Alley makes me want to go there and do stuff. I love the thought of a foggy cool night and adding to the sounds of the night. And thank you so much for the absolutely incredible compliment. I love the imagery you got off of this. I really appreciate your thoughts so much. 🎆🦅🕸️

Not sure what I can add but I will.  I love the perverse idea yet, it feels somewhat sad as someone mentioned.  Sounds pretty exciting actually.

There are definitely different aspects to this one. The emptiness, loneliness, and sadness that might accompany  such a search but also the excitement of just going out and fulfilling carnal desires. Thank you so much for the comment Lj. 🌃🎆☔