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''I do not drink
I do not smoke''
''Nice, you want a medal?''
''I am in a shell,
Don't like to socialize much,
Can't get into a relationship,
Can't seem able to love''
''So you have a big problem...
Deal with it. In the meantime
I shall ligfht one up...
And go for a beer....
With my wife of twenty years.''
I do not smoke''
''Nice, you want a medal?''
''I am in a shell,
Don't like to socialize much,
Can't get into a relationship,
Can't seem able to love''
''So you have a big problem...
Deal with it. In the meantime
I shall ligfht one up...
And go for a beer....
With my wife of twenty years.''
Published 11th Feb 2021
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11th Feb 2021 3:09pm
Anonymous
- Edited 11th Feb 2021 4:00pm
11th Feb 2021 3:59pm
I like the dichotomy! it'll be interesting to see if people identify with one, over the other... clever, Robert!
nicely penned :)
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xo
nicely penned :)
🌹
xo
11th Feb 2021 4:01pm
12th Feb 2021 8:01am
Comfortable and well known to one's very marrow.
Very nice piece
Check out "Experience" and "Making Love From a Love Connection" if you get the chance
Very nice piece
Check out "Experience" and "Making Love From a Love Connection" if you get the chance
Anonymous
- Edited 20th Sep 2021 1:45am
12th Feb 2021 12:12pm
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16th Feb 2021 4:59am
I've gotten the "you want a medal" response so many times, I can identify with this.
Nicely done robert.
Nicely done robert.
