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the child
I'm off kilter
feeling the sin of the my damnation
egos speak then leave me to pay the price alone
I hurt, inside I shiver
I know which voice is mine...sometimes
funny things is I'm satisfied to let her talk
sitting in the shadows listening to her
I don't mind the solitude
I'm weary of this place
to her, this is an exciting brand new adventure
she is my spirit child
I bore her in pain
my ego cracked then splintered
and out of nowhere she appeared
I sit in silence
the child vows to go down with me
I'm no longer alone
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Re: Re. the child
11th Feb 2021 11:41pm
Re. the child
11th Feb 2021 2:49pm
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11th Feb 2021 11:42pm
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11th Feb 2021 11:42pm
Re. the child
You're a talent whose artful and emotional truths always brush against my own. I'm so affected by this, it reaches me in places that were unexpected.... Ty so much for your honesty and such tremendously crafted speech.
Much love,
🌹
xo
-B
Much love,
🌹
xo
-B
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Re: Re. the child
11th Feb 2021 11:44pm
good afternoon beautiful Blue thank you from my heart this is a true story some might not understand I admit it leaves me wondering but the truth none the less... I deeply appreciate your thoughts 🌹
Re. the child
11th Feb 2021 3:26pm
It feels good to read you once again, sweetpea. Your writing is always tragically beautiful and felt from heart to heart. First on my list after a long break away!❤
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Re: Re. the child
11th Feb 2021 11:45pm
hey there beautiful Pandora it's wonderful to see you lady I'm happy you have returned 💕
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11th Feb 2021 11:45pm
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12th Feb 2021 2:11pm
Re. the child
11th Feb 2021 11:20pm
Crimsin, your imaginative writing is brilliantly vivid with this beautiful dark poem,
....shhhh my spirit has friends and I am trying to listen in on their nefarious plans for me inside my head,. lol
Incredible dark write!
....shhhh my spirit has friends and I am trying to listen in on their nefarious plans for me inside my head,. lol
Incredible dark write!
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Re: Re. the child
12th Feb 2021 2:12pm
good morning dearest poet thank you most graciously for the love here I deeply appreciate your thoughts you made me giggle 🌹
Re. the child
12th Feb 2021 11:20am
Perhaps her willingness to go down into the abyss with you will be the thing that lifts you to the pinnacles you seek
This is just one more example why I love your ink
This is just one more example why I love your ink
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Re: Re. the child
12th Feb 2021 2:13pm
good morning dearest poet thank you for feeling this write I love your perspective and deeply appreciate your thoughts 💕
Re. the child
16th Feb 2021 4:56am
Wonderful work crimsin. You tend to capture something so tender and innocent, it's as if it holds your hand and walks you through this phase.
Excellent spill.
Excellent spill.
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