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Lying in the Bath (2021)
molecules of water touching
molecules of me
molecules of water sharing
warmth through entropy
molecules of water lifting
molecules of me
molecules in constant motion
moving through a sea
of molecules in planetary
coalescing clouds
temporarily appearing
to disappear as shrouds
surrounding all the thoughts and feelings
coming just to leave
molecules that keep vibrating
in tapestries which weave
memories forever fading
personality -
molecules which here are made by
unseen energy
as molecules in constant motion
moving all I see
like the swells upon the ocean
as molecules of me
molecules of me
molecules of water sharing
warmth through entropy
molecules of water lifting
molecules of me
molecules in constant motion
moving through a sea
of molecules in planetary
coalescing clouds
temporarily appearing
to disappear as shrouds
surrounding all the thoughts and feelings
coming just to leave
molecules that keep vibrating
in tapestries which weave
memories forever fading
personality -
molecules which here are made by
unseen energy
as molecules in constant motion
moving all I see
like the swells upon the ocean
as molecules of me
Published 9th Feb 2021
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9th Feb 2021 9:39pm
Love it BC. You tapped into my thoughts because I was thinking about how I need a nice long hot bath with salts and candles... Another beautiful piece from you!
thank you both for your comment and the beautiful vision now playing in my mind Kristina...Lawrence
