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Life Struggles
Water
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Water
Nobody cares
Until they see you drowning
Written by
Simon_III_Msibi
(Mandla Msibi)
Published
7th Feb 2021
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Re. Water
Honoria
7th Feb 2021 4:47pm
Dear MM,
And let’s hope they care even then. Some days I wonder. I think you’re right, so often we can overlook and be overlooked when we’re suffering until there is a cry for help in some manner. While your write is brief it’s very powerful. H🌷
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Re: Re. Water
Simon_III_Msibi
(Mandla Msibi)
9th Feb 2021 5:48am
Hey H
Well it's crazy to think that we live in a time in which we are so connected yet still we don't truly 'see' each other.
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Re. Water
evee
15th Apr 2021 3:34pm
Say a lot when their the ones that tried to drown you.
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Re: Re. Water
Simon_III_Msibi
(Mandla Msibi)
15th Apr 2021 4:07pm
Oh that cuts deep
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