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Memories of Snow
The Sun is beating on my melting path
While your golden road still shines
The sins of my false memories
A rap sheet of uncommitted crimes
A fading shadow reaching out to you
Turned into hollow rhyme
All the footprints stepping by your side
Were never two of mine
All the regrets piling up inside
My enemy is time
The border drawn delicate and fine
A fool never crossed that line
While your golden road still shines
The sins of my false memories
A rap sheet of uncommitted crimes
A fading shadow reaching out to you
Turned into hollow rhyme
All the footprints stepping by your side
Were never two of mine
All the regrets piling up inside
My enemy is time
The border drawn delicate and fine
A fool never crossed that line
Published 7th Feb 2021
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7th Feb 2021 3:12am
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7th Feb 2021 3:29am
A beautiful yet sobering piece of writing JJ.
HC: thinking 'boarder' should be border?
HC: thinking 'boarder' should be border?
7th Feb 2021 3:49am
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14th Feb 2021 3:13pm
I don’t get snow where I live, but the the images are so vivid and heartfelt it’s very perceptible. Time sure does something to us when we look back and reflect.
Excellent flow and rhyme sir. The emotions runs deep.
Excellent flow and rhyme sir. The emotions runs deep.
24th Oct 2023 10:06am
You have such authenticity in the way you write... it comes through so clearly... a beautiful balance of courage and vulnerability...
