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streaming a blink of insomnia's consciousness.
did I set the alarm?
why wasn't I honest ?
i shoulda peed.
my whole body is sore.
::cramps::
i need to check the renter's insurance.
that was some ridiculously hot reading.
why didn't I get a text?
where is my patience?
my ass is too fat
::pillow flip::
Ahh cold pillow.
I hate Guy Fieri.
I'm hungry.
I wish I had fries or dark chocolate?
Both.
Fuck!
Repeat, my ass is too fat
I hope Biden kicks ass.
this vaccination roll out, tho
I forgot about men in uniform
why is that so attractive?
damn, mom and her labored breathing
I'm not ready yet
who will hold most of my ire then?
I guess I'll call her in the morning
make a promise to myself
try to spend more time, even if I'm not wanting
my shoulder really hurts.
is there more creamer?
i'll be so pist without coffee.
Mmmm, I fucking love coffee
more than sex, I think
maybe not THAT much
cicadas?
or are those crickets?
maybe I should cum?
I'll just glance at my phone
I shouldn't have been on my phone that long.
damn that site.
my writing sucks.
I'll never be enough
it seems impossible to finish that
this song makes me horny.
that poet did too.
It's that attitude
ignorance IS apparently my bliss
c'mon, I'm so fucking predictable
maybe I'll just nap tomorrow
I'll sleep in 5 more minutes.
****
carousel of sleeplessness
revolving through a mental mess
time blinks in random flashes
sleep is evasive
looking at the clock
only seconds have
paraded...
insomnia, now integrated.
Author's Note
4am stream of consciousness download
inspired by the 10 sec comp, this being about 3 minutes or probably longer so I just posted for s&g...... resistance is fucking futile.
inspired by the 10 sec comp, this being about 3 minutes or probably longer so I just posted for s&g...... resistance is fucking futile.
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Re. streaming ~ blinks of insomnia's infiltration
6th Feb 2021 9:33am
Stream of consciousness ... you never know where you end up or flow through only where you start ... brave awesome write ... Bless and love ...
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Re: Re. streaming ~ blinks of insomnia's infiltration
7th Feb 2021 00:39am
Ty for reading dear FeNyX
Just a late night thought dump..
You're kind for stopping by last night
I appreciate you
💜 xo
Just a late night thought dump..
You're kind for stopping by last night
I appreciate you
💜 xo
Re. streaming ~ blinks of insomnia's infiltration
Dear BV,
LOL!!!!
4 am musings...
What am I going to wear to work?
My thighs look like elephant legs.
I forgot to run that piece off for-
I’d give my soul for some cake!
Right! Elephant thighs. No cake!
My back! Oy!
Sh*t! I really should have peed.
Too cold to get up now.
Fabulous! Just fabulous. Non sleeper? Totally get it.
Great write, best of luck in the comp. H🌷
LOL!!!!
4 am musings...
What am I going to wear to work?
My thighs look like elephant legs.
I forgot to run that piece off for-
I’d give my soul for some cake!
Right! Elephant thighs. No cake!
My back! Oy!
Sh*t! I really should have peed.
Too cold to get up now.
Fabulous! Just fabulous. Non sleeper? Totally get it.
Great write, best of luck in the comp. H🌷
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Re: Re. streaming ~ blinks of insomnia's infiltration
7th Feb 2021 00:49am
Lovely H,
I'm glad you enjoyed this and it made you laugh! I'm very appreciative of the generous RL add
This was a whim and I hid it before finally going to bed and then thought... why? It's as real as it gets
and who cares, anyway?.. haha...I just now put it back on my page, I guess I'm feeling brave.
Your own additions for yourself were Ahhhhhmazing... you kill me, lmao!
I love your visits always.. ;)
Much love,
🌹
xo
B
I'm glad you enjoyed this and it made you laugh! I'm very appreciative of the generous RL add
This was a whim and I hid it before finally going to bed and then thought... why? It's as real as it gets
and who cares, anyway?.. haha...I just now put it back on my page, I guess I'm feeling brave.
Your own additions for yourself were Ahhhhhmazing... you kill me, lmao!
I love your visits always.. ;)
Much love,
🌹
xo
B
Re: Re. streaming ~ blinks of insomnia's infiltration
7th Feb 2021 4:33am
I knew this went missing! You are so lucky you thought twice and put this back out there. I totally understand feeling nauseous about hitting that submit button. You wouldn’t be an artist if you were self assured and cocky. So I’ll do that for you. You have a rare talent for a gift with words. Now stop this nonsense before you get my Italian up and I get annoyed! 😉
Seriously, this write was a wonderful snippet of not being able to shut off the brain even when you’re desperate for sleep. There are sooooo many of us in that rudderless boat. Xx
Seriously, this write was a wonderful snippet of not being able to shut off the brain even when you’re desperate for sleep. There are sooooo many of us in that rudderless boat. Xx
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Re: Re. streaming ~ blinks of insomnia's infiltration
7th Feb 2021 5:47am
hahaha..
YES MA'AM!
lol
ok ok! Uncle!
I am on your same page now..
🤞🏻
I promise
Ty for knocking some sense into me
🌹
xo
*big hugs*
YES MA'AM!
lol
ok ok! Uncle!
I am on your same page now..
🤞🏻
I promise
Ty for knocking some sense into me
🌹
xo
*big hugs*
Re. streaming ~ blinks of insomnia's infiltration
6th Feb 2021 10:15am
Looking at your phone is addictive
And as for your writing
Its much better than mine
In wording and form
And as for your writing
Its much better than mine
In wording and form
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Re: Re. streaming ~ blinks of insomnia's infiltration
7th Feb 2021 00:51am
All due respect, C.. you MUST be dreaming.... that's a big...
"no fucking way"
Your kindness is appreciated, tho
I'm lucky to have my friend
Ty, C
🌹
xo
"no fucking way"
Your kindness is appreciated, tho
I'm lucky to have my friend
Ty, C
🌹
xo
Re. streaming ~ blinks of insomnia's infiltration
6th Feb 2021 10:46am
Re: Re. streaming ~ blinks of insomnia's infiltration
7th Feb 2021 00:54am
Grace, you're very kind... I appreciate you reading and taking the time to comment.
This is just my weirdo ticking of thoughts...
I am glad you stopped by...💜
🌹
xo
This is just my weirdo ticking of thoughts...
I am glad you stopped by...💜
🌹
xo
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Re. streaming a blink of insomnia's consciousness.
7th Feb 2021 3:26am
We think everyone goes through these episodes with sleep, personally we have decided that it's our subconscious trying to work some things out. You can never get back sleep but we have come to term with these episodes and we agree to sleep at another time, maybe by going to bed earlier tomorrow. But at that moment we let our brain have it's day in court until we can't remember dozing off. Tight piece lady we think that you have reminded everyone of something here
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Re: Re. streaming a blink of insomnia's consciousness.
7th Feb 2021 3:54am
Me,
I thank you for reading and commenting (I didn't expect that!) I am right there with you in agreement. I just let sleeplessness have it's due time and try and make up for it later, as well.
Although sometimes that can turn into a slippery slope if I don't ever really catch up. I know when it starts to snowball into a bit of crazy that I need to crack down and really get quality rest. This piece was probably on that cusp and I had it hidden in all my other poems, because I thought it just kinda nonsensical (I guess?!) ... haha... I don't think anyone else will see it... so I really appreciate your thoughts. ;)
🌹
xo
B
I thank you for reading and commenting (I didn't expect that!) I am right there with you in agreement. I just let sleeplessness have it's due time and try and make up for it later, as well.
Although sometimes that can turn into a slippery slope if I don't ever really catch up. I know when it starts to snowball into a bit of crazy that I need to crack down and really get quality rest. This piece was probably on that cusp and I had it hidden in all my other poems, because I thought it just kinda nonsensical (I guess?!) ... haha... I don't think anyone else will see it... so I really appreciate your thoughts. ;)
🌹
xo
B
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Re: Re. streaming a blink of insomnia's consciousness.
7th Feb 2021 7:12am
hahahaha...Coffee or sex... it's a tough call... hmm
I love coffee so much there's odes to it written here... like two or three that still appear and I think I erased a few.... yet there's a zillion about love, sex, romance... 😂
Thank you for reading and your thoughtful comments, Danny.... My embarrassment, which caused me to hide this poem earlier.. is lessening and lessening.
Thx
🌹
xo
I love coffee so much there's odes to it written here... like two or three that still appear and I think I erased a few.... yet there's a zillion about love, sex, romance... 😂
Thank you for reading and your thoughtful comments, Danny.... My embarrassment, which caused me to hide this poem earlier.. is lessening and lessening.
Thx
🌹
xo
Re. streaming a blink of insomnia's consciousness.
7th Feb 2021 6:51am
BV this Insomnia write is ingenious. Damn if you don't hit every Alarming thought ringing in our anxious minds running on a loop in our sleepless nights. Knowing I am not Crazy and alone you give comfort to my coo coo who left the clock and sits perched on my headboard whispering all of my mistakes, regrets, worries, and even the little things in life. As we all know the only cure for insomnia is the exact moment when it is time to get up, ughhhhh........Your crafty design of this write is Brilliant!
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Re: Re. streaming a blink of insomnia's consciousness.
7th Feb 2021 6:57am
You're also an eagle eye!!
I had this hidden and then quietly unhid it after I had already written another poem... thinking it would go unnoticed... I'm supposed to stand up and be proud (I'm trying Honoria!) but it's a difficult poem to thrust out there. I wasn't very confident in it... Your comments are like a salve on a wicked burn... man, they're soothing.
Ty Ty, Ron.
You are so kind and gracious
I'm extremely lucky -
Much love,
🌹
xo
🐝
I had this hidden and then quietly unhid it after I had already written another poem... thinking it would go unnoticed... I'm supposed to stand up and be proud (I'm trying Honoria!) but it's a difficult poem to thrust out there. I wasn't very confident in it... Your comments are like a salve on a wicked burn... man, they're soothing.
Ty Ty, Ron.
You are so kind and gracious
I'm extremely lucky -
Much love,
🌹
xo
🐝
Re. streaming a blink of insomnia's consciousness.
7th Feb 2021 11:54pm
WOW! You have shared amazing feelings. Thanks for being so open and honest. Hugs, kisses, and peace, oral
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Re: Re. streaming a blink of insomnia's consciousness.
8th Feb 2021 1:25am
Thx, Oral
it's nice to hear from you
I thought you might have forgotten about me...
it's nice to hear from you
I thought you might have forgotten about me...
Re: Re. streaming a blink of insomnia's consciousness.
8th Feb 2021 1:26am
How could anyone forget beauty, creativity, and passion. Hugs, kisses, and peace. oral
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8th Feb 2021 1:28am
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Re. streaming a blink of insomnia's consciousness.
14th Feb 2021 5:48am
Perfect example of thoughts randomly plaguing the mind at the oddest hour. I've been waking up at 3am myself during the work week with endless thoughts, only to then struggle to get out of bed before the sunrise for a quick morning run.
Hope your bout was only for a night or two and you get your restful sleep back.
Hope your bout was only for a night or two and you get your restful sleep back.
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