It was not a dream

Wow just wow
Hot, steamy, submissive/ Dominant piece
Great write, great read. Cool Shower needed
Loved it from start to finish
Love and light
Ron xx

Absolutely love the Wows Ron...
Happy to help steam things up for you
And cold showers are always great
Make you feel alive. So does submissive/Dominant sex.
I am so happy you liked it from start to finish...
Possibly we should say, Love and dark... ⛓️🩸🌙
Xx 🌹

True
LOVE AND DARK
RON XX

passion runs through the lines
leading me line after line.
enjoyed the erotic read.

I really enjoyed your comment, 'passion runs through the lines' - Oh yes!, I love that you could feel the passion. And absolutely love that I could lead you with each line. ⛓️🩸🌙🌹

Damn hot poem. Keep on writing.

Thank you Francisco, I am so happy you felt the heat and as always I appreciate your encouragement so much... ⛓️🩸🌙🌹

You have written another erotic masterpiece.  He gave me an UP experience. Thanks for sharing.Hugs and peace. oral

You melt my heart Oral, I am so happy you think it is an erotic masterpiece. And oh how I love the UP experience. I want to live life always being source of making things stand UP if you know what I mean. Thank you for the awesome comment. Hugs and kisses. ⛓️🩸🌙🌹

True salvation is not always in swimming against the current, sometime when seeking true enlightenment we need to travel deeper into the darkness. We have sought out our sanity within the deepest recesses of madness only to find pure please within the most intense pain. Love and hate is so entwined how could one exist without the other. This is seriously tight work X, it makes us think of other times and that's tight

Oh I_IS_ME, you are so right.... travel deeper into the darkness. I love the darkness and cold, some call me crazy but for some it is the true Nirvana. Those recesses of madness are the most intense... The most intense pain can be the most intense feeling and pleasure of all. Love and hate entwined, one could not exist without the other. Thank you for your thoughts an d feedback, perfectly insightful... Tight x2... ⛓️🩸🌙🌹

A dream I wouldn't want to wake up from ....

Like

Dreams of me are the best Poetseak.... It's a fact... lol. Don't  sleep, I have needs... lol ⛓️🩸🌙🌹

Dearest, Kristina
I am starting to understand better the BDSM lifestyle. Your beautifully written verse shines light on this rather dark passionate practice. This passage says much, "It's a strange game, the right to live without rights." The right to enslave oneself to a cruel master. This passage explains well the appeal of freeing oneself from conventional thoughts regarding what is passion, what is ecstasy, "Several hours, trampling logic" Thank you for this wonderful, enlightening verse...bravissima, sweet BD🙏❣️❣️🌹

Oh and super sexy pic 😉

I am glad you found it enlightening GW. It's not for everyone. I love how you expressed 'freeing oneself from conventional thoughts regarding what is passion, what is ecstasy' I always want to explore and push past the boundaries and find it very exciting and rewarding. Giving yourself over to someone completely ironically is very freeing. You are fully immersed in their desires and can forget about everything else and serving in the other role is fully immersive as well. And pain is a very strong feeling that can really heighten your senses. It really adds a new dimension.  

and thank you! :) ⛓️🩸🌙🌹

My pleasure❣️❣️ That's an understandable point of view regarding pain. As I get older the pain is built-in.🤠

KristinaXXX, leaving her indelible mark in the erotic underground.
You have very cleverly submitted conflicting seductive word play enhancing your dominating write.
''Kiss and scream merged''...''rough and tenderness''...''Pain and passion''...''Pain and tenderness''.
Each word bounds your readers, keeping us at the mercy of your striking erotic poetry.
 Oh, to be the ''Reigning'' dom of this write,
''Pouring'' with power leaving the protagonist solemnly ''Sodden'' ( wet dream cum true)
....oops got carried away, lol, I'm back....
 Masterful Erotica K-xxx!

They put me in the dungeon of the erotic underground for being dangerous. Be careful or they  might put you there too. Still you will be in good company as far as I am concerned... Yes, I am really the dominate one keeping you at my mercy, at my Feet as it were. I wonder what all you would do as the reigning dom but the thought of being thoroughly 💦Sodden💦 certainly gives me some ideas, and a lot of imagery, about that.  Go straight to the Dungeon,  do not pass go, do not collect 200$. ⛓️🩸🌙🌹 KristinaXXX ...

Another wonderful write kristina

Again bringing light to the darkness inside

LOVED THIS!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Or maybe bringing darkness to the light inside someone else. Did I stir up some dark thoughts? :p

I knew you would appreciate this one and 'LOVED' is the best I could hope for. ⛓️🩸🌙🌹

What did I just read!..
Alright.. Alright..

You just read something wonderful and crazy, Numer - Me... But now I really want to know what you think you read... 🩸🌙🌹
⛓️ Tell me.. Tell me.. ⛓️

"It's a strange game, the right to live without rights..
"Be rough, and tenderness will flow like a river..
"Only by this cold and dark path  
am I able to reach sunrise…  

I can go on and on. There are so many lines up there for me..
You rendered me speechless I could have said something the first time I read it..
This is "Raw and Rare"..

Oh yes! Raw and Rare... I love that feedback and it definitely is to me. It really makes me happy if you connected with this one deeply and were left speechless, and thank you for coming back around to share more of your thoughts with me! ⛓️🩸🌙🌹

Always.. and
Good evening

Actually I did not know that Relic, so I learned something. ;) It's definitely not for everyone, but be careful if you immerse yourself in it you might have a hard time going back. That said, I don't believe in a hardliner view that you have to be a certain way all the time. Variety is the spice of life. People get introduced or gravitate to it for many reasons; for me it's very personal but not going to get into the specifics. Thank you so much for the incredible compliment in regards to erotic writing; I know mine is different and not for everyone but it comes from the core, it is not written for mass appeal and I know some people might not understand or like it. ⛓️🩸🌙🌹
That's a very sweet thing to say. xo 💖

I am really happy you saw the love aspect and not just the erotic. Love is so important when giving yourself over to someone else's deepest desires. Definitely a small insight into the soul. Thank you so much for the comment, Danny. I really appreciate your thoughts... ⛓️🩸🌙🌹

I love the surrealism of it all, that erotic fantasy coming alive in that "strange game".
I also love the use of the italics, along with the bolded ones, aesthetically pleasing and entrancing all at the same time.
Excellent verse Ms. Kristina. It's amazing.

The best fantasies are the ones you make a reality... ;)
Yes! Score. I love you Wally! Complimenting my impatient formatting tugs at my heart strings. Entrancing!, you are the best...
I actually really liked this one and I am very critical of my writing so that's saying something. I am really happy you did too. ⛓️🩸🌙🌹

Another read
So amazing
Seer

I always love another read but another comment too is so much more. A seer, yes I see everything! Just call me Brigit. But do you know what that means? ;) ⛓️🩸🌙🌹

Revisits are always flattering. Amazing more so. But Seer is definitely the best compliment. ⛓️🩸🌙🌹

The need to submit and feel discipline is celebrated with dark beauty in this sumptuous poem. You write this relationship with superbly nuanced subtleties that embrace me as I read. Truly a symphony of darkly lit eroticism.

John

Oh yes! being submissive can be a really beautiful and exciting role in a very passionate journey. This is really from the core and I am really happy you can see and appreciate this relationship through my writing. I being the conductor of or playing in a symphony or darkly lit  eroticism. Love that description so much. ⛓️🩸🌙🌹

To give freely in pleasure and in pain is an openness many cannot achieve... meticulous in manner in every painstaking breath...your openness is refreshing and beautiful x

That is so true, it is a different level and not for everyone. Meticulous indeed, I love how you describe this bond in pleasure and pain. And that you appreciate the openness. :) ⛓️🩸🌙🌹