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Becoming Trinity, Inside the mind of a female serial killer
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And as always thanks for looking
Black Sabbath : War Pig
https://youtube.com/watch?v=LQUXuQ6Zd9w
This is written in Bostonian language to the best of my ability. I was born in Boston this is not about me but I’m writing it from a first person perspective .
It was late on a Saddahday night in Septembah. it’s 1979 I’m 15 soon to be 16 in a month. I struggle with heroin addiction and still live at my parents house full time but am nevah they-ah these days most of the time.
Patricia, Vincenzo, and Johnny, had all gotten stinking drunk, like they do evry Friday and Saddahday night. Johnny my oldah brotha by five yeas , was a high school drop-out. He nevah worked a day in his life, a bully and thief at school. He dropped out at 16, already a mooch and a bum and full time alcoholic.
I am the gophah when I was around, which wasn’t often anymore. Drinks, snacks, and anything else they needed I had to fetch, or Johnny would beat my ass or something much worse, if he knew he’d get away with it. Oh yes___! it was a bitch when it was pahty time at the Dia’chanco house.
Tonight was no exception, Johnny was already harassing me, he was a Mutha- fuckah! especially when he drinks
“Hurry up and die Sarah! or Just hang it up already Sarah!”
He would grab me by both my sholdahs and with his dirty salty death breath, whispah in my face so my Mutha wouldn’t he-ah not that she gave a fuck anyway.
“you dirty little fuck hole!” He would laugh to himself while chanting, Sarah wets her bed at night, mommy quick! get the diapahs ! This bulllshit went on all night that, and the constant arguing and fist fighting between the bopsy-twins falling down and screaming at me to help them up for the 1 million and 99 fucking times !
I grabbed a six pack of bee-ah from the kitchen and brought it out to them and told them I was going out and won’t be home till tomorrow. Instead, I snuck up to my room.
My adrenaline level was at full throttle and I took off in a sprint up the staahz, but not before snatching my fathas keys to his gun cabnet that just happened to be on the kitchen table.
To be continued ...
And as always thanks for looking
Black Sabbath : War Pig
https://youtube.com/watch?v=LQUXuQ6Zd9w
This is written in Bostonian language to the best of my ability. I was born in Boston this is not about me but I’m writing it from a first person perspective .
It was late on a Saddahday night in Septembah. it’s 1979 I’m 15 soon to be 16 in a month. I struggle with heroin addiction and still live at my parents house full time but am nevah they-ah these days most of the time.
Patricia, Vincenzo, and Johnny, had all gotten stinking drunk, like they do evry Friday and Saddahday night. Johnny my oldah brotha by five yeas , was a high school drop-out. He nevah worked a day in his life, a bully and thief at school. He dropped out at 16, already a mooch and a bum and full time alcoholic.
I am the gophah when I was around, which wasn’t often anymore. Drinks, snacks, and anything else they needed I had to fetch, or Johnny would beat my ass or something much worse, if he knew he’d get away with it. Oh yes___! it was a bitch when it was pahty time at the Dia’chanco house.
Tonight was no exception, Johnny was already harassing me, he was a Mutha- fuckah! especially when he drinks
“Hurry up and die Sarah! or Just hang it up already Sarah!”
He would grab me by both my sholdahs and with his dirty salty death breath, whispah in my face so my Mutha wouldn’t he-ah not that she gave a fuck anyway.
“you dirty little fuck hole!” He would laugh to himself while chanting, Sarah wets her bed at night, mommy quick! get the diapahs ! This bulllshit went on all night that, and the constant arguing and fist fighting between the bopsy-twins falling down and screaming at me to help them up for the 1 million and 99 fucking times !
I grabbed a six pack of bee-ah from the kitchen and brought it out to them and told them I was going out and won’t be home till tomorrow. Instead, I snuck up to my room.
My adrenaline level was at full throttle and I took off in a sprint up the staahz, but not before snatching my fathas keys to his gun cabnet that just happened to be on the kitchen table.
To be continued ...
Published 2nd Feb 2021
| Edited 21st Aug 2023
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2nd Feb 2021 5:18am
Awesome ... With the music, like a script to a movie ... Well done ... paht two? Bless and love ...
2nd Feb 2021 5:28pm
lol FeNyX just messing around trying something i've have been working on a few years already.
Thanks for looking :)
Zazzles
Thanks for looking :)
Zazzles
Anonymous
2nd Feb 2021 5:29am
Fuuuck.... yes.
*taps foot repeatedly in angsty wait....
damn good write, sister!!
🤘🏻💥💣💥
*taps foot repeatedly in angsty wait....
damn good write, sister!!
🤘🏻💥💣💥
2nd Feb 2021 5:32pm
Hey there :) thanks for stopping by and giving your support BlueBoo♥️
I’m working on putting this altogether lol
Jackie 🌹♥️🤗
I’m working on putting this altogether lol
Jackie 🌹♥️🤗
2nd Feb 2021 5:31am
2nd Feb 2021 5:33pm
You rock! This was a crystal clear background for this woman making her sink the dark side into believable. And your story paired with the music made for a heart-racing cliff hanger. You really know how to write your characters however dark or light. Trinity's descent into madness is there for the reader to witness.
Xo
Your brother in ink,
John
Xo
Your brother in ink,
John
2nd Feb 2021 5:34pm
Hahah yeah it’s a brutal story unfolding 😬
Thanks for the visit John, I always appreciate your company and kind thoughts 🤗
Always
Your sister in ink
Jackie ♥️
Thanks for the visit John, I always appreciate your company and kind thoughts 🤗
Always
Your sister in ink
Jackie ♥️
2nd Feb 2021 6:39am
JACKIE!!!! You are toooooooo Cool. I love this creative write. You added so much flare with the Bostonian dialect. You should have heard me here acting out your characters aloud, LOL. The flow and narration was absolutely awesome. I think I will stay up and drink some bee-ahhs now! Great Entertaining write Jackie!!!!
2nd Feb 2021 5:36pm
Hey there Ron :) yeah Sarah is a crazy bitch! Happy you found your way here to enjoy this read
I am always grateful for your time thank you
Always
Your sister in ink
Jackie 🤗♥️
I am always grateful for your time thank you
Always
Your sister in ink
Jackie 🤗♥️
2nd Feb 2021 3:30pm
2nd Feb 2021 5:37pm
3rd Feb 2021 4:07am
Dear Z,
Oh boy! I enjoy thrillers even if I do cover my eyes and sleep with the lights on afterward. Your writing definitely captures the colloquialism of the Boston speech patterns and accent. Looking forward to the next installment. H🌷
Oh boy! I enjoy thrillers even if I do cover my eyes and sleep with the lights on afterward. Your writing definitely captures the colloquialism of the Boston speech patterns and accent. Looking forward to the next installment. H🌷
3rd Feb 2021 11:51pm
Hehe hello good woman 🤗
Thank you for stopping by and having a read .
This story has a mind of its own LOL
Stay tuned
Thoughtfully
Jackie 🌹
Thank you for stopping by and having a read .
This story has a mind of its own LOL
Stay tuned
Thoughtfully
Jackie 🌹
4th Feb 2021 12:01pm
Wow... sounds like the beginning of a real shit storm!! lol... exceptional storytelling my sweetness!
10th Feb 2021 6:53pm
Anonymous
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8th Feb 2021 5:23am
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10th Feb 2021 6:54pm
8th Feb 2021 8:54pm
fuxx yess Jackie! You kill me with your "bostonian".. loved this from the gate, darlin sister mine!
..thinkin since I am tardy to the party that I geta read them all at once.. this fact tickles my virgo of no patience. ;)
your pen always peaks my interest.. potent cliffhanger ur beautiful mind has made here, with solid backgrounding.
i'm off to be tickled more by the next one.
Loves you lots n always,
~d
..thinkin since I am tardy to the party that I geta read them all at once.. this fact tickles my virgo of no patience. ;)
your pen always peaks my interest.. potent cliffhanger ur beautiful mind has made here, with solid backgrounding.
i'm off to be tickled more by the next one.
Loves you lots n always,
~d
10th Feb 2021 6:55pm
Lmao! Such a wonderful view Dark my sistah ♥️
It’s nice to see you here back in Dup 👍🏻
Yes this story is writing itself lol
Thanks for the surprise darling 😊
Your sis ♥️
Jackie🌹 xoxox
It’s nice to see you here back in Dup 👍🏻
Yes this story is writing itself lol
Thanks for the surprise darling 😊
Your sis ♥️
Jackie🌹 xoxox
Anonymous
- Edited 26th Aug 2023 5:45pm
14th Feb 2021 11:04pm
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20th Dec 2021 5:22am
Flawless in the delivery for such a beautiful artistic endeavor as it slowly unfolds. You have true talent my poetess, and the narrative is very comprehended to read to follow the storyline… take a bow and a self-pat on the back; it is quite deserving for such a gift you have bestowed on us readers
