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a love, in quietude.
his
s i l e n c e
leaves her on edge
mental meets physical
the duality intoxicates
as well as
a
slight
tinge
of
terrified
not because she didn't like it
but
because,
she loved it
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Re. a love, in quietude.
1st Feb 2021 4:59am
Re: Re. a love, in quietude.
1st Feb 2021 3:48pm
Re: Re. a love, in quietude.
1st Feb 2021 10:34pm
Love me Tender is in my head right now.
So enjoy yourself and give it everything you got.
So enjoy yourself and give it everything you got.
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Re: Re. a love, in quietude.
1st Feb 2021 10:41pm
Re. a love, in quietude.
1st Feb 2021 5:00am
The absence of stimulation of the senses can be as powerful as the abundance ... great write ... Bless and love ... .
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Re: Re. a love, in quietude.
1st Feb 2021 3:50pm
I concur, dear FeNyX as well as the anticipation of impending touch or lack thereof... it can be exquisite torture, absolutely ;)
Ty for reading, your thoughts and the generous list add..
I'm grateful for you
🌹
xo
returned love & blessings ✨
Ty for reading, your thoughts and the generous list add..
I'm grateful for you
🌹
xo
returned love & blessings ✨
Re. a love, in quietude.
1st Feb 2021 5:20am
Re: Re. a love, in quietude.
Jackie,
Thank you for that... "classy".. a description that made me smile and really enjoy. You're a lovely lady and I'm grateful for you, always. I thoroughly appreciate the list add and love love love your visits on my page!! Always such a pleasure!
Sending warm, snuggly vibes and much love,
Stay safe!
Your BB,
💙💙💙
🌹
xo
Thank you for that... "classy".. a description that made me smile and really enjoy. You're a lovely lady and I'm grateful for you, always. I thoroughly appreciate the list add and love love love your visits on my page!! Always such a pleasure!
Sending warm, snuggly vibes and much love,
Stay safe!
Your BB,
💙💙💙
🌹
xo
Re. a love, in quietude.
1st Feb 2021 5:24am
Re: Re. a love, in quietude.
1st Feb 2021 3:57pm
Re: Re. a love, in quietude.
23rd Jan 2022 1:51am
his
quiet
ways
penetrated
deeper
into her soul
impactful
silence
touching
her
very
core
god....
she felt
unsure
of what
was to
come
yet
her heart
pounded
so fast
senses
began to
heighten
he
knew
her fire
that in
the
quietude
it...
raged wilder
waiting......
for
him
quiet
ways
penetrated
deeper
into her soul
impactful
silence
touching
her
very
core
god....
she felt
unsure
of what
was to
come
yet
her heart
pounded
so fast
senses
began to
heighten
he
knew
her fire
that in
the
quietude
it...
raged wilder
waiting......
for
him
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Re. a love, in quietude.
Anonymous
1st Feb 2021 5:53am
Blue-tiful :)
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Re: Re. a love, in quietude.
1st Feb 2021 4:03pm
Aww
You're the sweetest, Rachel
I am sooo loving your profile pic, btw...
It's just stunning, sexy, strong and powerful
You're a gorgeous badass in this photo and it makes me want to create a posse with you, so we all can go out drinking (in a perfect pandemic free dream world) and cause some fucking mayhem! ... Lmfao... (but that's just my fucked up weirdo thinking!!)... hahahaha... had to share that!! ;)
I LOVE your visits, lady.. much thanks for your comment ;
🌹
xo
You're the sweetest, Rachel
I am sooo loving your profile pic, btw...
It's just stunning, sexy, strong and powerful
You're a gorgeous badass in this photo and it makes me want to create a posse with you, so we all can go out drinking (in a perfect pandemic free dream world) and cause some fucking mayhem! ... Lmfao... (but that's just my fucked up weirdo thinking!!)... hahahaha... had to share that!! ;)
I LOVE your visits, lady.. much thanks for your comment ;
🌹
xo
Re: Re. a love, in quietude.
Anonymous
1st Feb 2021 5:57pm
Thank you for being so lovely <3, I was going through some old stuff and came across it. I didn't know if it was too much, or if I look like I'm chewing on a stick LOL Sometimes I like one in particular, but it looks SO BAD TINY. Speaking of profile pics. A friend of mine drew this beautiful bunny and I thought of you immediately. She was such a beautiful soft tawny, hazel-eyed rabbit. Effervescent and feminine, just like you :)
I would totally love that! I miss cocaine ladies ( the drink) and mayhem sooo badly. I'd be willing to be hurtin' the next day for us to go out and let our hair down, that would be so much fun <3
I would totally love that! I miss cocaine ladies ( the drink) and mayhem sooo badly. I'd be willing to be hurtin' the next day for us to go out and let our hair down, that would be so much fun <3
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Re. a love, in quietude.
1st Feb 2021 7:10am
Re: Re. a love, in quietude.
1st Feb 2021 4:06pm
Your lovely sentiments are a smile made.
Ty for reading and your comments / like.
I'm grateful and always enjoy seeing you, I appreciate you taking the time... very much so.
Much love and respect,
🌹
xo
-B
Ty for reading and your comments / like.
I'm grateful and always enjoy seeing you, I appreciate you taking the time... very much so.
Much love and respect,
🌹
xo
-B
Re. a love, in quietude.
1st Feb 2021 7:35am
Another masterpiece not requiring pages of words just sufficient.
One of your best Blue
One of your best Blue
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Richard,
Thank you for such warm sentiments. Your thoughtful remarks are very helpful and I'm grateful for you... *all sexy smiles, that you enjoyed my write.
Ty for stopping by -
Much love and respect,
🌹
xo
B
Thank you for such warm sentiments. Your thoughtful remarks are very helpful and I'm grateful for you... *all sexy smiles, that you enjoyed my write.
Ty for stopping by -
Much love and respect,
🌹
xo
B
Re. a love, in quietude.
1st Feb 2021 8:56am
Terrified of the beauty of what may come
Our attempt at denying ourself is a fleeting thought
as we nestle down into
a memory then proceed
Loved this Blue
Our attempt at denying ourself is a fleeting thought
as we nestle down into
a memory then proceed
Loved this Blue
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Re: Re. a love, in quietude.
1st Feb 2021 4:21pm
Dhyana,
How much do I love seeing you upon my page ? Probably as much as I love seeing Angus in his warm weather gear... (Omg, I just die of too much cuteness!!).. Hee hee!... Your thoughtfulness and considerate insights are succinct in their brevity and depth... knowing, that you know, that you speak from understanding, leaves me with such a cherished appreciation of your enjoyment at my little spill and at your comments.
Thank you, my dear friend.
Stay warm and keep Angus close... (pet him for me!)
Loads of love your way,
🌹
xo
How much do I love seeing you upon my page ? Probably as much as I love seeing Angus in his warm weather gear... (Omg, I just die of too much cuteness!!).. Hee hee!... Your thoughtfulness and considerate insights are succinct in their brevity and depth... knowing, that you know, that you speak from understanding, leaves me with such a cherished appreciation of your enjoyment at my little spill and at your comments.
Thank you, my dear friend.
Stay warm and keep Angus close... (pet him for me!)
Loads of love your way,
🌹
xo
Re. a love, in quietude.
1st Feb 2021 9:02am
Re: Re. a love, in quietude.
1st Feb 2021 4:25pm
DC,
You're encouragement and generosity leave me blushed in a pinkish tinge... Ty for your thoughts and the list add. Please do continue your visits, as I truly derive a thrill... ;)
Much love and respect,
🌹
xo
You're encouragement and generosity leave me blushed in a pinkish tinge... Ty for your thoughts and the list add. Please do continue your visits, as I truly derive a thrill... ;)
Much love and respect,
🌹
xo
Re. a love, in quietude.
1st Feb 2021 10:38am
Oh the anticipation of it
You hot little minx lol
Great write sweetie
Love and light
Ron x
You hot little minx lol
Great write sweetie
Love and light
Ron x
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Re: Re. a love, in quietude.
1st Feb 2021 4:35pm
My Dear Sir Ron,
Sometimes a lady just needs a little quiet introspection... heh heh heh 😈
I looooove your presence on my page and chuckle @ minx... 100% Bad Blue! (is good Blue!) hahaha
Thank you for all your loveliness, the list add, and your encouragement from afar.
Much love, hugs and kisses,
🌹
xo
-S
Sometimes a lady just needs a little quiet introspection... heh heh heh 😈
I looooove your presence on my page and chuckle @ minx... 100% Bad Blue! (is good Blue!) hahaha
Thank you for all your loveliness, the list add, and your encouragement from afar.
Much love, hugs and kisses,
🌹
xo
-S
Re. a love, in quietude.
1st Feb 2021 3:00pm
Perfect capturing of submissive rapture ... love the thin supple layout ... great erotic write ...
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Re: Re. a love, in quietude.
1st Feb 2021 3:47pm
Ty so much, LilD... I appreciate those kinds words, the list add and as always.
I love your visits, so...
🌹
xo
I love your visits, so...
🌹
xo
Re. a love, in quietude.
1st Feb 2021 4:00pm
Exhilirating burn in ur words, lain perfect in soft submit. I love this! Pleasure to meet u, beautiful Blue♡
much respect,
~d
much respect,
~d
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Re: Re. a love, in quietude.
1st Feb 2021 4:38pm
The pleasure is all mine!
Your sentiments are extremely kind and I'm so glad you enjoyed my little write. I'm appreciative of the list add, the follow and I hope to see you again in the days to come...
Nice meeting you, too ;)
Much love,
🌹
xo
-B
Your sentiments are extremely kind and I'm so glad you enjoyed my little write. I'm appreciative of the list add, the follow and I hope to see you again in the days to come...
Nice meeting you, too ;)
Much love,
🌹
xo
-B
Re. a love, in quietude.
1st Feb 2021 4:55pm
BV, I am absolutely enticed by this highly charged suggestive and imaginative write.
Your creativity in poetry to portray BDSM & the seductive powers of man/woman to penetrate inside a woman's/man's mind is provocative genius.
I can feel her powerlessness to her vulnerable sensual thoughts running savagely wild in her head,
submitting to his demanding silence.
This sexy write is artistic eroticism personified.
Brilliant!
Your creativity in poetry to portray BDSM & the seductive powers of man/woman to penetrate inside a woman's/man's mind is provocative genius.
I can feel her powerlessness to her vulnerable sensual thoughts running savagely wild in her head,
submitting to his demanding silence.
This sexy write is artistic eroticism personified.
Brilliant!
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FF,
You are positively the prescription needed for my battle with self image and non stop questioning of pretty much everything I do, say, look or feel... (lmao.. but no pressure!!) I am utterly ashamed to admit that, because it seems petty and small but there's truth in admitting our smallness, sometimes. All I know is my own heart and it's reinforced by your words and sentiments, almost daily. Trying to convey my thanks properly is difficult, at best... Just know that I really am... always.. and that I don't take any of it for granted.
💜
B
You are positively the prescription needed for my battle with self image and non stop questioning of pretty much everything I do, say, look or feel... (lmao.. but no pressure!!) I am utterly ashamed to admit that, because it seems petty and small but there's truth in admitting our smallness, sometimes. All I know is my own heart and it's reinforced by your words and sentiments, almost daily. Trying to convey my thanks properly is difficult, at best... Just know that I really am... always.. and that I don't take any of it for granted.
💜
B
Re. a love, in quietude.
1st Feb 2021 5:20pm
Your short work captures that bdsm isn't all about the physical; the mental is a vey important key component. The brain is the largest sex organ.
As always, thoughts eloquently expressed by you.
As always, thoughts eloquently expressed by you.
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Re: Re. a love, in quietude.
1st Feb 2021 8:11pm
Leo,
You are positively correct about the brain being the largest sex organ and it's gradual stimulus is imperative...a must.
Your comments and insights are so helpful and appreciated.. I sometimes forget that I'm not the only one who has these particular thoughts or notions. It's nice to be reminded of that
Much love and respect,
🌹
xo
You are positively correct about the brain being the largest sex organ and it's gradual stimulus is imperative...a must.
Your comments and insights are so helpful and appreciated.. I sometimes forget that I'm not the only one who has these particular thoughts or notions. It's nice to be reminded of that
Much love and respect,
🌹
xo
Re. a love, in quietude.
1st Feb 2021 5:45pm
oh yeah! besides the excellent selection of subject matter...i love the simplified form of it. so clear, concise, direct. felt refreshing and easy to read. there is a real power in crystal clear language like an arrow coming straight at you. nice job :).
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Re: Re. a love, in quietude.
1st Feb 2021 7:46pm
Cutting to the chase.... about anticipation... Hee hee hee.. that's some lovely irony.. Mmmm..
Ty My Dear,
Your understandings and thoughts are always valued
🌹
💜
Ty My Dear,
Your understandings and thoughts are always valued
🌹
💜
Re. a love, in quietude.
1st Feb 2021 6:30pm
Your Word play
Is making me feel some type of way
LIKE A TINGLING SENSATION
LIKE
NUMBING ME FOR A FEW SECONDS
Is making me feel some type of way
LIKE A TINGLING SENSATION
LIKE
NUMBING ME FOR A FEW SECONDS
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Re: Re. a love, in quietude.
1st Feb 2021 7:43pm
Re. a love, in quietude.
1st Feb 2021 7:00pm
What can I say that hasn't already been said. You have the gift. Now keep on giving your words to be shared.
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Re. a love, in quietude.
1st Feb 2021 7:49pm
OMG! Off the charts, but what else should we expect from the perfect poet. Oral
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Re: Re. a love, in quietude.
1st Feb 2021 7:52pm
Puhleeeease... lmao.
You're kindness is very lovely, however misguided..
...Nowhere remotely close..
to even the word perfect...
I love seeing you so much
and I thank you for visiting.
THAT'S perfect... your presence
🌹
You're kindness is very lovely, however misguided..
...Nowhere remotely close..
to even the word perfect...
I love seeing you so much
and I thank you for visiting.
THAT'S perfect... your presence
🌹
Re: Re. a love, in quietude.
1st Feb 2021 8:48pm
You are cute and amazing. I choose to see perfection in YOU dear
BLUE:
Brilliant
Loveable
Unlike anyone else
Exciting
Hugs, kisses, and peace.oral
BLUE:
Brilliant
Loveable
Unlike anyone else
Exciting
Hugs, kisses, and peace.oral
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Re: Re. a love, in quietude.
1st Feb 2021 10:23pm
Re. a love, in quietude.
1st Feb 2021 10:33pm
Re. a love, in quietude.
3rd Feb 2021 2:41am
Dang, i had to scroll a mile to leave this comment, and rightly so. Dear Blue, the delicious, titillating tension you build in this gem is intoxicating. And the look last line is 🌋🌋🎆🌟
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Re: Re. a love, in quietude.
3rd Feb 2021 2:43am
Your thoughts are always welcomed and so appreciated... I am grateful your left them and for all your encouragement and support.
💜
xoxo
💜
xoxo
Re. a love, in quietude.
6th Feb 2021 1:01pm
Re: Re. a love, in quietude.
6th Feb 2021 11:42pm
Wow, that was a powerful comment, bk
Letting that one soak in...
Ty for reading
🌹
xo
-returned hugs
Letting that one soak in...
Ty for reading
🌹
xo
-returned hugs
Re. a love, in quietude.
13th Feb 2021 6:47pm
This is one of those pieces where the eroticism just pours out of the page without using any vulgarity, but just plain raw sexual animal magnetism.
Well done.
Well done.
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Re: Re. a love, in quietude.
13th Feb 2021 6:55pm
Rawr...
;)
Ty for reading and that lovely observation, Walter I'm so glad you enjoyed it, much thanks for the list add and your thoughtful support.
so nice seeing you,
🌹
xo
B
;)
Ty for reading and that lovely observation, Walter I'm so glad you enjoyed it, much thanks for the list add and your thoughtful support.
so nice seeing you,
🌹
xo
B
Re. a love, in quietude.
17th Jun 2022 4:55am
Sour sweet is this ah candy of eye candy my eyes embrace of this poems simplality. And Blue Aluv, I'm talking about the taste of the candy in the stores. This poem is so basic simple eight grade learning from my days. U are truly ah wonderful at short simple expression. Ah Captivation.....are these words of thine!
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Re: Re. a love, in quietude.
17th Jun 2022 5:52am
Yes, this sexy, fiery little piece is a favorite for me. Short and to the point but with loads of flavor and spice... I love your visits and the kind words and generous contemplations.
Much obliged.
🌹 B
Much obliged.
🌹 B
Re: Re. a love, in quietude.
17th Jun 2022 7:57am
My sister Anorway Akarina Asalada always said, listen lil female of my understanding. U funny like me. And since no one like your thug ass, always congratulate anybody that u know deserves it. Never back away from making someone smile and we mean it. This piece I just read is truly appetizingly hot. And, thank u for enjoying my visits. U have a real craft of art.
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Re: Re. a love, in quietude.
17th Jun 2022 9:07am
Re: Re. a love, in quietude.
17th Jun 2022 2:14pm
Re. a love, in quietude.
9th Sep 2022 3:34am
In the trembling moment of silence a duality of emotions that tingles like a sunspot in her heart. Darkness enfolds her gaze in an eclipse of heartbeats whose drumbeat is the quiet before the quake. And there lies the truth within that knows no hiding.
XoXo
John
XoXo
John
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Re: Re. a love, in quietude.
9th Sep 2022 4:52am
The power of her driving need is stark truth that echoes even through the silence and becomes the sweetest of tastes on his lips..... of anticipation.
Mmmm... it's ambrosia is delicious.
🌹 💙
-Susan
Mmmm... it's ambrosia is delicious.
🌹 💙
-Susan
Re: Re. a love, in quietude.
9th Sep 2022 5:18am
Oh mercy me! You've awakened this old man's heart! Love what you created here. Ambrosia to sweeten the night.
XoXo
John
XoXo
John
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Re. a love, in quietude.
24th Jul 2023 7:22am
Wow.! This is so fucking good. Sensual with an edge. Erotic and twisted. The key ingredients of kink. Bravo Blue 💎
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Re: Re. a love, in quietude.
24th Jul 2023 12:12pm