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There Goes My Heart
Pitter patter
goes my heart
every time I see you.
Take what belongs
to you - the heart
moving with
every breath
and word spoken
So eloquently.
All I yearned for
was simplicity
and easiness.
The heart never
loses its shape
nor its color
as it never stops
its birdlike or drum
like consistency.
It never stops its
path to freedom.
goes my heart
every time I see you.
Take what belongs
to you - the heart
moving with
every breath
and word spoken
So eloquently.
All I yearned for
was simplicity
and easiness.
The heart never
loses its shape
nor its color
as it never stops
its birdlike or drum
like consistency.
It never stops its
path to freedom.
Published 29th Jan 2021
Author's Note
Entry for Classic Corner Championship: Female Division competition. Poem inspired by Rita Dove’s poem Heart to Heart - (https://www.poetryfoundation.org/poems/51662/heart-to-heart).
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30th Jan 2021 2:47am
30th Jan 2021 10:23am
30th Jan 2021 12:57pm
A wonderful entry into the competition! This is one to be proud of, Elena. And just in time as the deadline approaches swiftly. Good luck in the judging!
2nd Feb 2021 00:51am
There is a delicacy to your crafting, which exudes emotion both powerful and subtle. It has a sense of bittersweet vulnerability that is very engaging. 💖🔥🙏
13th Feb 2021 1:55am
Excellent piece Elena. I really enjoyed that style imitating Rita.
Great work.
Great work.
