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Bringing you Flowers
Friday night
You cook dinner
I'll bring the wine
Flowers too
You cook dinner
I'll bring the wine
Flowers too
Author's Note
Original Painting by Poetspeak
Note: A work in progress
Note: A work in progress
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Re. Bringing you Flowers
29th Jan 2021 11:27pm
Re. Bringing you Flowers
30th Jan 2021 1:15am
Your ''work in progress'' is the perfect expressive art adding to the Essence of ''poetry in motion''... wine 'em, dine 'em and do 'em fine...... love your artistic vibe brother!
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Re. Bringing you Flowers
30th Jan 2021 1:49am
Re. Bringing you Flowers
Anonymous
30th Jan 2021 2:56am
love the painting. Thoughtful expression too
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Re: Re. Bringing you Flowers
30th Jan 2021 3:00am
Many thanks Rachael
Painting not finished, trying to make it come alive
Appreciate the comment
Painting not finished, trying to make it come alive
Appreciate the comment
Re. Bringing you Flowers
30th Jan 2021 3:19am
Red for the wine, please. Maybe for the painting too... or a nice wine-bottle green. 😉 (Don't listen to me, I don't know anything about painting. I think it's lovely though!)
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Re: Re. Bringing you Flowers
30th Jan 2021 3:23am
Teach me about the red wine
All I know is whiskey
Couple of steaks
Let's be bad ....
All I know is whiskey
Couple of steaks
Let's be bad ....
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30th Jan 2021 3:33am
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30th Jan 2021 1:30pm
Re. Bringing you Flowers
30th Jan 2021 3:50am
Dear PS,
This is a wonderful poem and a beautiful painting. I think it’s a wonderful poem because in such a brief write we see an invitation a setting and the characters. The painting is beautiful because I said so. H🌷
This is a wonderful poem and a beautiful painting. I think it’s a wonderful poem because in such a brief write we see an invitation a setting and the characters. The painting is beautiful because I said so. H🌷
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30th Jan 2021 4:45am
Re. Bringing you Flowers
30th Jan 2021 10:23am
such a gentleman - I suppose you would add for now in you ever so slightly sinister way
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Re. Bringing you Flowers
30th Jan 2021 1:29pm
You'll be finding out very soon SO
I know you appreciate a gentleman with a cause .....
I know you appreciate a gentleman with a cause .....
Re. Bringing you Flowers
13th Feb 2021 1:51am
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13th Feb 2021 12:32pm