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The Lost Books
The news announced the sinking ship;
water pushing its metal hull
off a gangplank of the straight
until it crumbled as crystal over rock
Planes spotted flotsam and jetsam
—pinched debris riding a caterpillar
of watery waves inching across the sea—
its waterlogged bite engorged
from strewn pages as leaves
sinking into a survivorless
translucency
Below, a commandeered army
—a delegation of new ghosts
manifesting posthumously
because sometimes Poseidon reads
while sitting peacefully at his desk—
allowing bullet and bomb to rest
Maybe this is why I fear dark water;
the unknown can appear a monster
—a Kraken, released upon humanity
for polluting harmony
We deserve it, so I maintain distance
from cruise lines and large bodies
concealing a congress of secrets—
because I know what's waiting
My father told me once
The ocean, he said, is like Vietnam
—it never releases its dead
once asunder
He'd seen too much. . .
rivers swallowing blood
— their deltas ceaseless
in supply and demand
There's nowhere to hide
he added, bodies become bait
Ah, but words,
he said, words are safe
—having survived centuries
of conflict and death. . .
and most knew the other's
last ones, to be delivered to family
should they be recaptured by dust
It is true, [y]ou will always remember
what you were doing
when it hurts the most;
but, what's worse
is not being able to forget
~
water pushing its metal hull
off a gangplank of the straight
until it crumbled as crystal over rock
Planes spotted flotsam and jetsam
—pinched debris riding a caterpillar
of watery waves inching across the sea—
its waterlogged bite engorged
from strewn pages as leaves
sinking into a survivorless
translucency
Below, a commandeered army
—a delegation of new ghosts
manifesting posthumously
because sometimes Poseidon reads
while sitting peacefully at his desk—
allowing bullet and bomb to rest
Maybe this is why I fear dark water;
the unknown can appear a monster
—a Kraken, released upon humanity
for polluting harmony
We deserve it, so I maintain distance
from cruise lines and large bodies
concealing a congress of secrets—
because I know what's waiting
My father told me once
The ocean, he said, is like Vietnam
—it never releases its dead
once asunder
He'd seen too much. . .
rivers swallowing blood
— their deltas ceaseless
in supply and demand
There's nowhere to hide
he added, bodies become bait
Ah, but words,
he said, words are safe
—having survived centuries
of conflict and death. . .
and most knew the other's
last ones, to be delivered to family
should they be recaptured by dust
It is true, [y]ou will always remember
what you were doing
when it hurts the most;
but, what's worse
is not being able to forget
~
Written by
Ahavati
(Tams)
Published 29th Jan 2021
Author's Note
End Quote Ocean Vuong
CCChampionship: Female Division: https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/forum/competitions/read/11706/
Inspiration: Untitled (Blue, Green, & Brown): oil on canvas: Mark Rothko: 1952
https://www.triquarterly.org/issues/issue-146/untitled-blue-green-brown-oil-canvas-mark-rothko-1952
CCChampionship: Female Division: https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/forum/competitions/read/11706/
Inspiration: Untitled (Blue, Green, & Brown): oil on canvas: Mark Rothko: 1952
https://www.triquarterly.org/issues/issue-146/untitled-blue-green-brown-oil-canvas-mark-rothko-1952
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Re. The Lost Books
30th Jan 2021 2:46am
The sea is very beautiful. Reminds me of the movie Titanic. Great poem. Keep on writing.
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16th Feb 2021 4:31pm
Re. The Lost Books
30th Jan 2021 3:26am
Dear A,
Brilliant write right up and through your closing stanza
“ y]ou will always remember
what you were doing
when it hurts the most;
but, what's worse
is not being able to forget ” oh my god. Jaw drop as i live this daily.
(Bless your dad’s wisdom above that.)
Yes, dark waters are best left for fish. I feel so taken by the end I’m left without the power of speech for the beginning. Awesome piece. H🌷
Brilliant write right up and through your closing stanza
“ y]ou will always remember
what you were doing
when it hurts the most;
but, what's worse
is not being able to forget ” oh my god. Jaw drop as i live this daily.
(Bless your dad’s wisdom above that.)
Yes, dark waters are best left for fish. I feel so taken by the end I’m left without the power of speech for the beginning. Awesome piece. H🌷
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Re: Re. The Lost Books
16th Feb 2021 4:32pm
Thank you, Honoria. I agree dark waters are best left for fish. . .and whatever else inhabitats its depth. xo
Re. The Lost Books
30th Jan 2021 5:29am
If the sea could talk, it would be half our history, or more than half. It is forgetful yet we can't be when it is merciless. I tried to open the picture link but my tablet blocked it for privacy concerns. You illustrate the Vietnam story so well, weaving in your own experience makes it palpable to read..
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16th Feb 2021 4:37pm
I absolutely agree about it being half ( if not more ) of our history, PR. There's an African Proverb I love the most: Until the Lions have their day, history is written by the Hunter. I believe so much of our known history is written by hunters; however, the sea holds the truth as it is.
Thank you so much. Vietnam is one reason I relate to Ocean Vuong so much; it's almost like living my father's experience through his poetry.
Thank you so much. Vietnam is one reason I relate to Ocean Vuong so much; it's almost like living my father's experience through his poetry.
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Anonymous
30th Jan 2021 12:40pm
Reading Vuong's poetry is like learning a lesson the hard way; there's no mercy in it - only blood to wash off later before applying alcohol and bandages on the black and blue areas.
Your poem reminds me of an episode of "Destination Truth" where an underwater paranormal expedition was conducted in an area known as Truk Lagoon claimed several sunken ships during WWII. You could hear phantom engines running in audio recordings, while unexploded bombs provided physical danger.
I like that you used "The Lost Books" as the title, which combined with the imagery, symbolizes to me knowledge escaping our awareness.
"Planes spotted flotsam and jetsam
—pinched debris riding a caterpillar
of watery waves inching across the sea—
its waterlogged bite engorged
from strewn pages as leaves
sinking into a survivorless
translucency"
An amazingly crafty description!
Ocean's are scary enough without being haunted by human artifacts ( and in some cases, bodies ).
Well done!
❤📄
Your poem reminds me of an episode of "Destination Truth" where an underwater paranormal expedition was conducted in an area known as Truk Lagoon claimed several sunken ships during WWII. You could hear phantom engines running in audio recordings, while unexploded bombs provided physical danger.
I like that you used "The Lost Books" as the title, which combined with the imagery, symbolizes to me knowledge escaping our awareness.
"Planes spotted flotsam and jetsam
—pinched debris riding a caterpillar
of watery waves inching across the sea—
its waterlogged bite engorged
from strewn pages as leaves
sinking into a survivorless
translucency"
An amazingly crafty description!
Ocean's are scary enough without being haunted by human artifacts ( and in some cases, bodies ).
Well done!
❤📄
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Re: Re. The Lost Books
16th Feb 2021 4:39pm
I must watch that episode! I loved how you described Vuong's poetry. It is indeed raw and bloody representations of humans metaphor'd in poetry.
Thank you. xo
Thank you. xo
Re. The Lost Books
30th Jan 2021 5:53pm
This is incredible writing, Ahavati! I was coming to quote the same lines as Honoria because they struck me with the same force. This is a powerful collection of words, artfully arranged to deliver its impact precisely. Beautifully done, my friend 💜.
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16th Feb 2021 4:39pm
Re. The Lost Books
31st Jan 2021 11:56am
I can agree with your assessment that the “dark waters” of the ocean can be fearful, but having
been a lover of the ocean in general all my life
I try not let that fear overtake me n I even went on a cruise about this time last year ( pre pandemic) n loved the beauty of it! As usual ur ink holds its own kind of beauty... 😊✌🏾
been a lover of the ocean in general all my life
I try not let that fear overtake me n I even went on a cruise about this time last year ( pre pandemic) n loved the beauty of it! As usual ur ink holds its own kind of beauty... 😊✌🏾
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16th Feb 2021 4:41pm
Thank you, PoetikOne. I do not allow my fears to have complete control. I even became a lifeguard to overcome them. But there is something down there that my inner awareness is aware of regardless of my consciousnes awareness. If it's one thing I've become a master at, it's heeding that inner intuition!
My brother just sent me a link to another cruise yesterday! He's been after me for years!
My brother just sent me a link to another cruise yesterday! He's been after me for years!
Re. The Lost Books
5th Feb 2021 8:27pm
Being afraid of becoming lost and forgotten at sea is why I steer clear of cruise ships and stayed away from joining the navy and instead choosing the army route. my grandfather is a vietnam vet who served in the Marines for 28 years. He wants to live by the water again but has put it off for so many years a part of me wonders if a part of it was harsh memories such as this. Thank you for such a brilliant write, Ahvati.
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Re: Re. The Lost Books
16th Feb 2021 4:43pm
Thank your grandfather for his service, Souljia. It's a tough thing for a soldier. My father told me once, when I asked him what it was like for the war to be over, "The war is never over for a soldier." Those words stuck like glue to my spirit.
Thank you for such kind words. xo
Thank you for such kind words. xo
Re. The Lost Books
7th Feb 2021 10:17pm
Real sense of story here, I think. Very well expressed. I particularly like the closing sentence.
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16th Feb 2021 4:43pm
Re. The Lost Books
13th Feb 2021 1:43am
Simply Fantastic and phenomenal. Story telling with a profound purpose, walking away with a reflective lesson.
Wonderful work Ahavati.
Wonderful work Ahavati.
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16th Feb 2021 4:43pm
Thank you, wally. Vuong is such an inspiration to me. His line breaks are magic.
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14th Feb 2021 00:29am
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