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when a slave sins
isn't this what gags are for?
to silence outbursts from minds without impulse control
what bondage stifles
and discipline rings-out from habit
the ego too
how many times must i learn
to keep the long and windy neck of my inner striving beak
those fingertips of more
expressing the pit of desires
like peeping birds from days of hunger
quiet in their darkness
how ive tried to thwart them
but when asked to speak
my breath is clear
till there's silence
and the tsunami of shame
descends
gripping tightly
in that tender place
where kneeling was born
to silence outbursts from minds without impulse control
what bondage stifles
and discipline rings-out from habit
the ego too
how many times must i learn
to keep the long and windy neck of my inner striving beak
those fingertips of more
expressing the pit of desires
like peeping birds from days of hunger
quiet in their darkness
how ive tried to thwart them
but when asked to speak
my breath is clear
till there's silence
and the tsunami of shame
descends
gripping tightly
in that tender place
where kneeling was born
Published 27th Jan 2021
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27th Jan 2021 12:43pm
Stellar submissive write, my friend.
From the very first question to the brevity of those last few lines, that sear JUST right.... brilliantly penned... a new favorite...(aren't I always saying that??!.. I think I just love them all!)
;)
Much love,
🌹
B
From the very first question to the brevity of those last few lines, that sear JUST right.... brilliantly penned... a new favorite...(aren't I always saying that??!.. I think I just love them all!)
;)
Much love,
🌹
B
27th Jan 2021 12:47pm
you are an emblem of support! thank you Bluevelvet - i appreciate your kind words and your attention.
