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Tragic
Please listen while reading to feel the urgent irony and as always thanks for looking♥️ https://youtube.com/watch?v=f6ktM-CRPlo
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Desperate for change
we have to believe
anything is possible
and make it so!
Democrat, Republican
why should it matter
our planet is dying
stung by that reality
we still aren’t doing enough
we have selfishly shackled
our children to that destiny
a world inhospitable to
all humans
and It won’t matter who
has the most money
we’ll all be dead
🧍🏻♀️🌎🧍🏿♂️
Desperate for change
we have to believe
anything is possible
and make it so!
Democrat, Republican
why should it matter
our planet is dying
stung by that reality
we still aren’t doing enough
we have selfishly shackled
our children to that destiny
a world inhospitable to
all humans
and It won’t matter who
has the most money
we’ll all be dead
Written by
Zazzles
(Broomie)
Published 26th Jan 2021
| Edited 7th Aug 2022
Author's Note
It hurts me to my very being, knowing one day our children will be suffocating in search for clean air to breathe, Imagine that....
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Re. Tragic
26th Jan 2021 9:42pm
That is why climate change is such an important issue, Jackie. Those who deny it for profit are focused on, well, profit. This will leave our grandchildren in a world they may not be readily able to breathe in.
Very sobering write, my friend.
Very sobering write, my friend.
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Re: Re. Tragic
27th Jan 2021 1:32am
Hi Ava, yes it’s so sad to think what’s to come for our children’s future .
Hugs
Love Jackie ♥️
Hugs
Love Jackie ♥️
Re. Tragic
Our mother earth speaks clearly with every year that goes by... I am hoping that this STOPS being such a partisan issue. It's a HUMAN one. You're absolutely right. This piece is profound and meaningful, my lovely friend
Well done you ;)
Much love,
🌹
💜🌈💜
xoxo
B
Well done you ;)
Much love,
🌹
💜🌈💜
xoxo
B
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Re: Re. Tragic
27th Jan 2021 1:35am
Oh man this song brought me to this piece .
I worry for our future not just our children but our planet animals and plants our trees and all the species .. it’s tragic .
Thanks for the comments and the list
Susan🌹
Love Jackie xoxo ♥️
I worry for our future not just our children but our planet animals and plants our trees and all the species .. it’s tragic .
Thanks for the comments and the list
Susan🌹
Love Jackie xoxo ♥️
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Re: Re. Tragic
27th Jan 2021 2:59am
No way! I love this version so much more !
And yes it’s no coincidence it’s sad and true
Thanks for looking relic :)
Zazzles
And yes it’s no coincidence it’s sad and true
Thanks for looking relic :)
Zazzles
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Re: Re. Tragic
No negative nonsense allowed I’ll have a read maybe not tonight, but hang it up and leave it up :)
Zazzles ☺️
Zazzles ☺️
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Re. Tragic
27th Jan 2021 3:27am
A weighty and philosophical submission that reminds us that we are all children of mother earth...a truly meaningful write Jackie!
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Re: Re. Tragic
27th Jan 2021 3:33am
I get like this :/ it is disheartening and I have to say something. I do try and stay current on ways to do my part.. thanks for taking the time to comment and
thanks for the list Ron hope your well my friend
Jackie 🤗
thanks for the list Ron hope your well my friend
Jackie 🤗
Re. Tragic
27th Jan 2021 4:06pm
I feel this write completely, Jackie. So many issues are being politicized and used to launch careers, but not much action happening. I join those who hope for a future where we understand our impact on the world around us and where we come back to a place of honoring the space that allows us to exist at all. Beautifully written and thought-provoking work 💜
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Re: Re. Tragic
31st Jan 2021 1:25pm
Yes I agree, Sadly our President ( s ) will
Never do what is needed in 4 years .
Sadly everyone is against each other and that will never change . I worry for our children and their future on earth. It looks murky and all kinds of
messed up.
Thanks for looking and for the list Luna
Hugsss
Jackie 💜
Never do what is needed in 4 years .
Sadly everyone is against each other and that will never change . I worry for our children and their future on earth. It looks murky and all kinds of
messed up.
Thanks for looking and for the list Luna
Hugsss
Jackie 💜
Re. Tragic
28th Jan 2021 5:21am
The tragedy is that it is in our hands to turn this catastrophe around. But denial has ruled the powers that be. But a new generation is coming and they will have say. Your poem and the accompanying music set the atmosphere for a poem of a planet on the brink of despair but not irreversible.
Xo
Your brother in ink,
John
Xo
Your brother in ink,
John
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Re: Re. Tragic
31st Jan 2021 4:04pm
Hi John, yes it really is tragic, people just cannot rise above the “ smog” and see they as billionaires can make the change and lead the way .. at least start a revolution!
Love
Jackie 🤗
Love
Jackie 🤗
Re. Tragic
28th Jan 2021 4:35pm
Some real and demanding things to think about, covered perfectly in your always great style. Hugs and peace, oral
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Re: Re. Tragic
31st Jan 2021 4:05pm
Hi and hugs Oralizer,
You are too kind :) it’s real and it’s deep
Thanks for looking :)
Zazzles 🤗
You are too kind :) it’s real and it’s deep
Thanks for looking :)
Zazzles 🤗
Re. Tragic
28th Jan 2021 10:26pm
Perfect title for this, my darlin sister... you touch my heartstrings with the pic alone, and did wonderful with bringing this important topic to us with ur usual POW of honesty to back it up. Mother Earth sure be cleanin house these days, in an effort to heal some, least I'm trying to keep faith in that.. but as you say. we all need to do our part.
much lovins, all ways,
T
much lovins, all ways,
T
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Re: Re. Tragic
31st Jan 2021 4:08pm
Hey hey hey! Dark my sister is back! Yes the further looks bleak and uncertain I do fear for our children
Good to see you back darling , hope your feeling well
Loves you mucho♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️🥰🤗😘
Your sister
Jackie 😘
Good to see you back darling , hope your feeling well
Loves you mucho♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️🥰🤗😘
Your sister
Jackie 😘
Re. Tragic
29th Jan 2021 9:29pm
Re: Re. Tragic
31st Jan 2021 5:56pm
I certainly will my good friend hope you are well
Huggies 🤗🤗🌹
Thanks for looking Daniel ☺️
Always
Jackie ♥️
Huggies 🤗🤗🌹
Thanks for looking Daniel ☺️
Always
Jackie ♥️
Re. Tragic
31st Jan 2021 00:28am
Dear J,
I concur with everything written above and really couldn’t add anything more. I think your poem lays it out there brilliantly. If we’re not going to be aware and proactive to take care of this world what’s the point and how selfish for the next generations. I love your spirit in this write and so appreciate the wake up call for one and all. H🌷
I concur with everything written above and really couldn’t add anything more. I think your poem lays it out there brilliantly. If we’re not going to be aware and proactive to take care of this world what’s the point and how selfish for the next generations. I love your spirit in this write and so appreciate the wake up call for one and all. H🌷
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Re: Re. Tragic
31st Jan 2021 6:02pm
Hello beautiful woman , I am an emotional being I seem to be and feel connected to everything earthen
I feel pain when tress get destroyed when our animals are killed for sport, or a bug who happens to land in the wrong spot gets killed, with the exceptions of mosquitoes fleas ticks and flies I set all other bugs free 😂 even nasty little armored stinkbugs hee hee ! I just open the window and flick them outside ya’know,
I just can’t kill something just cause I can 🤷🏻♀️
Happy you came to visit
Be safe luv
Jackie xo 🤗♥️🌹
I feel pain when tress get destroyed when our animals are killed for sport, or a bug who happens to land in the wrong spot gets killed, with the exceptions of mosquitoes fleas ticks and flies I set all other bugs free 😂 even nasty little armored stinkbugs hee hee ! I just open the window and flick them outside ya’know,
I just can’t kill something just cause I can 🤷🏻♀️
Happy you came to visit
Be safe luv
Jackie xo 🤗♥️🌹