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SEXY FUN WITH HOMOPHONES AND PUNCTUATION
Did the earth move for you two?
Did the earth move for you, too?
She likes to do the 'koala bear'.
She likes to do the 'koala' bare.
She bore me a son
She bore me, a son.
She was transfixed by my size.
She was transfixed by my sighs.
He would get hard, then we would make love.
He would get hard then, we would make love.
Did the earth move for you, too?
She likes to do the 'koala bear'.
She likes to do the 'koala' bare.
She bore me a son
She bore me, a son.
She was transfixed by my size.
She was transfixed by my sighs.
He would get hard, then we would make love.
He would get hard then, we would make love.
Published 20th Jan 2021
Author's Note
Each pair of lines sounds the same but savour how selective punctuation and spelling change can alter the sense.
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20th Jan 2021 6:24am
fun read! Brought to mind junior high English with Ms.Faulkner, the niece of the writer, William.
20th Jan 2021 6:45am
20th Jan 2021 12:45pm
20th Jan 2021 5:27pm
Almost as much fun as elementary school when words were new and fresh and slightly confusing
But cool cuz I was learning new stuff to show my parents and grands when I got home every day
Thank You, Brother Solomon
But cool cuz I was learning new stuff to show my parents and grands when I got home every day
Thank You, Brother Solomon
3rd Jun 2023 8:26am
Presumably not the same kind of sentences shown here? I could imagine their shocked reception if they were!
20th Jan 2021 8:09pm
