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You Love Me ?
You Asked Me
The other night
You asked me if I loved you
Or you told me
YOU LOVE ME
Surprised
I didn't quite answer
Possibly changed the subject
The other night
You asked me if I loved you
Or you told me
YOU LOVE ME
Surprised
I didn't quite answer
Possibly changed the subject
Author's Note
Women and Men
Dynamics of Love
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Dynamics of Love
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Re. You Love Me ?
19th Jan 2021 4:21pm
Or you told me YOU LOVE ME. Damn right, accept it. :p
You really captured a lot in this one; how we can drift apart, stop listening, and live in denial as the bonds of love unravel, accepting a mundane existence.
You really captured a lot in this one; how we can drift apart, stop listening, and live in denial as the bonds of love unravel, accepting a mundane existence.
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Re: Re. You Love Me ?
19th Jan 2021 4:25pm
Universal communication in the depths of feeling
Your comment exhibits that very nature of things ...
Thanks for getting it
X
Your comment exhibits that very nature of things ...
Thanks for getting it
X
Re. You Love Me ?
19th Jan 2021 5:07pm
....lots of depth here Poet. Double edged sword as this write resonates to me. Saying you love someone is beautiful and you should mean it or like me you get cut from the other side where you do something stupid like believe the lie. I guess I am a broken ''don't tell me'', ''show me person'', Now......Good Poetry to me is thought provoking and emotional. You struck hard with this de'ja vu terse verse.
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Re. You Love Me ?
The word love is open to interpretation depending on when it is said and whose saying it ....
Powder Keg if you will ...
Thx for your story and take
Always appreciate your comments Feet
Powder Keg if you will ...
Thx for your story and take
Always appreciate your comments Feet
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- Edited 6th Dec 2022 00:45am
19th Jan 2021 5:58pm
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Re: Re. You Love Me ?
19th Jan 2021 7:13pm
Love quotient # 9
Remember that song ??
Might be before your time
Yeah, love is the truest form of emotion out there but it doesn’t come free ..
Thx R
Remember that song ??
Might be before your time
Yeah, love is the truest form of emotion out there but it doesn’t come free ..
Thx R
Anonymous
- Edited 6th Dec 2022 00:45am
19th Jan 2021 7:44pm
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Re. You Love Me ?
Anonymous
20th Jan 2021 8:54pm
I've been the confessor of love with the at very same response. I knew that going into it though. I made such a big deal out of telling them that they thought I was going to say I was pregnant lol
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Re: Re. You Love Me ?
When you feel it you just gotta go for it, damn the torpedoes and all that
Great comment
Thanks Rachael
Great comment
Thanks Rachael
Re. You Love Me ?
21st Jan 2021 7:55am
After all, actions do speak louder. Unless it's deer in headlights, otherwise gotta be quick.
I like it.
I like it.
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Re: Re. You Love Me ?
21st Jan 2021 12:56pm