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CREEPY BEAUTIFUL

Screaming howling wind
Makes bottlebrush its puppet�
Scratches the window

Written by SatInUGal

(Kumar)

Published 19th Jan 2021

#haiku #nature #scary #trees #wind

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Re. CREEPY BEAUTIFUL

Anonymous

19th Jan 2021 4:06pm

I can clearly see that from your description. Nicely done.
May I use the last line?

19th Jan 2021 4:14pm

Thank you. Curious how, but sure!

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Anonymous

19th Jan 2021 4:22pm

Thanks. I'll let you know if I come up with anything. :)

Re. CREEPY BEAUTIFUL

19th Jan 2021 4:27pm

Shit. Love this!

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- Edited 19th Jan 2021 8:04pm

19th Jan 2021 8:03pm

In real time it was eerie as hell! Thanks!

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Re. CREEPY BEAUTIFUL

19th Jan 2021 7:52pm

love it so.
x

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19th Jan 2021 8:03pm

Hi blue! Glad :D

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