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INSPIRED BY ON THE PROWL
We're naked like day we were born,
window curtains are left undrawn
as sun shines through, lighting up skins;
we let no darkness cover sins.
Throned in the middle of the couch
I am when you upon me crouch.
Unlike a king I am disrobed,
my crowned sceptre you have tongue probed.
Your hips astride mine rear and buck,
while on a bra-less breast I suck
teasing nipple with teeth and tongue.
Your dark head hair is backwards flung.
Chin upended, face to ceiling,
giggling, ecstatical squealing
comes from between your ruby lips
while I bathe in ooze twixt your hips.
Inside you I'm northward pointing;
shouldn't find me disappointing.
I'm enjoying how eagerly
your nether mouth contracts round me.
While I am eating you alive,
into you I more deeply drive
my tool, piercing you to your womb,
until the orgasmic kaboom!
window curtains are left undrawn
as sun shines through, lighting up skins;
we let no darkness cover sins.
Throned in the middle of the couch
I am when you upon me crouch.
Unlike a king I am disrobed,
my crowned sceptre you have tongue probed.
Your hips astride mine rear and buck,
while on a bra-less breast I suck
teasing nipple with teeth and tongue.
Your dark head hair is backwards flung.
Chin upended, face to ceiling,
giggling, ecstatical squealing
comes from between your ruby lips
while I bathe in ooze twixt your hips.
Inside you I'm northward pointing;
shouldn't find me disappointing.
I'm enjoying how eagerly
your nether mouth contracts round me.
While I am eating you alive,
into you I more deeply drive
my tool, piercing you to your womb,
until the orgasmic kaboom!
Published 18th Jan 2021
Author's Note
Inspired by picture accompanying Relic-54's On The Prowl.
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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You definitely did your inspiration proud. You brought the picture into words for our great enjoyment.
Suggestion for my favorite verse.. the flow (no pun intended), would be better for me if you used the full word, betwixt, instead of the contraction twixt.
While I bathe in ooze betwixt your hips
Suggestion for my favorite verse.. the flow (no pun intended), would be better for me if you used the full word, betwixt, instead of the contraction twixt.
While I bathe in ooze betwixt your hips
18th Jan 2021 6:14pm
Thank you. I contracted the word, in my early morning pre-going to work wisdom, to fit the syllabic arrangment of the lines.
18th Jan 2021 2:12pm
Mm.. this is simply amazing my wise poet... Relic-54 should be very proud of your remastered version. As I will always tell you, your craft is timeless... being you were my first poetic muse
18th Jan 2021 3:30pm
18th Jan 2021 6:16pm
18th Jan 2021 8:28pm
Curtains undrawn is interesting, suggesting proud lovemaking or even, 'look at me, look what I got!' ;-)
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- Edited 6th Dec 2022 00:45am
18th Jan 2021 8:58pm
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